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Yan podi a 35 year old gets reincarnated into Douluo Dalu continent as a grandson of Yang wudi of Breaking clan,a subordinate clan of Clear Sky Sect.5 years before the plot
Tang San follower: No
Martial Soul Hall Follower:No
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MC is a COMPLETE pushover. Trust me, I am not talking about MC listening to or doing things for his family. That is normal imo. But this guys is getting pushed around by EVERYONE. From complete strangers to kids, anyone can come around and treat this MC like their dog.
Hi i am just translating this by correcting some mistakes, and it's actually a pretty good Douluo Dalu fanfic. If you want get access to advanced chapters you can join Patreon
Having a spear martial soul is very rare in soul land fics so I fully recommend this one which is like a breath of fresh air. But the problem is mc helps his family way too much which is very irritating. The mc's sister feels like a npc who only receives help from him without giving anything in return which makes the plot more unbearable. On the other hand, it has many many interesting developments which I won't spoil for you but it will makes it worth your time. By the way guys can you tell me your favourite martial soul in soul land? I like the Angel Martial Soul and Clear Sky Hammer martial soul what about you.
For around 180 chapters or so. It's a pretty good novel. The premise is great. Our mc has the foreknowledge about the world and seizes all opportunities. However, after reading past that point, it's getting more and more obvious that there are glaring holes in the plot. It's like the author wants the mc to be the underdog, but the mc's foreknowledge makes that impossible, so they need to actively sabotage him. He constantly goes from being "super smart" to making subzero IQ decisions when it matters. >!Absorbing whale glue -> intentionally absorbing weaker rings Getting ALL of the spirit herbs -> giving all of them away getting spirit bones -> giving them away getting divine inheritance items -> giving them away< It's getting tedious to read this. Especially, since his sister is getting everything he's discarding. It could be justified, if we got to know her as a person, but we're not. We know nothing about this character whatsoever. There is nothing to empathize about, I couldn't care less about her.
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can Anyone tell me its Raw(Chinese) name?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw
Yeah it is good but still he is too weak and novel update stability is not good and protagonist is bit weak good development and still has to develop
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10/10 read so far this is nice :P [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I read this work on a Chinese site and I can say that it is very high quality. Of course, not without flaws. One commentator earlier mentioned the disproportionately unbalanced development of the family and literally feeding his sister with a golden spoon, although the main character gave a lot and gave up a lot for them. There are several poisonous moments that you can skip and read on. According to all the canons of Chinese authors, the plot is quite stretched out, although I must say that if San Gege or Yu xiao Pig are killed too early, the plot loses its meaning and such works are quickly abandoned. Therefore, sometimes for the plot of two bastards, an artificial "buff" is added. About the pros. The main character is smart and cautious. Not a typical main character with plot armor. The world is big and quite alive and not everything revolves around a few people. I recommend trying to read this fic.
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as seasoned mtl reader(you could tell by my grammar XD) this is the best doulou fic out there. i just wish the author elaborated on the changes that was brought by the mc's actions. the ending feel rush but overall the story is good. Plus the translation is awesome too I wish he can pick up some coiling dragon fanfic to translate XD
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The story had good potential but the MC is so blind and selfish that it loses its appeal very quickly, the summary makes a point of saying not a Tang San follower but fails to mention they demonize Tang San and everyone around him after stealing all the opportunities that were meant for San then bends over and takes it from Soul Hall like good little followers leaving everyone else out in the cold to suffer.
Recommend me More like this anti hero/evil/villain soul land novels ................... ... ................................................
The story is good, but from the RAWs, it is clear that the story is trying to prolong the story by making the MC less decisive.
I've read most of this novel's RAW chapters. The author wanted to extend the novel's runtime, so the MC wasn't as decisive as he should've been.
I read the raws, it has like 360 chapters and I read 250. I found too many things frustrating so I dropped it. It's got many interesting things, and some takes and developments I really liked. The mc's twin spirits, cautious nature, and extremely powerful development, to name some. Then there's the development of the mc's family. It was kind of ridiculous, compared to the amount of nerfs the mc willingly forced upon himself, his family was getting stronger at a ridiculous speed, far beyond what their talent should allow. Not to mention the amount of benefits the mc gave up to give to them. The worst case is the oc, his younger sister, who's the reason why I dropped it. For real, she got way too much. She basically got handed innate full spirit power, a ridiculously high talent. She got soul bones, immortal herbs, and other things left and right with basically no character traits. Poseidon was forced to choose her over mc by Asura and that made no sense considering Poseidon chose Tang San in the original even though Asura was against it. Afterwards, her strength development is far too fast, getting benefits one after another, levels higher than even the original Tang San. The last straw was Skydream. A million year old soul ring, a ridiculously strong second martial spirit. Basically gifted to her. Granted, mc was already fully developed by then and getting another martial spirit would be unnecessary, but he was the one supposed to get Skydream. He basically forced Skydream Iceworm to sacrifice to his sister to make her strong enough to become Poseidon. After he had a whole chapter of convincing her that she needed to get stronger on her own and he couldn't help. Yeah, so I just dropped.
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