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I pulled an Elvis… not in a cool ‘I have an amazing singing voice and I’m suave as fuck’ kind of way. No sir not me. I pulled an Elvis in the most embarrassing of ways. I somehow died while sitting on a toilet dropping the fattest deuce. Now I’ve got letters floating in front of me telling me I died. That’s not why I’m angry though, I’m not even mad at the embarrassing way I died I’m mad at the fact that ‘You Died’ was in Comic Sans. Fucking Comic Sans!
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je suis pret a payer quelqu'un qui ecrit une histoire sur Underworld/dracula untold. je suis pret a payer quelqu'un qui ecrit une histoire sur Underworld/dracula untold
it was going well despite the system problems but i couldn't continue after he decided to tell her about the system and reincarnation... everyone knows that a secret you keep to yourself..the mc has become a simp through and through...
don't drop this and whens the next chapter it been a week until the last chapter
Ngl, I thought this might be a trash story. I'm glad I was wrong. I can't wait for more.
I don't give it a star because there is very little story on Underworld unfortunately. But there are a lot of stupid mistakes, the fact that the hero is nerfed almost every chapter, because he becomes too strong. But the pinnacle is in chapter 6, while for 5 chapters we are told that he is immune to money, for the sake of the story which has no reason to be in truth, since he just has to want to be a hybrid for his system to help him. We are told that money is critical for him and Selene is forced to save him like with Michael in the movie
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