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Getting A System In A Modern World

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Silas, as a normal hot-blooded youth with big dreams and huge ambition, wanted to see the world, experience what it has to offer while living his dream life.

But when has life ever gone according to plan? when has it ever been fair to anyone? Silas was hit with a reality check after graduating, if school was hard, society is harder.

For two years he worked but nothing seems to be working out. He gave up on his dreams and ambition and his determination waned.

After a long day at work one day, he looked up at the ceiling and made a wish, a wish he never knew will come true and change his life forever.

He got a system, one that seems to be an all-rounder and it has his dream feature.

[Ding!]

[You spent $1199. You received 10x rebate of expenses made. You earned $11,990. The money has been sent to host bank account]

"My dream life is no longer out of reach!"

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This is my first book and English is not my main, I will apologize for any possible error.
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Disclaimer: 'Getting A System In A Modern World' is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

This book may reference real companies and organizations, but these references are for narrative purposes only and are not intended to depict actual conduct or involvement of these entities. The use of these names and references is not meant to harm, defame, or discredit these companies or organizations.
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Horizon
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Review done at chapter 40. Honestly this novel is just a cookie-cutter version of other novels in this genre. The story is running at 1000 mph, often resulting in mistakes or plot holes that can take one out of the story. This results in characters just being cardboard cutouts of people or being thrown to the side, such as the MC’s family. Additionally, the MC is just not engaging or interesting in my opinion, he feels like an empty vessel just being dragged around by the story, rarely facing any pushback or opportunities to really grow outside of fake raising his stats. I say fake because while he upgrades his stats, he still feels like the same person. Despite having intelligence stats 10x stronger than the average human, he sounds and acts like a clueless bumpkin most of the time that impulsively does things. Also this story is kinda predictable that there’s rarely any unique twists to this story. It feels like I’m reading a lower version of Getting a Technology System in The Modern Day. Honestly I would say if you like this genre that story is 10x more thought out than this one and characters are more interesting.

6mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Noisette

I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre. I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid. - The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet. - There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place. it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either... - The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.

6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
ascender

I have to say it is a gem. A true gem i have read 45+ ch so far & it really good. i just hope mc can keep evolove in most perfect way.. author please continue this novel you have huge potential...

7mth
ดู 8 การตอบกลับ
Sinful_Anarchy

Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.

6mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Daoist_Godfiend

Like who gives their own book a five-star review. I didn't want to do this but I had no choice. I'm writing this review for readers who have questions. Please ask your questions below. This is my first book and I hope not to disappoint. Thanks for reafding 💙

7mth
ดู 24 การตอบกลับ
Lord1811_00

Very good novel, keep it up please……………

8mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
DaoistuK3Ovv

The book is actually decent but the issue lies in the fact that there are no characters the mc is the only character there’s only so far a story can go with one person. everyone else is extremely shallow even his own brother isn’t exempt the lack of a female lead is also annoying and don’t say lunar is a female lead she’s a ducking AI there are other ppl who were introduced but never focused on like serah, Emma and Chloe assuming they were focused on more and possibly love interests along with his brother being focused the series would be ten times better but seeing how there’s no hint of this happening and the mc is focused on work instead spending time with his family or socializing he’s wasting his youth im gonna drop it but if it happens just tell me I’ll go read it. This review is till ch125

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5mth
ดู 12 การตอบกลับ
Empyreal4

Great story, author. I hope you continue at the same pace.١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١

6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Danish_Creater

Is a really good story keep up the good work

6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
nimko
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i have read up to 20 chapters so far so good

6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Bara
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Quite a pleasant read so far, despite the occasional rough spots in the gramar and spelling. They are not so jarring that they break me out of my focus on the story. I am enjoying the way in which the MC is being developed, and his evolving personality is fleshed out. I'm hoping to see it done the secondary characters that are prominent enough to deserve it. So, a hearty 'Good Job' to the author and your reward is to keep working hard to develop and keep improving the story. 😉

7mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Valyrxa
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Really good read, can’t wait for new chapters!

7mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Halfbloodprince101

Dropped at chapter 28, the novel is decent compared to some you can find on this app don’t mistake me, I just don’t like the integration of super powers / cultivation in this type of novels and that’s what happened there. Good read to whoever likes that

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Gaf_Ba
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are you alive bro?[img=disgusted][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud]

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Hades_Empartas

It is one of the productions that deserves the legendary title that can be clearly said to be the best of the modern system series. .............................................................................................................................................................................................

6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
CephalonCoda

I love the concept of the story and the characters themselves. There are a few very minor spelling errors but significantly better than most stories on the platform. My main concern is that his stat sheet is repeated almost every single chapter, and considering that nothing changes really in the later chapters (50-75ish, which is latest released at this time), other than the number of lottery tickets, it would really help with immersion to just show the parts of the status that actually changed. There have even been chapters with the entire long status listed more than once in the chapter, leaving significantly less of the chapter to be the actual story and it feeling a bit like a cash grab tbh. Other than that, I just hope the author sticks with the story, as it does have great potential and has been a very enjoyable read.

7mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
MeaningOfLife0

Was a good concept but the fast pace of the system and the mc not even using the system most of the time is dumb as f*ck. Like bruh he has tons of things he can easily get from the system with those points of his yet his not even using them, and he literally has millions or billions of lottery tickets(if I remember it correctly cause I dropped this some time ago) and he isn't even using them instead he's just using thousands at a time instead of millions like what the f*ck? It's like the system is just a design in this story it doesn't even exist.

1mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
yodhavu

Why does the story has no Updating Stability. It's been Five Days since last update... Some of the characters are also not with the flow of story. Like AI who suddenly one day wants to be in a relationship with her creater, etc.

1mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Ray_Bonavente_2245

still no update? please give us some chapters

1mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
InfiniteRaider

The writing quality starts off a little rough and in certain chapters, certain plot holes form. However the author has tremendously improved in his writing throughout the book. The overall story is very good and have loved reading his work!

2mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
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Chapter 338: Moral Quandary 1 months ago

