Supreme Uzumaki | NARUTO FANFİC

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UREGO

I love when Author's come up with unique stories like this. The characters are developing well. The protagonist is interesting. He's not your typical main protagonist. I'm looking forward to where he goes with the story and the upcoming surprises as well. I believe this is a very interesting story and very creative and I look forward to the rest of the story for when it unfolds Awesome work and I can't wait!

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Korkyros

To be honest it is an interesting take on the Uzumaki that I have always had a similar belief they would be like with the exception of the personality you have given them. Which reflects the simplistic and arrogant personalities of cultivators in cultivation novels. The protagonist's name is supposedly Alex but he acts more like a young master and that type of personality feels extremely out of place for a person with that name. I do believe the world of Naruto is more or less a cultivation novel with a japanese theme but the personalities of the world follow the modern japanese with a bit of western ideology which is why the society of naruto is interesting while I felt like the world of naruto was left unexplored. The cultivator personality would make more sense for the Ootsutsuki or say another group of people who portray themselves as a counter to the ootsutsuki something like sects where the elemental nations to the ootsutsuki is viewed as the mortal or mundane world and the ootsutsuki could be like a evil sect. anyway tangent over overall i would say its a good story if you are interested in cultivation novels.