Jon Kent: Made Of Steel(Superboy Self Insert)

LV 4

Chaos_Azatoth

The world background is 5/5 on the account that DC has wide multiverse irrespective of the small chapters available. The Updating stability is 5/5, the same goes for Story development, since it's still too early to tell considering the few chapters. The problem comes from the character design and writing quality which is 1/5 and 3/5 respectively. I understand that writing is hard, but there are some things that should be avoided especially for an author that has written multiple books that are good compared to this in my opinion. Now the grammar is not why the writing quality is low, actually the grammar is adequate, so is the dialogue, paragraph spacing and so on which is actually why it's up to 3/5. The problem comes from the character design which lowers the writing quality. The MC was stated to be an adult with a job before he died. I'm also assuming he had a pretty normal childhood since it wasn't stated otherwise. The problem stems from the fact that despite all this, the MC still acts like a child despite his origin. It has always been a sore spot for me when the Isekai'd MC is so accepting of his new parents. I don't mean disrespecting them, cause that's stupid, but putting them in the same pedestal as his original parents, especially when he had a good childhood. If it was a bad childhood then that's different. But that I can tolerate, what I can't phantom is the childish behavior of the MC despite him commenting multiple times that he was an adult in his previous life. He acts like he's starved for affection or something. Well this my opinion on the novel, honestly I don't think I can go on, maybe the MC will get better later on, but I think that first impressions matter.

LV 13

WillMissQ

It’s honestly really disappointing. You had a very good concept and you failed miserably at executing it. The premise of your story is that someone died and was reincarnated as the son of Superman. That was your premise. Solid right? Here’s where you failed. He doesn’t act like he’s reincarnated at all. He doesn’t act older than his age. He has the emotional range of a toddler. The only knowledge of the universe that he’s in, that he uses is fucking identifying people’s faces and names to their comic book counterpart. That’s it. Oh wow, this is Dick Grayson. He’s Robin. That’s it. That’s all he uses his knowledge for. It’s really sad. I’m not saying he should go and get a fucking lantern ring or something like that. No I’m saying he doesn’t try and better himself with the knowledge that he has or try and interfere with the plot lines when he sees them happening. Also, how the fuck do you forget that your dad is Superman? He has a panic attack because his heat vision occurs and then he forgets that his dad could take his heat vision easily.

LV 4

Nexluz

All these reviews suck, the story sucks

LV 14

tactless91

Pretty good so far just curious about Jon being gay in canon will the mc be as well, will he be straight, or will mc stay away from romance completely… im fine with whatever happens i just want to know what to expect later on you know 😆

LV 14

Shady_Emad_

The story is great, I love the interaction between the characters, and the grammar is all right. maybe the MC is a little childish sometimes but who isn't so that's not big of a problem to me. In the end, keep up the good work Author-san. and I hope you keep getting better. ❤️

LV 1

fayyad_shade

The only downside to this novel is that it does not have enough chapters. The characters are written well and the story development is exceptional. I can't wait for the next chapter.

LV 11

Bashir_Jajere

this is a very good story please don't drop

LV 12

KnightofRoundTable

Greatness awaits! Give this story a try, you won’t be disappointed. Looking forward to more chapters. Patreon is legit not like some of the other authors out there.

LV 4

Kakarot_D_Uchiha

plz update Spiderman 🙏😞🙏😞🙏😞🙏🙏😞😞🙏🙏🙏😞🙏😞😞😞😞😞🙏

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AllenDragneel

Thanks for the story..................................... This story is really interesting and good....................................................................

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KENZ_OO_YT

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sinigami

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LV 1

fayyad_shade

At the start it was was vexing as the characters were different form the norm version. As you continue reading it improves a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.