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Love your work please don’t drop it. And can’t wait to read your game of thrones fic as well 🤩
honestly, this is one of the fee very well written novels on this, be it the quality of the writing, the story, the lore. it's almost perfect, very well done author
I came here, I had no expectations, but I was pleasantly surprised, it is very well written, I couldn't put it down and it has great potential.
A good novel, although developed in a way that could have been better, I was about to abandon it because of the attitude of the protagonist that I did not share. I would have liked him to be a little stronger in spirit, to have more dignity, to be someone more focused. Even though he is strong, he sometimes acts in a shameful way. But hey, this is a good novel.
love it! such a unique story, it's a nice change of pace than what I'm used to. keep it up!
Personally this is one of the better works when it comes to the song of ice and fire series. And i really hope you don't drop it.
Writing this here when I'm on chapter 55, I'll probably write another analysis in the future if my feelings about the story change, I'm also using Google Translate, so if there's any problem with the writing, it's its fault, let me know and we'll try to clarify it.... Come on, I like to do long analyses. . *I will try my best not to give spoilers* . Regarding the quality of writing: The author is not necessarily new to this issue, he has other works, although short, which at least for me creates an expectation of a more developed beginning of work. The writing is good, at the beginning you can feel that one thing or another could be done differently, he sometimes made continuity errors, such as repeating some information, either with almost identical words or indirectly, which for me shows that there was a lack of attention in the writing and review at that point. Apart from this issue, I believe he has evolved well since the beginning of the work, he knows how to create tension and capture the reader with the way he conducts the scenes, which I highly praise because it is not an easy thing. . About the stability of updates: Well, here I have a personal problem with the author, because I wanted to have more available to read but I know that is not possible rsrs We currently have 1 daily chapter, sometimes something a little longer and other times shorter, I would say that he keeps delivering chapters with the ideal size, he manages to deliver something complete without abruptly cutting scenes, ruining the experience. . About the development of History: Now I think I'm going to be a little unfair, my reading experience in this story currently hasn't brought me any discomfort and for me everything is flowing naturally, however, if I look at the work as a whole from the outside my opinion changes a little, calm down I can explain. We have 55 chapters but it seems that so little has evolved, it seems that although we have improved since the starting point, we are not so evolved, do you understand? The story is well crafted, but if you look from the outside it seems like there isn't much to it, maybe I could be wrong too. . About Character Design: Honestly, the appearance of the OC character in this story went completely unnoticed by me, but if there is one thing in this story, it is the wealth of details of the characters that are delivered in the scenes, it becomes confusing and exhausting at times rsrs. In my opinion, this is where we can see how well the author knows how to write. . About the development of Mundo: This is a point where many GOT fics make me upset, This universe has a great wealth in this field, many things can be used, explored and developed, but it is often neglected. Currently we can say that basically the story takes place in one place only, we have few scenes outside exploring the world. But I will attribute this to the author clearly seeking to develop a specific subject in a specific location, because of this we do not have any movement to other locations... .. . . Well, This is basically my analysis, I'm open to conversation, if you find something and want to comment. If anyone has reached the end of this, I could say that to sum it all up it would be READ THE STORY BECAUSE IT IS GOOD. :) thanks for your work Stingleese see you later
Alright, I gotta write something for my friend here. First off, great fanfic overall! I must say it developed amazingly, be it in grammar and writing wise, or story telling wise. It simply improved overall. If you guys may be wondering if it's worthy to read this fanfic, well, it is! So go for it, you guys will like it. Be it the characters portrayed, the plots, the emotions felt, it has always amazed me. Of course not everything is perfect, but there's nothing perfect in this world,— but it’s damned enjoyable, that's for sure. Go conquer the stars my friend!
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This fan fiction is so good that I forgot that it was a fanfic and I don’t know how to describe it better than it being a masterpiece well written and simply beautiful.
In the beginning, I was so frustrated, but the more I read, the better it gets, and I loved the last chapter
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AAAAAAAAA I just read where he was given his own house and new surname. YESS If waited for it
Genuinely might be the greatest game of thrones fic I’ve ever read to all knew readers get ready for the trip of a lifetime.I hope the author keeps it up and finishes this story because I’m inlove with it.
I must admit that this story captured my attention right away. I had the impression that I was right there with the characters, going through all they went through because of how vivid and compelling the writing is. I found the plot to be both engaging and thoughtful, with unexpected turns that made me want to keep reading. I was engrossed and curious to see what would happen next. It's one of those stories that sticks with you long after you've finished a chapter, so I really can't wait to read more.
I must say that this is a wonderful story, and even with the rapid release of new chapters, I don't even have the patience to wait a few days for more to accumulate.
tiene muy buen concepto y está desarrollandose muy bien 👍👍👍👍 espero q siga así.
Definitely one of the best ASOIAF/GOT fanfictions I've read in recent times. Great character development and overall story..................
This work is incredible, the author tells the story in an engaging way and when it comes to GOT he avoids clichés. It is a really good work, where I simply could not stop reading until I finished all the published chapters... I hope the author has the strength to continue this incredible work.
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I don't really like it, but it is well written, the plot is kinda angsty and stale tho
Fantasic writing. Just keeps getting better and better. Hand down, it's already one of the best I've read. Ever. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Let him win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Let him win!!!!!! Let him win in chapter 23[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
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This is very . A great refresher from the same old boring fics now, keep up the good .