จำนวน 1 : Volume I

  1. 1
    Silas Kurt 8 months ago
  2. 2
    A Wish Come True 8 months ago
  3. 3
    First Daily Mission Completed, Level Up 8 months ago
  4. 4
    New System Missions 8 months ago
  5. 5
    Spending To Receive Rebate 8 months ago
  6. 6
    Buying A Car 8 months ago
  7. 7
    Getting An Apartment 8 months ago
  8. 8
    Getting An Apartment(II) 8 months ago
  9. 9
    Shadows From The Past 8 months ago
  10. 10
    Learning New Skills 8 months ago
  11. 11
    Shopping, Spending & Rebate Reward 8 months ago
  12. 12
    Shopping, Spending & Rebate(II) 8 months ago
  13. 13
    Premier Villa 8 months ago
  14. 14
    Potential Workers 8 months ago
  15. 15
    Potential Workers(II) 8 months ago
  16. 16
    Serah & Emma 8 months ago
  17. 17
    Serah & Emma(II) 8 months ago
  18. 18
    The Get-together 8 months ago
  19. 19
    The Get-together(II) 8 months ago
  20. 20
    Going Home, Conversation With Chloe 8 months ago
  21. 21
    Getting Stanford University President's Contact Information 8 months ago
  22. 22
    Meeting With President Odetta 8 months ago
  23. 23
    Meeting With President Odetta(II) 8 months ago
  24. 24
    Meeting With Stanford University's Executives 8 months ago
  25. 25
    Meeting With Stanford University's Executives(II), Mission Completed 8 months ago
  26. 26
    Gene Enhancement Serum, Impulsive Decision 8 months ago
  27. 27
    Waking Up 8 months ago
  28. 28
    Superpower: Matter Manipulation 8 months ago
  29. 29
    The Need For System Points 8 months ago
  30. 30
    Max Level System 8 months ago
  31. 31
    Dark Energy, Breakthrough 8 months ago
  32. 32
    Summit Realty Group 8 months ago
  33. 33
    Checking Progress 8 months ago
  34. 34
    Progress 8 months ago
  35. 35
    Mission Progress 8 months ago
  36. 36
    Splurging System Points 8 months ago
  37. 37
    Splurging System Points(II) 7 months ago
  38. 38
    Splurging System Points(III) 7 months ago
  39. 39
    Thoughts, Plans 7 months ago
  40. 40
    Putting Plans Into Action 7 months ago
  41. 41
    Putting Plans Into Action(II) 7 months ago
  42. 42
    Going To Stanford University, Building The Quantum Computer 7 months ago
  43. 43
    Building The Quantum Computer(II), Crazy Things Are Happening 7 months ago
  44. 44
    Crazy Things Are Happening(II), Going Back Home 7 months ago
  45. 45
    Novel Rebate Reward 7 months ago
  46. 46
    LUNAR, The Perfect PA 7 months ago
  47. 47
    Black Hand 7 months ago
  48. 48
    Black Hand(II) 7 months ago
  49. 49
    AR And VR Gear And Pod 7 months ago
  50. 50
    AR And VR Gear 7 months ago
  51. 51
    AR And VR Pod 7 months ago
  52. 52
    Self-Driving Aircraft, Playing A VR Game 7 months ago
  53. 53
    Playing A VR Game(II), Going To Venezuela 7 months ago
  54. 54
    Going To The Island 7 months ago
  55. 55
    Meeting With Mr Andrés, An Absurd Request 7 months ago
  56. 56
    An Absurd Request(II), The Country's Current Deplorable State 7 months ago
  57. 57
    The Country's Current Deplorable State(II) 7 months ago
  58. 58
    Even Absurd Conditions 7 months ago
