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Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......
Honestly this fanfic really had good potential, but from chapter 50~ things went down for me pretty fast. The grammar and plot are good, and the $ex scenes were excellent. But from the the moment the MC got his powers and actively used them in fights I found myself bored and frustrated. Once I got to chapter 136 I've stopped reading and decided to drop the fanfic and leave a review of my opinion why the fanfic failed draw me in as the story progressed. Here are a few points of what I believe to be the problem: 1) MC was nerfed so hard it's not even funny. The MC received many awesome and powerful abilities by sleeping around, such as Chi Manipulation and Transcendent Human Physiology among other physical enhancement abilities, yet he still struggles to defeat even normal humans. His abilities are always nerfed and fights that the MC should win in a single punch gets draged to last 1-2 chapters. His precognition ability never works and he wasn't able to avoid any trouble or ambush coming his way, unlike Madam Web from whom he got the power to begin with. And so on in many situations. 2) The MC and his friends/subordinates act like typical DC heroes (even though this is a Marvel fanfic) and hardly if ever kill the bad guys, only knocking them out. This leads to the bad guys later coming back for revenge stronger and better, repeating the arcs in a boring fashion. 3) The author can't write a good fighting scene. I'm not saying this to discourage the author, I'm just stating a fact. In all the various fighting scenes in this fanfic I found myself frustrated and bored, both from the flow of the fight and from the chapters length. It was like even without the MC things go down as it did in the original movies and comics, and sometimes even worse, as the MC is completely useless and nerfed, so what's the point of reading it? I didn't want to read about Tony fighting against Obadiah, I just want to read about the MC. Again, I'm not saying this to discourage the author, he sure knows how to write excellent $ex scenes and did a good plot, but unfortunately not exciting fighting scenes. 4) The MC's childish personality and actions. He was reincarnated from birth, which makes his mental age 40+ yet he still acts without thinking and do meaningless things. For instance, the MC went and followed daredevil one night for no reason whatsoever and somehow insisted on joining him in taking out a russian mafia without any planning or investigating the place first. This led to them falling to an ambush and a frustrating fight that almost got the MC killed numerous times. To sum it up, I think that if the MC was OP, that would solve most of the problems I mentioned and would also explain why all the hot women keep flock to the MC like they do. I would still give this fanfic a 4.5 star review cuz I can understand and appreciate the author's hard work.
This is one of the best Marvel fanfictions I've come across on Webnovel. The story is well crafted and the path the story goes is sometimes on RNG and sometimes on the patreon supporters, but the fact that the author can create this story with a plot that can change around him with factors he cannot control is really great to see. If there was a gripe about the novel, it would probably be the vs doom fights battle system, as well as the special EX chapters that lock some content (4 currently) behind Patreon paywall. Thankfully, the author has removed most of the annoying battle options in later fights making it more seamless. As for the EX chapters, well the author gotta earn some bread I guess. Most of them are also side-stories, except one which locks a sex-scene which is the one I had a gripe over. But, the author thinks he might release 3 to the public after there are 6 EX chapters, so there's that as well. All-in-all, a great fanfiction that I hope continues until it is completed 😄
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
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la historia es buena hasta el cap (no me acuerdo Xddd) en mi opinión lo que paso fue que el prota se volvió un corredor 🏃♂️ 🏃♂️ que quiero decir con eso esque no se queda quieto no quiero decir que me gusten las historias lentas (de echo siento que esta novela avanza muy lentamente ) lo que quiero decir con corredor es que no han explorado lo suficiente con los personajes que salen al inicio y las relaciones con los personajes, actualmente estoy dejando acumular cap pero lla llevo más de 10 días y no pasa de la bella de airon man nt. y la personalidad de Tony es muy rara por decir lo menos
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The story is quite good and enjoyable. The only thing that I felt weird or rather could have been better was that you could have used the female counterparts, instead of gender bend, like you did with Peggy. Instead of making Tony female, you could have simply swapped Tony with his daughter, or other female counterparts from the comics
The concept and development is so great, also i like this authors book is just that... i cant keep with this 2nd person thing, sorry i really tried author but it kills all the inmerssion, sure i can do the patreon thing or whatever to ask you to change the narrative but 1) i dont like to give money to authors when i feel that i HAD yo do this in order to motivates them, i feel that if for some reason i stoped paying because its needed then they will stop or drop, 2) you have already dropped a few good novels so what garanty to i have you wont drop this after the change? Its simply not worth the risk, anyway, tell me if someone else paid you to change the whole novel or if you do another similar novel with a normal pov. Excluding that good novel, keep the good work 😁
Hey... whats going on? We thought you died. You went missing almost a year ago and you came back now... will you update slave hârêm novel??????
