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Ian transmigrated into the world of Harry Potter and became Harry Potter's younger brother.

As soon as he opened his eyes, a green light rushed towards his face!

At the critical moment of life and death, Ian bound himself to the Succubus System, and from then on began his journey of breaking up couples.

Hermione: They are both from pure-blood families in the wizarding world yet Ian is more handsome than Ron. I choose Ian!

Ginny: Both are saviors, but Ian is more handsome and stronger than Harry. I choose Ian!

Fleur: Ian saved my sister, so it's normal for me to choose him, right?

Harry & Ron & Bill: NO!!!

Ian: Sorry, guys but it's getting late. Girls let's go to my bedroom!
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#This is a Translation!#
Original MTL: Hogwarts: I am the savior, and I am breaking up couples!

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Azdal
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Male version of a Succubus is an Incubus.

3mth
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LiveandLove

No slapping, arrogance, humiliation or bias of the author I don't know if the MC is an antihero or a villain but his acting skills are top notch lol

3mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
JasonReilly05

First chapter and I'm already hooked on the story. 💯💯💯💯💯

3mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
KuNaLsAmA

Came because of the title but I'm hooked 😂

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
No_1_islookin

ok, this is not a smut. It's a Harry Potter twin little brother. Tge story has a wonderful plot that stays close to cannon but with the writer's on quorks. His system as the Mc says himself " has to check on it to make sure it's not dead". For the most part up the broom class it's been mc x Hermione.

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
JamesJollyBond

Another good hp fic. added to library! 😉

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2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Shafeen

I was here to criticize it for $@xulizing but I really like the story and it's cute and not pe*vert@d😍😍😍[img=update].................................

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
A_wall1206

out of curiosity did you steal this from another author or did you simply take parts from another fic and not give credit?

2mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Zaelum

Good enough. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Wuelo
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Great ff. It's a smooth reading, plot is slow paced and well written. I can't wait for more chapters

2mth
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MilkLover

When I first approached this story, I did so with no expectations whatsoever. I thought it would be just another passing hp fic, something to occupy my time. However, I quickly found myself completely captivated. This is one of those rare stories that really draws you in and holds your attention. Please upload more!!

2mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
The_divine_Demon

Thank god a good some what devious mc instead of a beta🫶

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ItzWaqaz

keep it up ,keep updating We r waiting ..

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
taking_cat

I fking like this MC[img=recommend]...........................................................................................................................

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Chandan001

Good translation, good dialogues, good humor, has Cassandra Vole as a love interest. Nice book overall[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
pEmKayS
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I'm really shocked, but despite the description, it turned out to be a really good Harry Potter fanfic. It is still noticeable that the author is Chinese, but there are absolutely no complaints about the quality of the translation.

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Shurin
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im a bit conflicted with this one tbh. pros: theres a lot of dialogue and things happening, despite the pace actually being slow since at almost 40 theyre not even halfway through the first year. This makes it easy, fun and light to read. cons: the characters. Hermione, steadfast, levelheaded and cool has been reduced mostly to a smart little girl with a big crush as her only personality trait. Harry is outshined in everything by MC and has also been dumbed down it feels. He doesn't feel cool or strong like the original but just kind of... there? As for MC, he's fine but it doesnt feel very satisfying when he ets stronger. Bad at quidditch? Put points into it and now youre amazing! I hope to see him actually struggle unless ofc this is what author want. As for his personality idk. It'd be fun to see him say and do some unhinged and slytherin-like things sometimes, or do more "evil" acts, since despite him having some out of pocket thoughts once in a while, his actions and words are certainly that of a golden boy

1mth
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Ichika_the_best

I love the story BUT I hate the fact the MC is a simp for his girls.

1mth
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ek_tha_tiger

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9d
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Salihm

This is an interesting story. Seeing how these characters interact and get along is really fun. However, I hope the author stops portraying Harry as the goofy older brother, living in the shadow of his super-special younger sibling. That kind of approach is dull. It would be much more interesting if each brother had their own strengths and weaknesses, complementing each other. After all, at the end of the story, what defeated young Tom was Lily's love. It would be fascinating to see that love represented again through the twins, rather than a conclusion where absolute power is the only deciding factor. Of course, this is just my opinion, but this approach would certainly make the story far more engaging.

