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oh my God! what an amazing novel like seriously this one just made it into my top three of all time, I'm a huge fanfic nerd but I don't have anything to complain about I really enjoy OP characters so keep it rocking my friend and give me more more more. I can't wait keep up the hard work my friend God bless you.
Writing quality is perfect. I really do like how it goes. MC is a smart one not a naive idiot like most of the MCU fictions. He has 3 step process for ppl who like to stir trouble and i loved it. Not a psychopaths killing left and right. Good work author-san best of luck.
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This FF is amazing one of my favorites, not only is the story great so is the world building, even the harem and I don’t normally like harems. I love how everyone’s powers are coming along and all the twists and turns for them. Super exited for them taking genosha I love stories that create a mutant kingdoms that actually work and will not be tore down like in the comics bc they deserve a win. Keep up the good work👍🏻🙏🏻
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Es interesante al principio pero después de leer más de 15 capitulos ya no me llama la atención eso si si eres nuevo en el mundo de fanfiction y te gusta leer este capas que te llame la atención pero para mí gusto esto es muy ligh muy fantasma en todo el desarrollo del Mc
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Its a nice blend from existing well-known storylines to tell a new story. Interesting character development on the known characters
Nice story as expected from UnknownMaster 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
it's a marvel harem fanfiction with no Yuri so that's great . the story progression is good not too fast nor slow. the MC has great interaction with the rest of the cast with no hollow bonds. overall great work one of my favorites
The fanfiction has a good and entertaining storyline.🔥 The Characters are really well written. The grammar is also really good. Thanks to the Author for this nice ff. I recommend it. I hope this ff will continue Have my powerstones 👍🔥
I wish you add Natasha And Gwen ghost spider And Wanda To mc harem Also you must expanded the plot how about mc make adventure through space join ravagers and find new planet for mutated to teleport them there …….and teleport any new one Also. The ten rings mc should get them as his weapon
Take my 5 stars. Writing quality looks great with minimum typos. Updates are almost daily. I like the fact that the author didn't just make the MC jump from one girl to another just to create a harem. He takes his time with the girls and it has enough slice of life and fight moments. Overall, a nice read so far.
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I didn't read this fanfic because of saying that mc is clone, I saved it in my library, can someone tell me what's with clone thing?
It amazing for me. Perfectly emulates the xmen and their characteristics. Especially loved the fact how you made jean such a great outgoing girl compared to what most people portray her as.
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I look forward to more chapters to see where this goes it is a very interesting story
Writing Quality - 4/5 The writing’s decent, but the main character’s thoughts and motivations aren’t really explored. I actually had to look in the comments to figure out why he was doing certain things. Story Development - 3/5 The plot’s a bit dull. He’s at the X-Men mansion but barely interacts with anyone interesting—no scenes with Logan, Scott, or Xavier, just a lot of flirting with the girls. It feels like that’s all he’s doing! Character Design - 4/5 He’s kind of a ladies’ man, which is fine, but the romance is pretty average for a web novel. My biggest gripe is that he just starts dating Jean, and right after, he’s already thinking about Kitty. They literally just had a date, and suddenly Kitty’s in the mix—it feels rushed. Updating Stability - 5/5 Updates are solid, no complaints here. World Background - 5/5 The setting is well done, no issues with the world-building.
Awesome read so far. Updates are stable and the story progress is great. OP MC, if you like OP troupe. Keep up the good work.[img=update][img=update]
Finally, I don’t know why people don’t use abilties like All For One more often. Gonna let this marinate for a while though.
this is really good, but it's got some stupid stuff from the comics i never liked. how can a tech stop the activation of a gene that gives powers that like saying ur phone can turn ur hair blue by pressing a button. it always made me roll my eyes when the government was able to stop mutants as powerful as Magneto with little effort. then again, i also never like that their was so many powerful mutants. If mutants are so rare as to be 1 in 1 million people but also 1 in 1million are alpha and 1 in 1 billion an omega then thier should be very few powerful alpha and VERY few omega.
Tanto potencial indo para o lixo ele tem o poder do All For One mas não usa que lixo pode pegar os poder de todos os mutantes mas não faz e que nem uma cópia ---- kkkkkk cada capítulo e uma agonia de ler vendo o protagonista tão lixo e pq ele tem meta-conhecimento das HQs dos mangas e dos filmes mas mesmo assim AFF decepções
Author here with the usual 5 stars. Well, it's harem, no ntr, no yuri. Got a question feel free to ask. And let me know if there are any typos. Finally, have a bit of patience. The story has just began. You'll get your answers.
oh my God! what an amazing novel like seriously this one just made it into my top three of all time, I'm a huge fanfic nerd but I don't have anything to complain about I really enjoy OP characters so keep it rocking my friend and give me more more more. I can't wait keep up the hard work my friend God bless you.
