Getting A System In A Modern World

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Horizon

Review done at chapter 40. Honestly this novel is just a cookie-cutter version of other novels in this genre. The story is running at 1000 mph, often resulting in mistakes or plot holes that can take one out of the story. This results in characters just being cardboard cutouts of people or being thrown to the side, such as the MC’s family. Additionally, the MC is just not engaging or interesting in my opinion, he feels like an empty vessel just being dragged around by the story, rarely facing any pushback or opportunities to really grow outside of fake raising his stats. I say fake because while he upgrades his stats, he still feels like the same person. Despite having intelligence stats 10x stronger than the average human, he sounds and acts like a clueless bumpkin most of the time that impulsively does things. Also this story is kinda predictable that there’s rarely any unique twists to this story. It feels like I’m reading a lower version of Getting a Technology System in The Modern Day. Honestly I would say if you like this genre that story is 10x more thought out than this one and characters are more interesting.

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Noisette

I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre. I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid. - The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet. - There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place. it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either... - The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.

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ascender

I have to say it is a gem. A true gem i have read 45+ ch so far & it really good. i just hope mc can keep evolove in most perfect way.. author please continue this novel you have huge potential...

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Sinful_Anarchy

Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.

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Daoist_Godfiend

Like who gives their own book a five-star review. I didn't want to do this but I had no choice. I'm writing this review for readers who have questions. Please ask your questions below. This is my first book and I hope not to disappoint. Thanks for reafding 💙

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Lord1811_00

Very good novel, keep it up please……………

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Empyreal4

Great story, author. I hope you continue at the same pace.١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١١

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Danish_Creater

Is a really good story keep up the good work

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nimko

i have read up to 20 chapters so far so good

LV 15

Bara

Quite a pleasant read so far, despite the occasional rough spots in the gramar and spelling. They are not so jarring that they break me out of my focus on the story. I am enjoying the way in which the MC is being developed, and his evolving personality is fleshed out. I'm hoping to see it done the secondary characters that are prominent enough to deserve it. So, a hearty 'Good Job' to the author and your reward is to keep working hard to develop and keep improving the story. 😉

LV 15

Valyrxa

Really good read, can’t wait for new chapters!

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Halfbloodprince101

Dropped at chapter 28, the novel is decent compared to some you can find on this app don’t mistake me, I just don’t like the integration of super powers / cultivation in this type of novels and that’s what happened there. Good read to whoever likes that

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Gaf_Ba

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Hades_Empartas

It is one of the productions that deserves the legendary title that can be clearly said to be the best of the modern system series. .............................................................................................................................................................................................

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CephalonCoda

I love the concept of the story and the characters themselves. There are a few very minor spelling errors but significantly better than most stories on the platform. My main concern is that his stat sheet is repeated almost every single chapter, and considering that nothing changes really in the later chapters (50-75ish, which is latest released at this time), other than the number of lottery tickets, it would really help with immersion to just show the parts of the status that actually changed. There have even been chapters with the entire long status listed more than once in the chapter, leaving significantly less of the chapter to be the actual story and it feeling a bit like a cash grab tbh. Other than that, I just hope the author sticks with the story, as it does have great potential and has been a very enjoyable read.

LV 15

InfiniteRaider

The writing quality starts off a little rough and in certain chapters, certain plot holes form. However the author has tremendously improved in his writing throughout the book. The overall story is very good and have loved reading his work!

LV 10

Madeeman

It’s a good novel, but the technical stuffs it's too much. Sometimes it feels like he spend two whole chapters explaining things that could’ve been summed up in a few paragraphs. It slows down the pace and pulls me out of the story, which can be frustrating. Sometime the mc do thing that's so dumb that I want to hit him myself . Cuz EVEN with all the INT stats up it's no use 😮‍💨

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Yusuf_Sumba

the novel is great for it's genre.only the romance part is disappointing,feels rushed like author thinks it's a must to get into romance for progression though it feels unnecessary. even the relationship feels forced as if the author had no other choice since she's the only female character available for the romance though they had an appearance only once in the story before the romance thing

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Nt_Tc

novel super cool . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5*