Title says mutant collector but from what I've read no og mutant characters have appeared yet
as much as i would love to read this, the quest thingy is not really for me, i tried really, but it feels weird associating myself in it and can't feel being immerse reading it, unlike other SI with an actual mc. i just hope if this was somehow completed you'll make another one based on this with an actual mc.
Add genderbend to the tags i see no point in this as there hella female characters but atleast let the readers know
Harem: Susan Storm, Felicia Hardy, Mary Jane Watson, Wanda Maximoff, Captain Marvel, Natasha Romanoff, Gamora, Hela, Valkyrie, Yelena Belova, Jennifer Walters, Maria Hill, Wasp, Mantis, Gwen Stacy, Jessica Jones, Lady Sif, Sersi , Thena, Makkari, Illyana Nikolaievna Rasputin, Rogue, Ororo Munroe, Psylocke, Emma Frost, Jean Grey, Mystique, Polaris, Selene Gallio, Cuckoo Sisters(Esme, Irma, Sophie, Phoebe, Celeste), Blink, Angel Dust, Kate Pryde....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM.......
If anyone finds narrative time strange it's because this story is a quest from fiction live (that's where the 'quest' in the title comes from). I recommend reading it on that page since there are many NSFW pics in the story that cannot be seen in the webnovel format and rules, also the story is MUCH further advanced.
Great story hopefully will continue till the end and we will be able to read until conclusion.Also the MC and other characters will be able to conect naturally without looking forced, currently it's going great.
I love this, everything i have ever wanted from a novel, please don't stop updating
Honestly when I first started reading this novel the 1st person pov really threw me off. But now I’m further in and I think it makes the novel feel more immersive! Keep up the good work!
This is very good, excited for more. the only thing I think could be different is the whole first person and just use normal third-person pronouns.
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This is good it’s similar to the one Cambmian did with mutants too but this one’s different so it’s nice to see stuff like this
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really like your writing style and I am a Marvel fan myself, so I would like to ask if I can translate your work into my country's language?
Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......
Honestly this fanfic really had good potential, but from chapter 50~ things went down for me pretty fast. The grammar and plot are good, and the $ex scenes were excellent. But from the the moment the MC got his powers and actively used them in fights I found myself bored and frustrated. Once I got to chapter 136 I've stopped reading and decided to drop the fanfic and leave a review of my opinion why the fanfic failed draw me in as the story progressed. Here are a few points of what I believe to be the problem: 1) MC was nerfed so hard it's not even funny. The MC received many awesome and powerful abilities by sleeping around, such as Chi Manipulation and Transcendent Human Physiology among other physical enhancement abilities, yet he still struggles to defeat even normal humans. His abilities are always nerfed and fights that the MC should win in a single punch gets draged to last 1-2 chapters. His precognition ability never works and he wasn't able to avoid any trouble or ambush coming his way, unlike Madam Web from whom he got the power to begin with. And so on in many situations. 2) The MC and his friends/subordinates act like typical DC heroes (even though this is a Marvel fanfic) and hardly if ever kill the bad guys, only knocking them out. This leads to the bad guys later coming back for revenge stronger and better, repeating the arcs in a boring fashion. 3) The author can't write a good fighting scene. I'm not saying this to discourage the author, I'm just stating a fact. In all the various fighting scenes in this fanfic I found myself frustrated and bored, both from the flow of the fight and from the chapters length. It was like even without the MC things go down as it did in the original movies and comics, and sometimes even worse, as the MC is completely useless and nerfed, so what's the point of reading it? I didn't want to read about Tony fighting against Obadiah, I just want to read about the MC. Again, I'm not saying this to discourage the author, he sure knows how to write excellent $ex scenes and did a good plot, but unfortunately not exciting fighting scenes. 4) The MC's childish personality and actions. He was reincarnated from birth, which makes his mental age 40+ yet he still acts without thinking and do meaningless things. For instance, the MC went and followed daredevil one night for no reason whatsoever and somehow insisted on joining him in taking out a russian mafia without any planning or investigating the place first. This led to them falling to an ambush and a frustrating fight that almost got the MC killed numerous times. To sum it up, I think that if the MC was OP, that would solve most of the problems I mentioned and would also explain why all the hot women keep flock to the MC like they do. I would still give this fanfic a 4.5 star review cuz I can understand and appreciate the author's hard work.
