Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

LV 3

Mr_mysterio

After the DxD story, this is the lowest it has fallen, the protagonist's personality is no longer charismatic, it is insufferable, the interactions only focus on whether she is a woman, the protagonist drools if he is a man , kisses the protagonist's feet, there is no longer any coercion or anything. It is surprising to see how this author remained silent about this.

LV 4

PinGoth

Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more.

LV 4

cult

Honest review. I mean, it's a akikan novel, and he never tried to change his style of writing. MC is actually not a villain this time but just "trying" to be the good guy. Again, sometimes the logic MC uses doesn't make sense, just like any other akikan novel. And I don't doubt that his whole personality will change through out the whole novel several times. At Least this novel isn't as slow paced as the other ones. I do like that he is experiencing with his system and the DNA stuff, that makes it interesting, even more interesting than the other systems. Very bad writing(as per usual if akikan), As it is written like it for 10 year olds. Can't really say much as it's only in it's early chapters. But I hope he doesn't ruin the story like he usually does in his other novels or uses no logic for the characters. It's a entertaining novel to read but also a bad one. [4/30/2024]

LV 5

InfinityAndBeyond

A new Akikan's fanfic i hope this is good like others. He has the ability to obtain the dna of animals to strengthen himself and can also transform into that animal as he wish. This ability have a good potential, imagine being able to obtain the dna of other races or dna of mythical and magical creatures. Also imagine if he can get a dna of eldritch creatures

LV 4

Lord_GRIM

Akikan's I just hope this fanfic will have long chapters and I hope the overall quality of the story in the future remains good, as usual. And congratulations on your new fanfic.😁😁😁😁😁

LV 1

00Mark

Very annoying reading experience thanks to the childishly petty mc, the girls instantly falling in love with him just by meeting him and the overall disrespect shown by the mc, oh and the novel needs some proof-reading. The dna system is broken but it's also really interesting.

LV 1

Daoisth7cZGj

it feels like all his characters are the same person just with different names, I feel sorry for those whom he adds to his fanfiction, he completely kills their character, brain and uniqueness

LV 4

steam_7042

The writing is pretty good but all your main characters act like someone that has gotten a lobotomy.

LV 10

Luizz_Ricardo

the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.

LV 3

Arthuremberheart

5B without a doubt rag, why? Since this is Akikan Bruh, there's no need to question the fanfic. But what I regret is the lack of 18+ scenes in each fanfic

LV 13

Dr_Chad

I've waited for this guy's new fanfic to be released for months now. And thank the heavens he made a new one.

LV 5

PlasticTango

Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also

LV 3

ANelite

Another great story from akikan, let's just hope this will also be better and not like riser one 😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 13

ChaosFenrir

Finally, The new series from Akikan [img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Keist

Akikan's new work 😋 I hope this time it will be even more exciting, because MC will travel to many worlds. For now I will give this much first.

LV 3

TERMINALLY_ILL

Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time

LV 2

Mortem_Ouroboros

Not my type of reading, the MC is evil and a sociopath or something like that I'm on chapter 2 so it may change but from my point of view I doubt it. Thanks for the effort author.