The "G" Shield

LV 4

Helia_King

It’s ok, mc was described as someone who relies on stuff like math and logic yet there is none of that and author seemingly can’t decide wether or not the mc remembers what happened after he died because he first questions what his powers are(he chose them) then he later starts thinking about the being that gave him the powers which means he should remember. And also if he actually was a person who preferred logic then he would be doing this bs with Tony like why tf is he doing all that.

LV 1

Rhandson_D

endless block of nonsense + stark dog mc sigh bad for my eyes

LV 3

OIL_DEVOUR

So is his powers based off green lantern?

LV 4

Aayush_storms

This fic is a masterpiece the pacing is on point and chapters are innovative and action packed i don't understand how people are giving this less then a 5 star. I highly recommend this to those watching reviews before starting.

LV 13

Hanish_Ram

It would have been better if you didn’t give mc the powers like barrier control it would be better if had given him slow evolution and adaptability which is very slow it would have been awesome for some character development please consider but your remaining novels I read you maintain good quality but please consider to give mc some high potential and slow growth powers it would be 👍

LV 15

kamran_ein

Not a bad start. not going to lie, I'm pretty hooked already and I was bumbed when I read all the chapters so far in 20 min. hurry up and post more author, and I'll dump all my power stones lol

LV 13

Hanish_Ram

My suggestion is that you can cover mc full body with his energy which can act as his shield and offence while fighting I mean that energy can act full body greedy transparent clothing which cover whole body like aura not literally aura as per mc powers which are making shield this full body coverage you can add it to make Mc cool because not every ready want the mc of the story he is reading be like a turtle and do surfing I hope you like my suggestion 👍and sorry if a have give you low ratings

LV 1

Jesus_Curiel

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LV 3

DEVIL_HP02

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