MrCarter48

male LV 14

just writing for the ss just writing for the ss just writing for the ss just writing for the ss

2017-07-03 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United States
ป้าย 15

Moments 20
MrCarter48
MrCarter48
11 days ago
Posted

The author kills the story with his comedy. Lmao, the fact this is tagged as "dark" when half the chapters are just 1000 word jokes is just sad. He kills character development to be "funny." The number of times he has done the stupid trope of the character zoning out while in his own head is obscene. The overwhelming majority of character interactions are with the idiot in his head, while characters in the real world get like 2 lines every couple of chapters. But my biggest gripe is that he isn't getting better as a writer, which also means the mc can't grow. Sure, Orion gets stronger, but he feels just as childish in year 3 as he did in year 1. Many of these issues become more prevalent and frequent over time, not less. Overall, it's an interesting world he's built ruined for cheap laughs, and that makes me sad.

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
12 days ago
Replied to Keiou_Owlo

Idk if it is different on other phones, but on mine, you just have to highlight the paragraph by pressing on the text, and it gives a comment option

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
17 days ago
Commented

Lol so you don't want your son to be friends with a highly capable vassal? Also, you are implying that wolves are willing to fight dragons with their friends why would that type of person fear a lion? There is no point or benefit to having your son, the future king, be at odds with Robb.

But the next generation not only won't become friends, they might even become enemies because of this. Isn't that exactly what we want to see?"

Game of Thrones: The Rise of the Northern Wolf

Game of Thrones: The Rise of the Northern Wolf

Book&Literature · DontBother

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
27 days ago
Posted

It honestly needs work. The mc rarely interacts with other characters. I don't think as of chapter 12 he has directly interacted with Felicity, Thea, any of the Lances or really had a conversation with Malcom. Marcus mostly does stuff behind the scenes which is fine I guess but he could feel more a part of the story as opposed to a borderline omnipotent god who occasionally meddles with the storyline.

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
1 months ago
Commented

Quick math on the Netflix shares. He owns roughly 13-14 million shares. The stock splits in 2015 at a 7:1 ratio. So, if he holds until today, he would have 90+ million shares at a price of almost 764 dollars per share. Thats almost 69 billion dollars.

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
2 months ago
Replied to Time_Dragonlord

Chapter 3 his conversation with Rosmerta he mentions being "only 15"

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
2 months ago
Commented

Lol imagine throwing away your only friend who just saved your life. Just because of something a low iq redhead said. If they were eleven I'd be more forgiving but at 15 forget her and this nonsense; dude has actual important things to worry about.

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
4 months ago
Commented

My brother if it was easy she wouldn't be asking you to do it. "Hey there is a guy who can permanently kill my very powerful, probably as powerful as you, immortal children. Kill him for me?" "Easy"

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"An easy request. It shall be done, you have the oath of Odin Borson."

Competent Poseidon

Competent Poseidon

Anime & Comics · DaoistqZxYMH

MrCarter48
MrCarter48
4 months ago
Commented

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MrCarter48
MrCarter48
4 months ago
Commented

Rimworld has a skill system from 1 to 20 and these are the basic comparisons for each level. If anyone wants a reference.

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Third was how the max level cap he could reach, according to the system, was level 20.

Rise To Stardom

Rise To Stardom

Urban · Caeruleum_