Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

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LastGod

I like the idea but the first job he got. He made it overly complicated when it's just a comedy role and a multi cam sitcom. Truthfully, he acted like it was a drama. Bordering on Shakespeare. As long as you have enough charisma, those multi camp sitcoms are easy. Chrisma, comedy timing that's all you need. That is, if you're a talented actor. He's already described how he's not fking talented at all. How he screwed up every single level of acting that you can. Unless he suddenly got more talented all the sudden. This is even more unrealistic than those system novels. You don't just acquire talent. Most people, even if they become experienced, actors don't acquire talent above their level. A b list actor can become an A list actor by experience. But a C list actor can almost never become a A list actor unless they get one role that is perfect for them. Sarah hyland hasnt done much of note since modern family as an example.

LV 5

WulfricTheodore

Nothing to complain but the author repeats his sentences a lot like an AI not knowing the stuff it already generated. Also, mc makes some no-brainer mistakes here and there like, not going search binge about his new world, since for all he knew he transmigrated into Marvel, going to McDonald's, (hehe), etc.

LV 4

Vaporites

okay.... youre to heavy to write with AI. for somone that read many book looking at your writing made me sick. use AI for your inspiration or to solving writer block because human brain is better than low end artificial inteligent learning machine. i apreciate your determination but your writing suck

LV 14

YoungMaster2411

I liked your other work so i will give this a try

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Ep_E_X

Good story,I like the plot but there's an issue..The author put too much narative in this story . ..he describe things repeatedly sometimes with different wordings.. but overall it's at least 4 star but I'm gonna give it 5 in hope author release more chapter because some chapter doesn't contain much importance in the story and it feels short because of too much water.

LV 5

Archonstine

You gotta reduce your reliance on AI bro. 5 stars for effort, but if you want your vocab to improve by leaps and bounds... read books. I'm not talking about fanfics on this platform, real fantasy books. It's how I developed my eloquence in the English language. Just a suggestion from someone writing a fanfic, with a similar premise.

LV 4

Buck_Evans

Please stop dropping your fics in favor a new one. It really frustrating investing time in reading then you just drop it out of nowhere. ..

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_Sword_Immortal

Loved it. Your novel inspired me to watch 127 hours, which was an emotional rollercoaster. Keep it up dude.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Vaporites

okay its realy good. if you havent read manhwa the movie is real then read it. it have same vibe but this novel fix the problem on manhwa. its good potensial, and i hope author can continue writing unlike movie is real author that on sick leave in covid era that we didnt know he is dead or alive.

LV 1

CokeWhale

The writing is essentially GPT-slop. At least 60% of the wordcount could be removed and it would only leave a better story behind. Characters feel disingenuous, as every piece of stilted dialogue has been turned into fancy-sounding drivel by letting the AI (re-?)write it for you, and it really killed any chance of it ever becoming a decent story. Other than that, it drags on to a ridiculous degree, some movies taking up an endless amount of time for no reason, with scenes repeated from different points of view. Every movie generally feels the same in the characters' reactions and the general progression, which leaves behind a boring, repetitive story full of holes and an extreme overuse of AI writing. It's also very clear that you haven't done sufficient research on how movie-making, auditions or general Hollywood works. Then there's the songs forced into every project, even when they don't even remotely fit. Overall, you should be pretty ashamed of this. If it had at least been your own writing, it might be a bit more interesting, but when you run everything through an AI and just release it like that, your own voice and style is completely lost. What's left behind is a story with zero soul. Hopefully you find some way to raise your standards if you want to keep writing, if you can even call this writing.

LV 4

Aaron_Hand_4795

Brilliant Hollywood novel, really good cheat which doesn’t just give him the skills to succeed. Overall one of my favourite novels of this genre, good to see a different type of mc also.

LV 15

ryan_biggins

I won’t say much, I don’t often leave reviews. Exceptions are if the story is just THAT good and I feel it’s a shame if more people don’t get to enjoy it. 100% amazing read. Read to current release and immediately went to authors patreon to consume more chapters. If you’re a superstar/Hollywood/actor enjoyer then this book is for you. (Also like my post or your favorite novels will get dropped).

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ireadquietly07

I like your other work so I'll give it a try

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YupThatsNotMe

It's a nice story. Other works of this author is also good. BTW, I heard an awesome song today - John Mayer - Say - I hope the author corporates this song in this one. It's beautiful!

LV 4

Porkster_Terry

While the story is good in general & progressing nicely, the mc feels very one dimensional. See nobody can be good all the time, i am not saying to make him a criminal or anything along those lines, i just feel he is always too good. Taking care of everybody, donating everything, never felling anything bad or taking revenge for that matter, loving somebody all of a sudden, etc. It feels like a game or some mythological who is always calm, virtuous. But it doesn't work actually.

LV 3

Alexxz

Gran novela amigo, también hice una portada sobre esta novela jaja, lo hice con un personaje más realista ya que en la novela interactura con gente real, así que se me hace raro hacerlo estilo animación, ojala te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo[img=strong][img=strong] Por cierto en la respuesta dejaré la versión blanca

LV 4

MrCouchPotato

Love it but it has too many unnecessary small info

LV 4

KingPumpkin3

I love how you done everything with the movies and acting but I think you should try and get more into business side and start building up his business empire

LV 3

Dreoklevi

Absolutely loving it, the update pace is incredible and the story is pretty much perfect. Plot is really interesting and it doesn't jump the gun on making him a star, but gradually builds him up. Really excited to see where this goes!

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Naruto420

Amazing story so far. I hope Lucas get lots of Oscars and turn his evil relatives face expressions like rotten potatoes with envy