  59. 59
    Accident, Massive Changes 7 months ago
  60. 60
    Massive Changes(II), Going Home And Creating A New AGI 7 months ago
  61. 61
    Testing Strength, Results 7 months ago
  62. 62
    Vs Clone, Defeat 7 months ago
  63. 63
    Going Home To Alex And Kim 7 months ago
  64. 64
    Home Sweet Home 7 months ago
  65. 65
    Spending Time With Alex 7 months ago
  66. 66
    Going Back To Venezuela 7 months ago
  67. 67
    Visiting Venezuela Again 7 months ago
  68. 68
    The Group Meeting 7 months ago
  69. 69
    José Yusmairobis 7 months ago
  70. 70
    José Yusmairobis(II) 7 months ago
  71. 71
    José Yusmairobis(III) 7 months ago
  72. 72
    Inhumane Experimentation 7 months ago
  73. 73
    Breakthrough, Progress 7 months ago
  74. 74
    Coming To An Agreement 7 months ago
  75. 75
    Unwanted Requests, Going Back Home 7 months ago
  76. 76
    Home, Father 7 months ago
  77. 77
    Father(II), Confrontation 7 months ago
  78. 78
    Genuine Happiness, Unwanted Attention 7 months ago
  79. 79
    Unwanted Attention(II), Alex's Thoughts And Outburst 7 months ago
  80. 80
    An Unexpected Encounter 7 months ago
  81. 81
    New Business Venture 7 months ago
  82. 82
    Mission Reward 7 months ago
  83. 83
    Mission Rewards, MAU 7 months ago
  84. 84
    MAU(II) Second Chain Mission 7 months ago
  85. 85
    Uninvited Guests 7 months ago
  86. 86
    Lucas, Layla 7 months ago
  87. 87
    Lucas(II) 7 months ago
  88. 88
    Drama Unfolds 7 months ago
  89. 89
    Drama Unfolds(II) 7 months ago
  90. 90
    Richest Person On The Planet 7 months ago
  91. 91
    Rebate Rewards 7 months ago
  92. 92
    Getting Things Ready 7 months ago
  93. 93
    Taking LUNAR To The Airport, Picking Up Alex From School 7 months ago
  94. 94
    Taking LUNAR To The Airport, Picking Up Alex From School(II) 7 months ago
  95. 95
    Breaking The News To Kim 7 months ago
  96. 96
    Catching Rats, Questioning 7 months ago
  97. 97
    Catching Rats, Questioning(II) 6 months ago
  98. 98
    Going To The Office 6 months ago
  99. 99
    Getting Free Slaves 6 months ago
  100. 100
    Kim's Thoughts And Emotions 6 months ago
  101. 101
    Father's Whereabouts, New Business Idea [Bonus Chapter] 6 months ago
  102. 102
    New Business Idea(II), Getting A House 6 months ago
  103. 103
    Mr Brandon's Gesture 6 months ago
  104. 104
    Mr Brandon's Gesture(II) 6 months ago
  105. 105
    Report From LUNAR 6 months ago
  106. 106
    Alex 6 months ago
  107. 107
    Past Memories, Decision & Determination 6 months ago
  108. 108
    Past Memories(II) 6 months ago
  109. 109
    Stanford University, Decision To Drop Out 6 months ago
  110. 110
    La Fin 6 months ago
  111. 111
    La Fin(II) 6 months ago
  112. 112
    Checking Out The New House, Moving Out 6 months ago
  113. 113
    Checking Out The New House & Moving In(II) 6 months ago
  114. 114
    Venezuela, Impending Chaos 6 months ago
  115. 115
    A Night Of Spy Hunting 6 months ago
  116. 116
    Spy Hunting, Aftermath 6 months ago
  117. 117
    Aftermath(II) 6 months ago
  118. 118
    Plans, Thoughts 6 months ago