I hope you're alive and doing well, and if you're not well, I hope you get better and eventually come back to write this amazing story if you still feel like it
Love your work please don’t drop it. And can’t wait to read your game of thrones fic as well 🤩
honestly, this is one of the fee very well written novels on this, be it the quality of the writing, the story, the lore. it's almost perfect, very well done author
I came here, I had no expectations, but I was pleasantly surprised, it is very well written, I couldn't put it down and it has great potential.
A good novel, although developed in a way that could have been better, I was about to abandon it because of the attitude of the protagonist that I did not share. I would have liked him to be a little stronger in spirit, to have more dignity, to be someone more focused. Even though he is strong, he sometimes acts in a shameful way. But hey, this is a good novel.
love it! such a unique story, it's a nice change of pace than what I'm used to. keep it up!
Personally this is one of the better works when it comes to the song of ice and fire series. And i really hope you don't drop it.
Writing this here when I'm on chapter 55, I'll probably write another analysis in the future if my feelings about the story change, I'm also using Google Translate, so if there's any problem with the writing, it's its fault, let me know and we'll try to clarify it.... Come on, I like to do long analyses. . *I will try my best not to give spoilers* . Regarding the quality of writing: The author is not necessarily new to this issue, he has other works, although short, which at least for me creates an expectation of a more developed beginning of work. The writing is good, at the beginning you can feel that one thing or another could be done differently, he sometimes made continuity errors, such as repeating some information, either with almost identical words or indirectly, which for me shows that there was a lack of attention in the writing and review at that point. Apart from this issue, I believe he has evolved well since the beginning of the work, he knows how to create tension and capture the reader with the way he conducts the scenes, which I highly praise because it is not an easy thing. . About the stability of updates: Well, here I have a personal problem with the author, because I wanted to have more available to read but I know that is not possible rsrs We currently have 1 daily chapter, sometimes something a little longer and other times shorter, I would say that he keeps delivering chapters with the ideal size, he manages to deliver something complete without abruptly cutting scenes, ruining the experience. . About the development of History: Now I think I'm going to be a little unfair, my reading experience in this story currently hasn't brought me any discomfort and for me everything is flowing naturally, however, if I look at the work as a whole from the outside my opinion changes a little, calm down I can explain. We have 55 chapters but it seems that so little has evolved, it seems that although we have improved since the starting point, we are not so evolved, do you understand? The story is well crafted, but if you look from the outside it seems like there isn't much to it, maybe I could be wrong too. . About Character Design: Honestly, the appearance of the OC character in this story went completely unnoticed by me, but if there is one thing in this story, it is the wealth of details of the characters that are delivered in the scenes, it becomes confusing and exhausting at times rsrs. In my opinion, this is where we can see how well the author knows how to write. . About the development of Mundo: This is a point where many GOT fics make me upset, This universe has a great wealth in this field, many things can be used, explored and developed, but it is often neglected. Currently we can say that basically the story takes place in one place only, we have few scenes outside exploring the world. But I will attribute this to the author clearly seeking to develop a specific subject in a specific location, because of this we do not have any movement to other locations... .. . . Well, This is basically my analysis, I'm open to conversation, if you find something and want to comment. If anyone has reached the end of this, I could say that to sum it all up it would be READ THE STORY BECAUSE IT IS GOOD. :) thanks for your work Stingleese see you later
Alright, I gotta write something for my friend here. First off, great fanfic overall! I must say it developed amazingly, be it in grammar and writing wise, or story telling wise. It simply improved overall. If you guys may be wondering if it's worthy to read this fanfic, well, it is! So go for it, you guys will like it. Be it the characters portrayed, the plots, the emotions felt, it has always amazed me. Of course not everything is perfect, but there's nothing perfect in this world,— but it’s damned enjoyable, that's for sure. Go conquer the stars my friend!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This fan fiction is so good that I forgot that it was a fanfic and I don’t know how to describe it better than it being a masterpiece well written and simply beautiful.
In the beginning, I was so frustrated, but the more I read, the better it gets, and I loved the last chapter
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
AAAAAAAAA I just read where he was given his own house and new surname. YESS If waited for it
Genuinely might be the greatest game of thrones fic I’ve ever read to all knew readers get ready for the trip of a lifetime.I hope the author keeps it up and finishes this story because I’m inlove with it.
I must admit that this story captured my attention right away. I had the impression that I was right there with the characters, going through all they went through because of how vivid and compelling the writing is. I found the plot to be both engaging and thoughtful, with unexpected turns that made me want to keep reading. I was engrossed and curious to see what would happen next. It's one of those stories that sticks with you long after you've finished a chapter, so I really can't wait to read more.
I must say that this is a wonderful story, and even with the rapid release of new chapters, I don't even have the patience to wait a few days for more to accumulate.
tiene muy buen concepto y está desarrollandose muy bien 👍👍👍👍 espero q siga así.
Definitely one of the best ASOIAF/GOT fanfictions I've read in recent times. Great character development and overall story..................
This work is incredible, the author tells the story in an engaging way and when it comes to GOT he avoids clichés. It is a really good work, where I simply could not stop reading until I finished all the published chapters... I hope the author has the strength to continue this incredible work.
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I don't really like it, but it is well written, the plot is kinda angsty and stale tho
Fantasic writing. Just keeps getting better and better. Hand down, it's already one of the best I've read. Ever. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Let him win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Let him win!!!!!! Let him win in chapter 23[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is very . A great refresher from the same old boring fics now, keep up the good .
I hope you're alive and doing well, and if you're not well, I hope you get better and eventually come back to write this amazing story if you still feel like it