Carnal Evolution

LV 2

SHADOW_AND_LIGHT

hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please

LV 13

LordSputnik

Overall, this is another gene power-leveling fantasy with all of the tropes you'd expect. Expect monsters, cultivation of sorts, and the standard weak-to-strong story with the standard slums start. It isn't bad, but some word choices make it read awkward. Is this due to a mistranslation possibly? I don't know. Unfortunately, I can't give it a full review since it isn't exactly long enough yet, but I am interested in where this is going. Keep it up, author, and consider using Grammarly or something similar to catch the many word choice mistakes.