  119. 119
    System Points Farming Technique, Quantum Smartwatch[Edited] 6 months ago
  120. 120
    Quantum Smartwatch(II) 6 months ago
  121. 121
    Drawing An Architectural Plan, Meeting With The Construction Company 6 months ago
  122. 122
    Meeting With The Construction Company, Lab Facility Location 6 months ago
  123. 123
    Brainstorming Session 6 months ago
  124. 124
    I Am ..... Spontaneous 6 months ago
  125. 125
    Giving Alex The Second Quantum Smartwatch 6 months ago
  126. 126
    Giving Alex The Second Quantum Smartwatch, New Jersey 6 months ago
  127. 127
    Professor Edward(II) 6 months ago
  128. 128
    Professor Edward 6 months ago
  129. 129
    Professor Edward(III) 6 months ago
  130. 130
    Strange Girl 6 months ago
  131. 131
    Strange Girl(II) 6 months ago
  132. 132
    Underground Arena, The Empress 6 months ago
  133. 133
    Rising Tension 5 months ago
  134. 134
    Live Practice Targets, Flexing 5 months ago
  135. 135
    A Dangerous Situation 5 months ago
  136. 136
    Meeting Carl 5 months ago
  137. 137
    Aftermath, Meeting The Second Person On The List 5 months ago
  138. 138
    Change Of Plans, Back Home 5 months ago
  139. 139
    Discussion With Luna 5 months ago
  140. 140
    Decision, Going To Newport 5 months ago
  141. 141
    The Villa, Creating The Simulated Worlds 5 months ago
  142. 142
    The Villa, Creating The Simulated Worlds(II), Luna's Limitations 5 months ago
  143. 143
    Terrasis Online 5 months ago
  144. 144
    Tutorial Area, A Precarious Situation 5 months ago
  145. 145
    First Kill 5 months ago
  146. 146
    An Even More Precarious Situation 5 months ago
  147. 147
    Passing The Tutorial, Rich Rewards 5 months ago
  148. 148
    Opinions, Starting Research Simulation 5 months ago
  149. 149
    Luna's Fear 5 months ago
  150. 150
    Training With Clone Again 5 months ago
  151. 151
    Things Gets Serious 5 months ago
  152. 152
    Things Gets Serious(II), End Of Training 5 months ago
  153. 153
    Lottery Tickets Draw 5 months ago
  154. 154
    Analyzing The Gene Enhancement Serum 5 months ago
  155. 155
    Error 404 5 months ago
  156. 156
    It Begins 5 months ago
  157. 157
    Amarndo Silva 5 months ago
  158. 158
    L&$na 5 months ago
  159. 159
    Merger And Acquisition 5 months ago
  160. 160
    Results 5 months ago
  161. 161
    Recreating Simulated Researched Projects In Thel World 5 months ago
  162. 162
    "Hi Son." 5 months ago
  163. 163
    Chris' Thought 5 months ago
  164. 164
    Discussion With Dad, Evolution Capsule 5 months ago
  165. 165
    Silas' Fear 5 months ago
  166. 166
    Impending Doom 5 months ago
  167. 167
    Ross Ice Self 5 months ago
  168. 168
    The Rescue Mission, The Depth Of The Organization 5 months ago
  169. 169
    Adrian Sanders 5 months ago
  170. 170
    The Siblings 5 months ago
  171. 171
    Meeting At The White House 5 months ago
  172. 172
    Yusmaorobis' Decision, The Call 5 months ago
  173. 173
    The Marvels 5 months ago
  174. 174
    Unknown Memories 5 months ago
  175. 175
    Silas, Daniel 5 months ago

