Another Life In Naruto

LV 5

Rak

man this story has potential, i like how it is going, the mc is too much hard working to reach his max strength because he knows the world and there is a system assigning him yearly quests to make sure he doesnt get stuck, but its too much AI written with low editing. so so many times same things are repeated again, whole chapters repeated with slight change, could be because of prompt changes. i believe with 1 level of editing (10 mins per chapter), this story can reach at least 80% of its potential, author has good ideas which he is able to put on paper with help of AI but AI has its limits. ill ask everyone to give it a try if only because of how much author is able to churn out in past week. in 1 week of writing, mc has reached age 8 almost chunin

LV 2

FadeKnight

An excellent story. The main character is interesting. The setting and time frame are interesting, but what really sets the story apart from others is the growth. The progression is perfect not once did I think it was going too fast or slow. If I had one problem with the story, it is that it’s missing an X factor. There’s no wrench in any plans, there’s no surprises. Just sustainable marginal growth. But that’s to be expected in a safe environment like kohana with no war. But I assume that will change in the upcoming chapters. Here is five stars to keep you going.

LV 3

DiperZ

Aburrido, regular, repetitivo, muchas descripciones innecesarias, todos los capitulos te describe lo que hace el mc y sinceramente muy expansivo para mí gusto, no estoy leyendo una historia sino un manual que no se disfruta

LV 3

Ryder_Black

great fanfiction, I really like it, I hope it continues and gets to the end.

LV 4

Jose_Joby

In my personal opinion this story is very well written far better than alot of other stories this managed to keep my adhd ahh to binge read it the system in the story barely plays a major role but it blends well in the background, i personally would recommend it

LV 3

greyrolph

An overall amusing novel with a good level of emotional development based on the characters and their feelings. 😋😋

Please finish this work I really love it and I’m desperate to read more please.😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺. I love it so much you are so intriguing and new and so detailed. The characters have not seen before were made and Naruto was the best. The training regiment was so detailed mysterious and magnificent. I’m honestly blown away. I read works like this but you take the cupcake. Hahaha

LV 3

Faisal_Galvez

Tbh, I don't find anything lacking. It's a very good Naruto fic imho, kindly try.

LV 2

y07823890

Nice fanfic, However the ages of the characters are kinda hard to keep up with as they differ from the source material.

LV 13

HotWetDream

so far, the story is interesting, the only thing that ruins this is the writing style and how the plot and flow of the story is handled, it become too boring to read. Very poor character design, not much is explained, too plain, could do more work world background: gave 3stars cuz of Naruto background, otherwise I'll give 2stars, lack of description of place. ruins the whole mood of story

LV 4

Humbuub

bad writing, overly redundant. I've read "this is just the beginning" at the end of so many chapters. XD

LV 3

grambit

I am in chapter ten already and i gotta say it's actually good. It is ok for me that the author uses AI as long as it's only used for assistance rather than using AI to generate stories. This is my first review so far so tune in for more reviews in the future

LV 4

Ansesh_Bundela

very good story with potential ,i hope author provides fast update

LV 1

Drus998

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LV 5

AndreiMihai

one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!one of the best!

LV 3

orichi

author, please keep this rate of updates, please don't drop it suddenly. It has a lot of potential

LV 4

Kido_TO

Superb Amazing fanfic of Naruto Superb Best update speed Good superb story Superb Weak to Strong MC GENIUS MC SYSTEM SUPERB INTELLIGENT MC LOVELY SHIP(SPOILER) ALL ROUNDED GENIUS CIVILIAN SUPERB HARDWORKING MC WITH NO STUPID DECISION, ALL WISE DECISION SUPERB WORLD BACKGROUND SUPERB fanfic

LV 14

Trappininahoodie

Such a good fanfic. I’v grown tired of the fast paced overpowered mc fanfics. The middle of volume one dragged slightly but reminds me of the wind calamity. Hopefully the author will continue this story. Don’t know why it doesn’t have better reviews . I’l continue to throw my daily power stones at it.

LV 15

Tempest03

is there any romance in the Web novel or at least something in there?

LV 4

Henrique_Furtado

The way you use a system to help, and not give everyting to the MC is incredible