An Anomaly

LV 4

DRAGONSLAYER

Please continue this novel

LV 5

Evil_For_the_WIN

This is a good read. It's not amazing especially at the start but it gets better with times. Advice: Don't try to binge read it. Take time to let your rage flow. Anyways, the concept is pretty original (for me) and I recommend it.

LV 10

Zhanye

It looks like has been written by a kid. Short and dumb dialogs that I can't keep reading. ...........................................................

LV 2

Derpyst

I mean, its alright. Definitely interesting though. Would i recommend it? Sure. Is it a top tier fanfic? No. But its still good. So yeah you should probably try it out for yourself.

LV 14

Passing_Through

Its nice nice nice But its more perfect if you write using " for speech and ' for thought...need a stable update stability... And please describe everyone appearance, face, emotion, backstory, no matter immportant or not at least once...but overall its good for dragon ball fanfic! Its rare for someone to make dragon ball fanfic nowdays... 😉😊

LV 4

Ryan_Nguyen_4639

Good.

LV 5

ZAHID_HASAN

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LV 5

Daoist721221

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