Writing quality is perfect. I really do like how it goes. MC is a smart one not a naive idiot like most of the MCU fictions. He has 3 step process for ppl who like to stir trouble and i loved it. Not a psychopaths killing left and right. Good work author-san best of luck.
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This FF is amazing one of my favorites, not only is the story great so is the world building, even the harem and I don’t normally like harems. I love how everyone’s powers are coming along and all the twists and turns for them. Super exited for them taking genosha I love stories that create a mutant kingdoms that actually work and will not be tore down like in the comics bc they deserve a win. Keep up the good work👍🏻🙏🏻
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I really like your book. I wish you inspiration in the future. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Es interesante al principio pero después de leer más de 15 capitulos ya no me llama la atención eso si si eres nuevo en el mundo de fanfiction y te gusta leer este capas que te llame la atención pero para mí gusto esto es muy ligh muy fantasma en todo el desarrollo del Mc
Is amazyn totality [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Moneybags][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags][img=In a daze][img=Feeling it][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags]
A mutant above the Omega class? A sigma class mutant?????????[img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud]
Its a nice blend from existing well-known storylines to tell a new story. Interesting character development on the known characters
Nice story as expected from UnknownMaster 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
it's a marvel harem fanfiction with no Yuri so that's great . the story progression is good not too fast nor slow. the MC has great interaction with the rest of the cast with no hollow bonds. overall great work one of my favorites
The fanfiction has a good and entertaining storyline.🔥 The Characters are really well written. The grammar is also really good. Thanks to the Author for this nice ff. I recommend it. I hope this ff will continue Have my powerstones 👍🔥
I wish you add Natasha And Gwen ghost spider And Wanda To mc harem Also you must expanded the plot how about mc make adventure through space join ravagers and find new planet for mutated to teleport them there …….and teleport any new one Also. The ten rings mc should get them as his weapon
Take my 5 stars. Writing quality looks great with minimum typos. Updates are almost daily. I like the fact that the author didn't just make the MC jump from one girl to another just to create a harem. He takes his time with the girls and it has enough slice of life and fight moments. Overall, a nice read so far.
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I didn't read this fanfic because of saying that mc is clone, I saved it in my library, can someone tell me what's with clone thing?
It amazing for me. Perfectly emulates the xmen and their characteristics. Especially loved the fact how you made jean such a great outgoing girl compared to what most people portray her as.
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I look forward to more chapters to see where this goes it is a very interesting story
Writing Quality - 4/5 The writing’s decent, but the main character’s thoughts and motivations aren’t really explored. I actually had to look in the comments to figure out why he was doing certain things. Story Development - 3/5 The plot’s a bit dull. He’s at the X-Men mansion but barely interacts with anyone interesting—no scenes with Logan, Scott, or Xavier, just a lot of flirting with the girls. It feels like that’s all he’s doing! Character Design - 4/5 He’s kind of a ladies’ man, which is fine, but the romance is pretty average for a web novel. My biggest gripe is that he just starts dating Jean, and right after, he’s already thinking about Kitty. They literally just had a date, and suddenly Kitty’s in the mix—it feels rushed. Updating Stability - 5/5 Updates are solid, no complaints here. World Background - 5/5 The setting is well done, no issues with the world-building.
Awesome read so far. Updates are stable and the story progress is great. OP MC, if you like OP troupe. Keep up the good work.[img=update][img=update]
Finally, I don’t know why people don’t use abilties like All For One more often. Gonna let this marinate for a while though.
this is really good, but it's got some stupid stuff from the comics i never liked. how can a tech stop the activation of a gene that gives powers that like saying ur phone can turn ur hair blue by pressing a button. it always made me roll my eyes when the government was able to stop mutants as powerful as Magneto with little effort. then again, i also never like that their was so many powerful mutants. If mutants are so rare as to be 1 in 1 million people but also 1 in 1million are alpha and 1 in 1 billion an omega then thier should be very few powerful alpha and VERY few omega.
Tanto potencial indo para o lixo ele tem o poder do All For One mas não usa que lixo pode pegar os poder de todos os mutantes mas não faz e que nem uma cópia ---- kkkkkk cada capítulo e uma agonia de ler vendo o protagonista tão lixo e pq ele tem meta-conhecimento das HQs dos mangas e dos filmes mas mesmo assim AFF decepções
Author here with the usual 5 stars. Well, it's harem, no ntr, no yuri. Got a question feel free to ask. And let me know if there are any typos. Finally, have a bit of patience. The story has just began. You'll get your answers.