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Set on another universe.
A kid named Will Glover is invited to a summer trip by Benita Tennyson: that he grew up with in Madison Elementary school.
What can go wrong?
I like to say Ben 10 is not owned by me.
Some characters and events is made by me. Enjoy.
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สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
6รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
I’m curious as to main characters powers as looking at the chapter names it’s obvious that he doesn’t get the Omnitrix(also obvious if you know anything about Ben Ten) so I do wonder what the mc can do to be actually useful
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Oiga señro autor me gusta su historia pero como podra ver soy un habla hispana por lo tanto le agradeceria si pudiera cambiar el nombre del Mc porque will tiene distintos significados y en el traductor enves de poner "will salta para esquibar un laser" me pone " salvagemente squivar laser un" el nombre will no me agrada mucho asique yo creeo que arthur queda mejor no? Y otro problema las intercciones de los personaje y como cambian de ecenario demasiado rapido porque en una parte yo leia q Gwen estaba con el abuelo para que en un descuido Gwen ya esta luchando contra robots o sintiendoce celosa de "ben" A y hablando de ben puedes cambiar su nombre? Porque yo creo que PENNY (diminutivo de penelope) suena mejor a BENNY (diminutibo de 💇) es por eso que pennelope suena mejor porque digamos el abuelo se pone serio no le puede decir benny porque eso le quitaria seriedad al asunto yo opino y con su permiso que hay que cambiar nombres No porque esta mal sino por cosas de estetica
it's an amazing fanfic and very engaging, I hope that this doesn't drop, so keep up the good work, author.😎👍
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