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An 8 Stage Essence Immortal has fallen to a Divine Tribulation while trying to ascend to a higher stage due to an unstable foundation. His soul is mysteriously transported to a young boy's body named Jake. Unknowingly, he arrived in a not so ordinary universe. What will this new Jake bring to this universe? will he seek power? money? or beauty?
NOTE: THIS IS AN AU. A BUNCH OF THINGS WILL BE CHANGED. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING RELATED TO HARRY POTTER. EVERYTHING IS CREDITED TO THE ORIGINAL AUTHOR. ALSO I DO NOT OWN THE COVER IMAGE. WHOEVER OWN IT PLEASE COMMENT BELOW IF YOU WANT IT TO BE REMOVED. I GOT IT RANDOMLY ON GOOGLE.

PS: This is my first time writing.. please go easy ok.. don't be so savage lol
Also English is not my first language.. sooo..

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nonamecodex

As the saying goes.. "The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence". BUT remember, that 'greener grass' belongs to me. anyway here is the usual 'shameless' review. i am currently writing this story. As of now, there is only two chapters for testing the water.. cuzzz you know.. the first time writing and all.. enjoy... Also please be gentle senpai :D

5yr
ดู 6 การตอบกลับ
WealthyRaccoon

Not a hp story, effectively a full blown cultivation novel. I think my biggest issue is the clear intention to leave the HP world behind, ascending to a higher realm and what not. This is fine, but if you intended to throw away 90 percent of the HP world there's little reason to use it to begin with, and the narrative and structure of the story would be far better suited by a standard, cut and paste world of cultivation. Finally there's the massive over reliance on mythological figures to flesh out the story, at this point the author has yet to actually create anything, taking a Hindu mythos and forcing it to have aggressive sex with anything it can get it's claws on.

5yr
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DjJokerStyle

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5yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Florian1990

Till now its pretty interesting. But i hope he will go now in volume 2 more for the magic instead the cultivation path. Author, keep up the good work and release faster. ;-)

5yr
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TianXia

Well, this is a new way of fanfic. Instead of normal reincarnation, this is a western and eastern novel combine together, i have not read it yet, but i will give you a high review for this new fanfic

5yr
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RazyeL
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5yr
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DaoIsLife

Don't drop it don't drop it don't drop it$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$&&$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$&&&&&&&&&$))bridgfifgkdbdufhekrvfjkdrgrjduggirvrudhdoejfvidbrrbrodbdirhfohroffhfoekhdkfjfibrofbdofbfkrjdjdvrjhr i fucking hate 140

5yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Hidase

Unique and interesting in it's own way ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ ヽ(ヅ)ノ

5yr
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Teddy_Diaz

Love...i😍😍😍😍t..the story zz so damn good.....👍👍👍👍👍👍the characters are fabulous....😚😚😚😚its not like other novels.....totally love it....😊😊😊😊😊😊...

5yr
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Sai_Das
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Man this story is actually really interesting and I’m looking forward to reading this. I hope you don’t ruin it by making a massive harem like I see in most fanfics// maybe 2 would be fine? Anyway the writing quality is decent and so far updates are regular, hope you can keep up the pacing. Also is he going to be a condescending prick? That would kind of suck... but great story!

5yr
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EuMsm
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........................................................................................................................Very..interesting........................................................................................................................

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5yr
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Mumyum

Sooooooooooooooo....well?...is this novel any good????it seems to have so very many good reviews🤔🤔🤔🤔the summary seems to make this story to be interesting😁😁😁😁😁maybe I'll give this a read once I've completed my other stories😘😘😘I am very interested... Ookay😳😳😳

5yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Kurama_is_tsundere

This is a review to encourage the author I haven't read the novel yet but I liked the concept of an immortal ending up in harry potter universe.

5yr
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Dio99
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5yr
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David_Sadam

I very like this story..........................don't drop this ................... ................and more chapter........................................................

5yr
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EijiSeishuu

shameless review coming........................ . ................................................................................................................................................

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Pavan1234

Good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
frangky
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Well I think mc to rush for him to update the power. I think it will better to consolidate the realm first and move on to the next one in soul path. Also I think he need to have a knowledge before he is doing with his body. Well I still fine this novel quite good. Good luck

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BangBangNeo

Nicely written novel tou got there. I just wish your update chapters are steady in the future and not dropping it suddenly. Your story development is steady, not like other half ass fanfiction. The character design and world development is also good. Just don't OP Jake too much, and let this story flow steadily. Good luck!

5yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
TheFluffyMan

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5yr
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