Evil Shota in One Piece

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dark1234

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You did pretty good ngl if this was your first novel ever you did have honestly good writing in terms of detailing the smut scenes the only real problems I would say is the mc didn't really progress anywhere from Imu's castle but it's a great read don't listen to the mfs saying no continue this shit the only thing you gotta do is make some fights and establish concrete goals and writing for the mc and the novel is gonna be even better.