จำนวน 2 : Volume II

  1. 176
    Vague Memories, Unknown Emotions 4 months ago
  2. 177
    Void Genesis 4 months ago
  3. 178
    Previous Body Condition Explained 4 months ago
  4. 179
    Unexplainable Changes 4 months ago
  5. 180
    Plan For A Family Vacation 4 months ago
  6. 181
    Three Months, Back Home 4 months ago
  7. 182
    Calling Chloe 4 months ago
  8. 183
    Family Vacation, Virginia Beach 4 months ago
  9. 184
    Dinner With Chloe 4 months ago
  10. 185
    Dinner With Chloe (II), A Peculiar Atmosphere 4 months ago
  11. 186
    'This Could Get Interesting.' 4 months ago
  12. 187
    Strange Dream 4 months ago
  13. 188
    Boy's Time 4 months ago
  14. 189
    Daniel At The BEM 4 months ago
  15. 190
    Too Rich To Care 4 months ago
  16. 191
    Trouble Brewing 4 months ago
  17. 192
    Breaking Ties 4 months ago
  18. 193
    Making Moves 4 months ago
  19. 194
    Promises, Back To Venezuela 4 months ago
  20. 195
    Moves From The Agency 4 months ago
  21. 196
    Getting Stronger [Bonus Chapter] 4 months ago
  22. 197
    Genesis Void Rank Up 4 months ago
  23. 198
    Genesis Void: Matter Manipulation 4 months ago
  24. 199
    Testing Physical Strength 4 months ago
  25. 200
    Meeting With The Generals 4 months ago
  26. 201
    Dilemma 4 months ago
  27. 202
    Embodiment Of Power 4 months ago
  28. 203
    Future Projects 4 months ago
  29. 204
    Changes, Progress 4 months ago
  30. 205
    San Francisco Office 4 months ago
  31. 206
    Only Qualified Competition 4 months ago
  32. 207
    Busy Days Ahead 4 months ago
  33. 208
    Creating A Buzz 4 months ago
  34. 209
    Top Execs Meeting 4 months ago
  35. 210
    First Beta Tester Candidate: Marcus 4 months ago
  36. 211
    Change, Power 4 months ago
  37. 212
    Anticipation 4 months ago
  38. 213
    First Beta Testing 4 months ago
  39. 214
    Attentions, Aftermath 4 months ago
  40. 215
    Pressure, Elizabeth Federick 4 months ago
  41. 216
    Elizabeth Federick (II) 4 months ago
  42. 217
    Meeting With Elizabeth 4 months ago
  43. 218
    Meeting With Elizabeth (II) 4 months ago
  44. 219
    So Many Unknowns 4 months ago
  45. 220
    Fence Sitters 4 months ago
  46. 221
    The Meetings 4 months ago
  47. 222
    The Meeting 4 months ago
  48. 223
    On The Road To Humiliation 4 months ago
  49. 224
    Two People, Two Worlds 4 months ago
  50. 225
    Two People, Two Worlds (II) 4 months ago
  51. 226
    Looming Threat, Anticipation 4 months ago
  52. 227
    Next Phase 4 months ago
  53. 228
    Shocking Dad 4 months ago
  54. 229
    Shocking Dad (II) 4 months ago
  55. 230
    In The Middle Of The Night 4 months ago
  56. 231
    Expanded Beta Testing 3 months ago
  57. 232
    Going To Venezuela 3 months ago
  58. 233
    Interlude 3 months ago
  59. 234
    Villian, Putting Plans Into Action 3 months ago
  60. 235
    Interlude, Let There Be Chaos 3 months ago
  61. 236
    Let There Be Chaos (II) 3 months ago
  62. 237
    Let There Be Chaos (III) 3 months ago
  63. 238
    Let There Be Chaos (IV) 3 months ago
  64. 239
    Scared Alex 3 months ago
  65. 240
    Let There Be Chaos (V) 3 months ago
  66. 241
    Let There Be Chaos (VI) 3 months ago
  67. 242
    Let There Be Chaos (VII) 3 months ago
  68. 243
    Let There Be Chaos (VIII) 3 months ago
  69. 244
    "I Hate You" 3 months ago
  70. 245
    Let There Be Chaos (IX) 3 months ago
  71. 246
    Entrance 3 months ago
  72. 247
    Quagmire 3 months ago
  73. 248
    Quagmire (II) 3 months ago
  74. 249
    Invincible Silas 3 months ago
  75. 250
    Broken Beyond Imagination 3 months ago
  76. 251
    "I Dare You To Take One More Step" 3 months ago
  77. 252
    Tension & Panic 3 months ago
  78. 253
    Trying To Cage A Beast 3 months ago
  79. 254
    Reactions 3 months ago
  80. 255
    Reactions (II), Awake 3 months ago
  81. 256
    Awake (II) 3 months ago
  82. 257
    Probability 3 months ago
  83. 258
    Support 3 months ago
  84. 259
    Disposing Trash 3 months ago
  85. 260
    Alex, Healing 3 months ago
  86. 261
    Mystery, Tension & Unease 3 months ago
  87. 262
    Potential Ally 3 months ago
  88. 263
    Speculations 3 months ago
  89. 264
    Strings Of Fate 3 months ago
  90. 265
    Moving 3 months ago
  91. 266
    Leaving USA 3 months ago
  92. 267
    A New Beginning 3 months ago
  93. 268
    Revitalising Venezuela's Economy 3 months ago
  94. 269
    Getting To Work 3 months ago
  95. 270
    Four Months 3 months ago
  96. 271
    Diamirite Suit 3 months ago
  97. 272
    Second Evolution Metamorphosis 3 months ago
  98. 273
    Undercurrents 3 months ago
  99. 274
    Undercurrents (II) 3 months ago
  100. 275
    Changes 3 months ago
  101. 276
    Happenings 3 months ago
  102. 277
    Prison Break Plans 2 months ago
  103. 278
    The Money Heist 2 months ago
  104. 279
    Rescuing Donovan 2 months ago
  105. 280
    Donald 2 months ago
  106. 281
    Bravo One—Callen 2 months ago
  107. 282
    Waking Up 2 months ago
  108. 283
    Progress Report 2 months ago
  109. 284
    World Tour 2 months ago
  110. 285
    A Moment Of Vulnerability 2 months ago
  111. 286
    Paris 2 months ago
  112. 287
    Discussing The World's Future. 2 months ago
  113. 288
    The Anomaly—Silas 2 months ago
  114. 289
    Céline 2 months ago
  115. 290
    Strange Luna, Home 2 months ago
  116. 291
    Some Quality Family Time 2 months ago

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