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Chapter 65: (65) Room of Requirement 1 days ago

จำนวน 1

  1. 1
    (1) Another Child Of Prophecy? 3 months ago
  2. 2
    (2) You Are A Wizard, Ian! 3 months ago
  3. 3
    (3) Ian Sheds Three Tears! 3 months ago
  4. 4
    (4) Diagon Alley And Gringotts 3 months ago
  5. 5
    (5) The Potter Family Vault 3 months ago
  6. 6
    (6) Ian Potter's Wand 3 months ago
  7. 7
    (7) Unruly Themis 3 months ago
  8. 8
    (8) A Snake As A Gift 3 months ago
  9. 9
    (9) Platform 9¾ And Malfoy 3 months ago
  10. 10
    (10) Harry Potter 3 months ago
  11. 11
    (11) Playing With Peter Pettigrew 3 months ago
  12. 12
    (12) Cassandra Vole 3 months ago
  13. 13
    (13) Sorting Ceremony 3 months ago
  14. 14
    (14) Now Dumbledore Will Get Paranoid! 3 months ago
  15. 15
    (15) Cassandra: You are cuter than your brother! 3 months ago
  16. 16
    (16) It’s Slytherin, After All. 2 months ago
  17. 17
    (17) A Slytherin First-Year Prefect 2 months ago
  18. 18
    (18) Blushing Miss Vole 2 months ago
  19. 19
    (19) Transfiguration 2 months ago
  20. 20
    (20) Match To Needle 2 months ago
  21. 21
    (21) Crazy Bonus Points! 2 months ago
  22. 22
    (22) He and Tom are really alike! 2 months ago
  23. 23
    (23) Double Standard Snape 2 months ago
  24. 24
    (24) Ian's Dilemma 2 months ago
  25. 25
    (25) Thank Merlin! 2 months ago
  26. 26
    (26) Harry Being Targated 2 months ago
  27. 27
    (27) First Flying Lesson 2 months ago
  28. 28
    (28) Neville's Remembrall 2 months ago
  29. 29
    (29) Crazy Broomstick 2 months ago
  30. 30
    (30) Angry Lioness 2 months ago
  31. 31
    (31) Joining the Quidditch Team 2 months ago
  32. 32
    (32) The Trophy Room 2 months ago
  33. 33
    (33) He is not a saint! 1 months ago
  34. 34
    (34) Voldemort's Plan 1 months ago
  35. 35
    (35) Wood Vs Flint 1 months ago
  36. 36
    (36) Nimbus 2000 1 months ago
  37. 37
    (37) Peeves the Poltergeist 1 months ago
  38. 38
    (38) The Three-Headed Dog 1 months ago
  39. 39
    (39) Herbology Class 1 months ago
  40. 40
    (40) Ingredients For Felix Felicis 1 months ago
  41. 41
    (41) Wingardium Leviosa 1 months ago
  42. 42
    (42) Family Fortune 1 months ago
  43. 43
    (43) Halloween Feast 1 months ago
  44. 44
    (44) The Bathroom And The Troll 1 months ago
  45. 45
    (45) If It Were Me... 1 months ago
  46. 46
    (46) Cassandra Has A Long Future Ahead Of Her 1 months ago
  47. 47
    (47) Quidditch Match 1 months ago
  48. 48
    (48) Nicolas Flamel 25 days ago
  49. 49
    (49) Christmas Eve 22 days ago
  50. 50
    (50) Christmas Gifts 18 days ago
  51. 51
    (51) Old Potter House 15 days ago
  52. 52
    (52) Head Of The Potter Family 14 days ago
  53. 53
    (53) Money Calculations And Back To Hogwarts 13 days ago
  54. 54
    (54) The Potter Brothers' Adventure In The Restricted Area 13 days ago
  55. 55
    (55) The Mirror Of Erised 11 days ago
  56. 56
    (56) Dragon Egg 9 days ago
  57. 57
    (57) Norwegian Ridgeback 8 days ago
  58. 58
    (58) Sending Norbert Away, Getting Caught 8 days ago
  59. 59
    (59) The Isolated Gryffindor Trio 8 days ago
  60. 60
    (60) Isabella Swan!? 7 days ago
  61. 61
    (61) System! Stop Playing! 7 days ago
  62. 62
    (62) First Meeting With Voldemort 5 days ago
  63. 63
    (63) Firenze And The Centaurs 3 days ago
  64. 64
    (64) Ancient Magic: Resurrection Spell 1 days ago
  65. 65
    (65) Room of Requirement 1 days ago
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