Chat group: Everyone has a dream.

LV 4

Gynysy_Enso_1378

ive accidently thought review and comment would be the same apoligies my review in on the chapter 2 comment section of this novel the reason as to why three of them are at four stars are because there is to little evidence for it to become a 5 star so please kindly do what you do on this novel and have fun with it

LV 3

Lord_Harven

Edit1: the translation and terminology got a little bit better than raw ai translation but there still many terminologies you can improve and their talk sometimes became akward idk if its a problem in the translation or its the og author's fault

LV 2

ANIMESHNIK_TOPCHIK

Well, I can say the following about this fanfic: 1) This fanfic fully reveals all the characters, their shortcomings and incentives for improving/eliminating these shortcomings. 2) The volume and quality of the fanfic is excellent, I would compare it equally in my list of serious novels/fanfics that I like, such as "Tree of Aeons" and "Eternal Samsara". 3) It is worth noting that although the speed of the story is a little slow due to the number of words and the sharpening of attention to some incidents, but thanks to this, the author reveals the depth of the characters and the world background very well. 4) Honestly, the author analyzed and explained the various elements of powers/bloodlines, etc. well, so that even an ignorant person could understand how the power system works and how to become stronger. The main thing is that there is no instant strengthening of the heroes right from the beginning of the fanfic or an invitation of new chat members. 5) Author, I hope you can work out a good system for inviting chat participants (and of course, controlling their number) and if there will be any missions from the system itself (I generally hope that the participants themselves will become catalysts for various missions like saving Alabama, because of which the system can reward them, otherwise missions from the system itself like saving and inviting a participant from a new world will look so-so.) 6) It would be cool if there was some kind of item for jumping into a random world, in which chat participants do not necessarily have to add a person from this world, but use the world as a resource. 7) It is good that the fanfic maintains a balance of attention between communication in the chat and the outside world. 8) Everyday life in the fanfic is very good, now I will eagerly await the unfolding of future conflicts, battles (possibly wars) and logical overcoming of one's limits. 9) Keep it up author, the main thing is not to stand out and consistently post chapters (^.^)

LV 4

VenerableZay

a hassle to read, genderbend rimuru, names transitioning ever so often, a tl work or sum .

LV 4

sage5156

honestly, the best chat group fic there is.

LV 2

Battledroid

Fanfiction is moving slowly but surely. Each chapter is long and full of details about G and his interactions with other characters. I would like to note the author's excellent knowledge of the described anime and his ability to convey to us the very essence of what is happening.

LV 1

DaoistpcwvIa

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LV 1

LarchOut

All good. I mean the story flowes quite good and interesting. Up to 15 ch I did not face any problems or wierd moments) MC is not a pervent boy who looking for s*x, he more like experienced person with unbrekabke look at life and cynicism for sure.

LV 4

Theory18

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Tokinada_dao_hood

Absulte master piece the guy who wrote it was a genuis

LV 1

Pyerre_Poredoso

I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?............. ...................I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?

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DaoistpcwvIa

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LV 1

Zenon_Tashibana

When a new chapter comes out, the story is too good. The chapters are long, the character development is good, and I haven't found any inconsistencies in the story. But the story progresses very slowly, in contrast to its long chapters, the explanations are too direct, the informative dialogues feel a bit rushed. I would like the MC to stumble a bit more with things (not that he gets defeated or anything), like an experiment goes wrong, or say something that hurts someone's feelings unintentionally, or something like that, it's not for the drama or anything, but the MC feels a bit like a Gary Stu character. (Sorry if it's not understood, I'm using Google Translate, and I'm just writing how I thought the story was, I liked it.)

LV 4

FallenInnocence

I very much enjoy my time reading it. In the beginning, translation was a bit rough but has improved tremendously since.

LV 11

Dagda

a great fiction. The characters are well described and act well. The potential is high, I only took away some points because I would like more updates. I hope for the growth of some characters, especially Rias.

LV 4

ChristmasLink

an amazing read love the way things are going and last chapter i read about rias and artorias getting ripped was amazing and honestly learned alot about Morgan that I did not know. the only issue is the updating frequency. but you can not Rush these things so it is manageable

LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

The story progressed excellently with long chapters and updates not daily but in a row without leaving much pause It is seen a lot in the chapters in the chato, more than anything it is not the typical story where it is only a narrative of what the characters do, but there is more dialogue

LV 1

first_rko

Hello could you send the link of the raw chinese novel of this fanfic, thanks!!! ......................................................................

LV 1

Javier_Graneros

Buen comienzo, le daré una oportunidad, la historia parece prometedora., son solo 4 capítulos hasta ahora y espero que sigas subiendo más.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Joshua_Johnson_4664

I like the story so far I do think it has a lot of potential