DC: THE INVINCIBLE IRON MAN

LV 5

EvergreenGaming

major plot holes so far dr fate and the ancient one don't exist, the JSA was never made and WW2 wasn't as bad to require it, hydra doesn't exist the hand doesn't exist, Savage doesn't exist, magic if it exists is very minor at best, Shield/Sword doesn't exist, and what does exist is sometimes minor to heavy AU, few grammar mistakes and the romance is kinda forced

LV 14

Sn1z

Honestly I stopped reading when I saw there was 0 spacing, the text is bolded black which makes it so you can barely see unless you have Light Mode on, everything is just jumbled togather so you can’t tell the difference between a new event or old, and wether it’s one person talking or the other