Vampire in DC

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Hamtaro_

I'm the author! Ask me questions! Give me suggestions! I'll answer them all, pinky promise. I can only promise you one thing, I'll never give you up, I'll never let you down, and yes I did Rick Roll you.

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Hadjii

No AI, No Yaoi, No Yuri, No NTR, No Pedo

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AlmightyKumGod

My first fic in this app and it rocks man keep it up :)

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Cussy_jackson

Don’t drop it dude;( haven’t seen a nice bloodline fic ever 😂

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THE_BR

Hidden gem, I tell you............... .......................... ......................... ................................. ...............

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Strongi

This is the best interpretation of a vampire I have seen in fanfiction. He actually needs to drink blood and isn't extremely angsty or overly evil. The MC is fun and doesn't seem to have a God complex that 90% of vampire SIs seem to develop. I love it. I hope you keep posting. It doesn't matter how long it takes between chapters as long as you finish this. Also, the world-building is extremely interesting. I enjoyed reading about the more rotten side of Gotham, as well as how the city functions in general. Thanks 😊

Awesome Story! Do tone down the whole bad language thing though, it's not so nice, but I think the author learned to mind his language....usually, hahaha

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Sterky67

Mientras max se feliz tienes las 5 estrellas Jajajajajj Muy bueno asta ahora [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Andria_Adel

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SYED_AFAQ

author how many woman are going to be in harem

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Marine0IQ

hey man, I've literally read merely the first chapter and the quality is sooo good. Love it. hopefully will be consistent and hope to see you book in the top 20 consistently.

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Mockingbird_2179

Chapters are decently long (at least the first 3 are), so don't get discouraged because of the chapter numbers. It's worth a try.

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HopelessOtaku

hope this does not get dropped. really like this one and eager to see where it goes from here.

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Rico321

Best vampire fanfic I've seen so far. :) ..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

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_AlphaWolf53_

Great story so far. I have enjoyed the character interactions. The author is very interactive in the progress of the story. I'm looking forward to more.

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NiklasXY

have not read a chapter yet, very interesting, just filling the words so i can post s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s

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Alan_Soto

Te la estás rifando amigo, esto es oro en comparación con todo lo demás. La historia puede llegar a ser parecida a muchas otras que he llegado a leer y la única cosa que la diferencia de las demás, Es que tú si sabes escribir. Tienes algo bueno aquí hermano no pares que ya soy adicto

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DaoistOylL9F

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ydoBoN

I am enjoying the story. I appreciate its slow pace and attention to detail in world-building. However, I do have a concern about the repetitive content. The scenes where the characters steal from gangs felt somewhat repetitive, as they seemed quite similar. That aside, I’m really liking the story. I remember you incorporated an idea about powers from a previous comment, so I have some suggestions inspired by famous vampire lore (excluding the typical Dracula abilities like shapeshifting, hypnotization, etc.). 1. **Memory/Skill Devour**: The ability to consume memories, potentially learning skills from them. 2. **Magical Aptitude**: Vampires generally possess stronger magical abilities than humans. 3. **Blood Bending**: Similar to the concept in *Avatar: The Last Airbender*, the control of blood. 4. **Biological Manipulation**: Typically tied to the vampire's own blood, this power allows them to affect other biological life forms connected to it. 5. **Empathic Powers**: The ability to sense and manipulate others' emotions. 6. **Blood Adaptation**: Some vampires can acquire weaker versions of their victim's powers, with these abilities growing stronger the more blood they consume. 7. **Phasing Ability**: The power to shift density and pass through solid objects, like walls. 8. **Mist Form**: The ability to transform into mist. 9. **Life Sensing**: The ability to sense (or smell) any nearby living creatures. 10. **Soul Devour**: Similarly to Ragman from DC, some Vampire can absorbs the souls of victims they fully drain obtaining their whole essence. Meaning eating 10 people while give you the speed, strength, intelligence and wisdom of 10 men. So the power of a normal human x 10. Combine with memory devour you can have a type of Hive mind situation. 11. **Magical Claws/Teeth**: Their claws and teeth have the ability to magically pierce any type of flesh, whether human or superhuman. Feel free to mix and match any of these ideas!