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เขียนรีวิวI can easily say this is by far my favorite dragon ball story the character feels real and are fleshed out oh and I'm also enjoying the interaction between krillin and gotten more and more cause it shows the growth of both sides and the decision that krillin made makes it more important so he can keep up with the flow of dbz and dbs all in all a very good story i could say more but it will spoil alot so I will refrain from it though keep uobthe good work mate Ps: I kinda wabt to see goten go to other world's outside of db universe he does have the ability aftwr fighting janenmba i think it would give the story more longevity and soace for you to crate some interesting filler arc
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Translator here, giving this book a 5 star review. Because why not? I worked hard for this shid! The story start is a bit shaky and full of plot holes. Basically the author wanted to have Goten as a protagonist, but wanted his situation to be similar to Future Trunks, where Trunks timeline had Androids killing off everyone. In this fanfic AU timeline, Goten is the only warrior left on Earth after Cell kills everybody in Cell games. Author didn't want to give up on dragon balls, so he kept dende alive. But also doesn't want to revive the Z warriors who died, so he gave a flimsy reason that they don't want to revive saying that deceased should not interfere in the matters of the living. Although the real reason is given way later around after 57+ chapters. Canon is not strictly followed. Fanon is used a lot in this, so don't expect there to be canon stuff, somethings won't even make sense in canonical terms. Overall, it was a nice read. Give it a try. Don't question weird stuff, sometimes the stuff and reasoning of Chinese authors does not make sense. We don't question two things! One is the exaggerated numbers in the CNs, and other is the cast social norms/behavior.
No suelo escribir reseñas, prefiero mantener mis opiniones para mi solo, salvo algunas excepciones. Esta es una de ellas. Esta es una de las pocas traducciones que leído que más me han agradado. Es simplemente perfecto, se nota que el traductor le ha puesto muchas ganas, a diferencia de los muchos que simplemente utilizan la ia y los traductores, llenos de fallos y mal escritura. No tenía esperanzas, pero ahora me alegro de haberlo visto, no solo la traducción esta muy hecha, sino que también ha puesto atención a los detalles y se nota que ha modificado los elementos originales que escribio el autor chino, que suelen ser siempre lo mismo. En general, estoy completamente satisfecho y no puedo darle menos de un 10. Espero con ganas la siguiente actualización.
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It's a good fanfic I really enjoyed it but chapter update are quite slow which I don't appreciate aside from that story development is very goof
C'est de loin la meilleur fanfic DB que j'ai lue et j'en ai lu beaucoup j'espère que l'auteur ira jusqu'au bout en tout cas chapeau 👍👍👍,......,........,.........,.........
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Great translating, appreciate an actual translated fiction that doesn't change the name language every other paragraph. that alone is worth a high review
Este doc es basura definitivamente el creador de este doc se fumo algo... JIREN FUSIONADO CON SIGO MISMO EN EL TORNEO DEL PODER. El creador puso la excusa de que el otro JIREN viene de otra línia temporal y el MC llegó a esa conclusión ¿Porqué Daishinkan no hizo nada? El escritor definitivamente insulta la inteligencia del gran sacerdote
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Author did an amazing job translating this I can tell it wasn’t easy. What I love more than the story is the author’s notes. Can’t stop laughing. He literally says what we think hahahah.
Thanks Man🫡😊 hdhsludludludludldljxljiddxjckccjdujujxjxjjxjjiiiixjxjjjxjxhdhsludludludludldljxljiddxjckccjdujujxjxjjxjjiiiixjxjjjxjx
I am impressed with the quality of the translation. Definitely perfect for people craving some DB.
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This fanfic Is really good in my opinion. The characters are great. The mc is op and I’m a sucker for op mc’s. But either way I recommend this book to all of you.
Very good translation you can tell the amount of effort was put in and the author genuinely cares about the quality.
Remarcable traduccion work, This is the first MTL fanfic that I actually im ejoying. The ship of goten x videl is funny and i like it. Keep the good work and hope for more chapters. Totally recommended
Usually Dragon Ball ffs also have the disease of 100s of ch per fight scene, but this ff is quite good for a Dragon Ball ff without the said disease also the translation quality, progress speed and update speed are quite good so great job Translator and Author
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Dragon Ball does go well with Chinese set of mind somehow 😂 The story is complete AU, forget about canon and just enjoy a new set timeline altogether. A MC that is completely evolving on each fight, and fight like a Saiyan enjoying and getting benefits of their Zenkai boost while he is at it. Hell even Broly is the DBZ movie one with the potential of the DBS one, an absolute evil savage. PD: Get this fair warning there is baching of the main cast on this one and yet conserve the essence of their personalities.
