3รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
The story itself is not bad and relatively readable, but there are too many semantic repetitions in the chapters, too many blurring /additions in the text, as a result, the story in the chapter stands on the same thought / place.
It honestly needs work. The mc rarely interacts with other characters. I don't think as of chapter 12 he has directly interacted with Felicity, Thea, any of the Lances or really had a conversation with Malcom. Marcus mostly does stuff behind the scenes which is fine I guess but he could feel more a part of the story as opposed to a borderline omnipotent god who occasionally meddles with the storyline.
Really awful nanny diaries. Repetition plagued the chapters. MC is as interesting as roadside stone. MC interaction with other characters is virtually zero.
The story itself is not bad and relatively readable, but there are too many semantic repetitions in the chapters, too many blurring /additions in the text, as a result, the story in the chapter stands on the same thought / place.
It honestly needs work. The mc rarely interacts with other characters. I don't think as of chapter 12 he has directly interacted with Felicity, Thea, any of the Lances or really had a conversation with Malcom. Marcus mostly does stuff behind the scenes which is fine I guess but he could feel more a part of the story as opposed to a borderline omnipotent god who occasionally meddles with the storyline.
Really awful nanny diaries. Repetition plagued the chapters. MC is as interesting as roadside stone. MC interaction with other characters is virtually zero.