This is one of the best Marvel fanfictions I've come across on Webnovel. The story is well crafted and the path the story goes is sometimes on RNG and sometimes on the patreon supporters, but the fact that the author can create this story with a plot that can change around him with factors he cannot control is really great to see. If there was a gripe about the novel, it would probably be the vs doom fights battle system, as well as the special EX chapters that lock some content (4 currently) behind Patreon paywall. Thankfully, the author has removed most of the annoying battle options in later fights making it more seamless. As for the EX chapters, well the author gotta earn some bread I guess. Most of them are also side-stories, except one which locks a sex-scene which is the one I had a gripe over. But, the author thinks he might release 3 to the public after there are 6 EX chapters, so there's that as well. All-in-all, a great fanfiction that I hope continues until it is completed 😄
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
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la historia es buena hasta el cap (no me acuerdo Xddd) en mi opinión lo que paso fue que el prota se volvió un corredor 🏃♂️ 🏃♂️ que quiero decir con eso esque no se queda quieto no quiero decir que me gusten las historias lentas (de echo siento que esta novela avanza muy lentamente ) lo que quiero decir con corredor es que no han explorado lo suficiente con los personajes que salen al inicio y las relaciones con los personajes, actualmente estoy dejando acumular cap pero lla llevo más de 10 días y no pasa de la bella de airon man nt. y la personalidad de Tony es muy rara por decir lo menos
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The story is quite good and enjoyable. The only thing that I felt weird or rather could have been better was that you could have used the female counterparts, instead of gender bend, like you did with Peggy. Instead of making Tony female, you could have simply swapped Tony with his daughter, or other female counterparts from the comics
The concept and development is so great, also i like this authors book is just that... i cant keep with this 2nd person thing, sorry i really tried author but it kills all the inmerssion, sure i can do the patreon thing or whatever to ask you to change the narrative but 1) i dont like to give money to authors when i feel that i HAD yo do this in order to motivates them, i feel that if for some reason i stoped paying because its needed then they will stop or drop, 2) you have already dropped a few good novels so what garanty to i have you wont drop this after the change? Its simply not worth the risk, anyway, tell me if someone else paid you to change the whole novel or if you do another similar novel with a normal pov. Excluding that good novel, keep the good work 😁
Hey... whats going on? We thought you died. You went missing almost a year ago and you came back now... will you update slave hârêm novel??????
Title says mutant collector but from what I've read no og mutant characters have appeared yet
as much as i would love to read this, the quest thingy is not really for me, i tried really, but it feels weird associating myself in it and can't feel being immerse reading it, unlike other SI with an actual mc. i just hope if this was somehow completed you'll make another one based on this with an actual mc.
Add genderbend to the tags i see no point in this as there hella female characters but atleast let the readers know
Harem: Susan Storm, Felicia Hardy, Mary Jane Watson, Wanda Maximoff, Captain Marvel, Natasha Romanoff, Gamora, Hela, Valkyrie, Yelena Belova, Jennifer Walters, Maria Hill, Wasp, Mantis, Gwen Stacy, Jessica Jones, Lady Sif, Sersi , Thena, Makkari, Illyana Nikolaievna Rasputin, Rogue, Ororo Munroe, Psylocke, Emma Frost, Jean Grey, Mystique, Polaris, Selene Gallio, Cuckoo Sisters(Esme, Irma, Sophie, Phoebe, Celeste), Blink, Angel Dust, Kate Pryde....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM.......
If anyone finds narrative time strange it's because this story is a quest from fiction live (that's where the 'quest' in the title comes from). I recommend reading it on that page since there are many NSFW pics in the story that cannot be seen in the webnovel format and rules, also the story is MUCH further advanced.
Great story hopefully will continue till the end and we will be able to read until conclusion.Also the MC and other characters will be able to conect naturally without looking forced, currently it's going great.
I love this, everything i have ever wanted from a novel, please don't stop updating
Honestly when I first started reading this novel the 1st person pov really threw me off. But now I’m further in and I think it makes the novel feel more immersive! Keep up the good work!
This is very good, excited for more. the only thing I think could be different is the whole first person and just use normal third-person pronouns.
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This is good it’s similar to the one Cambmian did with mutants too but this one’s different so it’s nice to see stuff like this
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really like your writing style and I am a Marvel fan myself, so I would like to ask if I can translate your work into my country's language?