I can easily say this is by far my favorite dragon ball story the character feels real and are fleshed out oh and I'm also enjoying the interaction between krillin and gotten more and more cause it shows the growth of both sides and the decision that krillin made makes it more important so he can keep up with the flow of dbz and dbs all in all a very good story i could say more but it will spoil alot so I will refrain from it though keep uobthe good work mate Ps: I kinda wabt to see goten go to other world's outside of db universe he does have the ability aftwr fighting janenmba i think it would give the story more longevity and soace for you to crate some interesting filler arc
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Translator here, giving this book a 5 star review. Because why not? I worked hard for this shid! The story start is a bit shaky and full of plot holes. Basically the author wanted to have Goten as a protagonist, but wanted his situation to be similar to Future Trunks, where Trunks timeline had Androids killing off everyone. In this fanfic AU timeline, Goten is the only warrior left on Earth after Cell kills everybody in Cell games. Author didn't want to give up on dragon balls, so he kept dende alive. But also doesn't want to revive the Z warriors who died, so he gave a flimsy reason that they don't want to revive saying that deceased should not interfere in the matters of the living. Although the real reason is given way later around after 57+ chapters. Canon is not strictly followed. Fanon is used a lot in this, so don't expect there to be canon stuff, somethings won't even make sense in canonical terms. Overall, it was a nice read. Give it a try. Don't question weird stuff, sometimes the stuff and reasoning of Chinese authors does not make sense. We don't question two things! One is the exaggerated numbers in the CNs, and other is the cast social norms/behavior.
No suelo escribir reseñas, prefiero mantener mis opiniones para mi solo, salvo algunas excepciones. Esta es una de ellas. Esta es una de las pocas traducciones que leído que más me han agradado. Es simplemente perfecto, se nota que el traductor le ha puesto muchas ganas, a diferencia de los muchos que simplemente utilizan la ia y los traductores, llenos de fallos y mal escritura. No tenía esperanzas, pero ahora me alegro de haberlo visto, no solo la traducción esta muy hecha, sino que también ha puesto atención a los detalles y se nota que ha modificado los elementos originales que escribio el autor chino, que suelen ser siempre lo mismo. En general, estoy completamente satisfecho y no puedo darle menos de un 10. Espero con ganas la siguiente actualización.
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It's a good fanfic I really enjoyed it but chapter update are quite slow which I don't appreciate aside from that story development is very goof
C'est de loin la meilleur fanfic DB que j'ai lue et j'en ai lu beaucoup j'espère que l'auteur ira jusqu'au bout en tout cas chapeau 👍👍👍,......,........,.........,.........
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Great translating, appreciate an actual translated fiction that doesn't change the name language every other paragraph. that alone is worth a high review
Este doc es basura definitivamente el creador de este doc se fumo algo... JIREN FUSIONADO CON SIGO MISMO EN EL TORNEO DEL PODER. El creador puso la excusa de que el otro JIREN viene de otra línia temporal y el MC llegó a esa conclusión ¿Porqué Daishinkan no hizo nada? El escritor definitivamente insulta la inteligencia del gran sacerdote
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Author did an amazing job translating this I can tell it wasn’t easy. What I love more than the story is the author’s notes. Can’t stop laughing. He literally says what we think hahahah.
Thanks Man🫡😊 hdhsludludludludldljxljiddxjckccjdujujxjxjjxjjiiiixjxjjjxjxhdhsludludludludldljxljiddxjckccjdujujxjxjjxjjiiiixjxjjjxjx
I am impressed with the quality of the translation. Definitely perfect for people craving some DB.
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This fanfic Is really good in my opinion. The characters are great. The mc is op and I’m a sucker for op mc’s. But either way I recommend this book to all of you.
Very good translation you can tell the amount of effort was put in and the author genuinely cares about the quality.
Remarcable traduccion work, This is the first MTL fanfic that I actually im ejoying. The ship of goten x videl is funny and i like it. Keep the good work and hope for more chapters. Totally recommended
Usually Dragon Ball ffs also have the disease of 100s of ch per fight scene, but this ff is quite good for a Dragon Ball ff without the said disease also the translation quality, progress speed and update speed are quite good so great job Translator and Author
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Dragon Ball does go well with Chinese set of mind somehow 😂 The story is complete AU, forget about canon and just enjoy a new set timeline altogether. A MC that is completely evolving on each fight, and fight like a Saiyan enjoying and getting benefits of their Zenkai boost while he is at it. Hell even Broly is the DBZ movie one with the potential of the DBS one, an absolute evil savage. PD: Get this fair warning there is baching of the main cast on this one and yet conserve the essence of their personalities.