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Drift: The Destiny of a Celestial Designer

Fantasy 8 ตอน 19.7K จำนวนคนดู
นักเขียน: Adino

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Bright Caben was born in the most prominent Celestial Designer family. He was very talented and became the pride of the family at a very young age. On his 10th birthday, his Great Grandfather White gifted him a Necklace and then disappeared from the world. His fate changed with that Necklace. He is no longer a genius who can cultivate peacefully. Even people with poor aptitudes started to take over him in cultivation.
Bright could only curse his Great Grand Pa day and night for his misfortune. But Bright's mood always becomes slightly better whenever he reads the first line of his Great Grand Pa's last letter, " Heaven and Hell shall never judge you. You are the sole master of your fate."

General Audiences

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Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

3รีวิว

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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Adino
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Hello readers, I am the author of this novel. This is my first story. Gods won the war against Devils, only to lose everything they had. The story is about M.C trying to restore the glory of Gods. If you like the novel, add it to your collection. Chapters may be short, but I promise you that they will be interesting. If you have any suggestions, please leave them in the comments. And don't forget to rate my work. Thank you!

4yr
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_Ram_
LV 11 Badge

A good entrance effort to writing an interesting novel for your first book. There are solid talents that I can see in the dialogues too. Fast-paced scenes can be toned down a few notches and terms introduction could be inserted once in a while though rather than as often. Overall, this novel could be a hidden gem through time once Author keeps on writing! Good work and good luck! ;)

4yr
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bandi_akhil

As this is your first story you took splendid story and well delivered story and good characters. Introduction to Lord Cooper character is so good. Waiting for next part. All the best.

4yr
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นักเขียน Adino