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Traveling through the Martial Universe, Lin Yan immediately went to the small pond behind the Lin family to find the ancestral stone, and wanted to replace it with Lin Dong.
Too bad he was late, the ancestral stone had already been taken by Lin Dong. Just when he thought he could only practice step by step, a system voice suddenly sounded.
【Ding! Congratulations to the host, the login system has been successfully unlocked. ]
[Succeeded in entering Secret Cave behind the Lin family and got the Yaolao ring. ]
Since then, Lin Yan has continued to enter and get various rewards from other planes.
Lin Yan: "I won't be able to become a Martial Ancestor, but the Flame Emperor seems to have a chance?"
Then the question arose, who was better at the same time as the Flame Emperor and Martial Ancestor?
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Original Author: Kuchiki what to eat today
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i like this novel: : i l o v e Y O U B R O XAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Its hard to find a good martial universe fanfic, it gets annoying when they keep praising mc while all he does is stay in newbie town forever and cultivate while i don't mind that but the praise and daily life and interaction is so bland and tasteless even the topic they talk about are mostly cringe af 3 stars writing quality as its readable for a translated novel1 stars story is meh1 stars for character 2 stars for update4 stars for World background its martial universe so it gets high stars automatically for mr
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Haven't read it yet but I have a problem with the concept of this novel, BBTH and Martial Universe take place in the same verse, the mcs of both novel have meet each other eventually, so there is gonna be two Flame Emperors in the same verse
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It's a good fanfic so far, of course if it has good editors, it would be much better but it's still readble.I hope the mc will face some set backs because he's mostly slapping some other people down.It need some adjustment in battle powerBecause the mc should easily fight people above his realm but he uses everything just to fight someone at same level, even though he wins easily its still annoying a lil.And please explain more clearly about new skill he gets and if they are original or from novels since it gets irritating
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