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Edit1: the translation and terminology got a little bit better than raw ai translation but there still many terminologies you can improve and their talk sometimes became akward idk if its a problem in the translation or its the og author's fault
Well, I can say the following about this fanfic: 1) This fanfic fully reveals all the characters, their shortcomings and incentives for improving/eliminating these shortcomings. 2) The volume and quality of the fanfic is excellent, I would compare it equally in my list of serious novels/fanfics that I like, such as "Tree of Aeons" and "Eternal Samsara". 3) It is worth noting that although the speed of the story is a little slow due to the number of words and the sharpening of attention to some incidents, but thanks to this, the author reveals the depth of the characters and the world background very well. 4) Honestly, the author analyzed and explained the various elements of powers/bloodlines, etc. well, so that even an ignorant person could understand how the power system works and how to become stronger. The main thing is that there is no instant strengthening of the heroes right from the beginning of the fanfic or an invitation of new chat members. 5) Author, I hope you can work out a good system for inviting chat participants (and of course, controlling their number) and if there will be any missions from the system itself (I generally hope that the participants themselves will become catalysts for various missions like saving Alabama, because of which the system can reward them, otherwise missions from the system itself like saving and inviting a participant from a new world will look so-so.) 6) It would be cool if there was some kind of item for jumping into a random world, in which chat participants do not necessarily have to add a person from this world, but use the world as a resource. 7) It is good that the fanfic maintains a balance of attention between communication in the chat and the outside world. 8) Everyday life in the fanfic is very good, now I will eagerly await the unfolding of future conflicts, battles (possibly wars) and logical overcoming of one's limits. 9) Keep it up author, the main thing is not to stand out and consistently post chapters (^.^)
an amazing read love the way things are going and last chapter i read about rias and artorias getting ripped was amazing and honestly learned alot about Morgan that I did not know. the only issue is the updating frequency. but you can not Rush these things so it is manageable
The story progressed excellently with long chapters and updates not daily but in a row without leaving much pause It is seen a lot in the chapters in the chato, more than anything it is not the typical story where it is only a narrative of what the characters do, but there is more dialogue
Hello could you send the link of the raw chinese novel of this fanfic, thanks!!! ......................................................................
Buen comienzo, le daré una oportunidad, la historia parece prometedora., son solo 4 capítulos hasta ahora y espero que sigas subiendo más.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?............. ...................I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?
a hassle to read, genderbend rimuru, names transitioning ever so often, a tl work or sum .
ive accidently thought review and comment would be the same apoligies my review in on the chapter 2 comment section of this novel the reason as to why three of them are at four stars are because there is to little evidence for it to become a 5 star so please kindly do what you do on this novel and have fun with it
Edit1: the translation and terminology got a little bit better than raw ai translation but there still many terminologies you can improve and their talk sometimes became akward idk if its a problem in the translation or its the og author's fault
Well, I can say the following about this fanfic: 1) This fanfic fully reveals all the characters, their shortcomings and incentives for improving/eliminating these shortcomings. 2) The volume and quality of the fanfic is excellent, I would compare it equally in my list of serious novels/fanfics that I like, such as "Tree of Aeons" and "Eternal Samsara". 3) It is worth noting that although the speed of the story is a little slow due to the number of words and the sharpening of attention to some incidents, but thanks to this, the author reveals the depth of the characters and the world background very well. 4) Honestly, the author analyzed and explained the various elements of powers/bloodlines, etc. well, so that even an ignorant person could understand how the power system works and how to become stronger. The main thing is that there is no instant strengthening of the heroes right from the beginning of the fanfic or an invitation of new chat members. 5) Author, I hope you can work out a good system for inviting chat participants (and of course, controlling their number) and if there will be any missions from the system itself (I generally hope that the participants themselves will become catalysts for various missions like saving Alabama, because of which the system can reward them, otherwise missions from the system itself like saving and inviting a participant from a new world will look so-so.) 6) It would be cool if there was some kind of item for jumping into a random world, in which chat participants do not necessarily have to add a person from this world, but use the world as a resource. 7) It is good that the fanfic maintains a balance of attention between communication in the chat and the outside world. 8) Everyday life in the fanfic is very good, now I will eagerly await the unfolding of future conflicts, battles (possibly wars) and logical overcoming of one's limits. 9) Keep it up author, the main thing is not to stand out and consistently post chapters (^.^)
an amazing read love the way things are going and last chapter i read about rias and artorias getting ripped was amazing and honestly learned alot about Morgan that I did not know. the only issue is the updating frequency. but you can not Rush these things so it is manageable
The story progressed excellently with long chapters and updates not daily but in a row without leaving much pause It is seen a lot in the chapters in the chato, more than anything it is not the typical story where it is only a narrative of what the characters do, but there is more dialogue
Hello could you send the link of the raw chinese novel of this fanfic, thanks!!! ......................................................................
Buen comienzo, le daré una oportunidad, la historia parece prometedora., son solo 4 capítulos hasta ahora y espero que sigas subiendo más.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?............. ...................I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?I liked the beginning, I hope you don't abandon the fic/ which Chinese fic was it based on?
a hassle to read, genderbend rimuru, names transitioning ever so often, a tl work or sum .
ive accidently thought review and comment would be the same apoligies my review in on the chapter 2 comment section of this novel the reason as to why three of them are at four stars are because there is to little evidence for it to become a 5 star so please kindly do what you do on this novel and have fun with it