11รีวิว
3.62
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
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Chinese wish fulfillment garbage on steroids. This shit sucks bro. I feel sorry for the author who is translating it. He has to read the chinese version first then translate it into english amd by that read this shit twice. Bro just drop it for your own sake. This story doesnt deserve no love.
Solid four stars even though there are a lot of things to not like the story. Author deliberately makes up nonsense while knowing it can't be possible - for excample meeting brook in west blue or becoming the leader of revolutionary army (Dragon bends the knee to a 12 year old). Bruh, you can do better than that.
A one piece fanfic that doesn't feel like one piece. Feels more like some Chinese wish fulfillment fantasy than anything. Let me just list a few instances that completely turned me off: --The mc as a 12 year old asks monkey d dragon whether he started the revolutionary army or not and Dragon doesn't even question it. --The first time he sees Ace and the rest, he asks him his age and ace replies. Then mc persuades them to let him be their "big bro" and threatens them with Dadan. Here, Ace doesn't even question how this random kid knows his name and how he knows Dadan and also how does this kid know their dream of going out to sea(????) Bro...make it make sense. No offense to the uploader but this kinda sucks. 😭😭😭
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Chinese wish fulfillment garbage on steroids. This shit sucks bro. I feel sorry for the author who is translating it. He has to read the chinese version first then translate it into english amd by that read this shit twice. Bro just drop it for your own sake. This story doesnt deserve no love.
Solid four stars even though there are a lot of things to not like the story. Author deliberately makes up nonsense while knowing it can't be possible - for excample meeting brook in west blue or becoming the leader of revolutionary army (Dragon bends the knee to a 12 year old). Bruh, you can do better than that.
A one piece fanfic that doesn't feel like one piece. Feels more like some Chinese wish fulfillment fantasy than anything. Let me just list a few instances that completely turned me off: --The mc as a 12 year old asks monkey d dragon whether he started the revolutionary army or not and Dragon doesn't even question it. --The first time he sees Ace and the rest, he asks him his age and ace replies. Then mc persuades them to let him be their "big bro" and threatens them with Dadan. Here, Ace doesn't even question how this random kid knows his name and how he knows Dadan and also how does this kid know their dream of going out to sea(????) Bro...make it make sense. No offense to the uploader but this kinda sucks. 😭😭😭
Very interesting ................................................. .................................................. ...................................
It is a great translation but it is pretty much a Chinese wish fulfilment story