19รีวิว
4.26
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
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h sing read through chapter 28, I've read enough. the system was inventive and the missions creative if not completely out of left field on what they rewarded. having the "is his master really a dude or a girl through magic reassignment? is he really a dude or a girl through reassignment" came out of nowhere. not saying it's a bad plot device but with my goldfish brain, i clearly missed the setup.
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one word to describe this novel trash ,i recommend not to read this novel and it better to read some cultivation chinese novel than it because the story is utter nonsense without any meaning ,the mc is like brain dead idiot ,the novel filled with plot holes and grammar nonsense
other than MC have IQ of bucket full of stones and a disgusting human being the story development is not good cause the event's happens too fast without you even comprehending what happened and all character have zero awareness of themselves or around them make it feel like it's forced to show that MC is intelligent or smt. overall this story need to go slower and it's character should have a more personality than "big bazonga mom" or "the tsundere girl that only know two sentences" but I know you would delete this one too cause you can't criticism
the story is good but I suggest please don't make the mc so good and soft hearted who just go around to help anyone please change his personality
I have no problem with the story it is so good but try to upload multiple chapters a day it would a good time to update multiple chaoters
as far I have read I really liked the novel and it's seems to progress at a good pace and also [I will personally kill yuto if he didn't add Natalia to his collection]
just started reading i just read few chapters and it's soo good just wish it to be a harem
this story have potential and the characters are all set up in a well manner. MC has a sense of humour and MC talks to FL in a manner which want to read more. I Hope author keeps up like this
Bro can you think the character age?5 years old have b*obs?up the age? Sorry for my opinion. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I like this story, the MC is kinda annoying but I suppose that was on purpose and you plan for him to develop slightly and he already did a little.
I hope your book becomes famous, my friend. It is amazing It is also simple and because of its simplicity, it is beautiful I just hope you improve your writing in some dialogues. I don't know who is talking.
Greatest novel I have read in 2 months, hope the author can continue to write such an amazing novel, he can have all my power stones everyday.
i can't, for the life of me, understand why in the name of whoever rules the universe you decided to make this a harem. You have a butler, reincarnated, you also added a system which already degrades the quality with its mere presence AND THEN you added harem. Why woud someone sabotage their own story like this, harem makes no sense, and it degrades the wtiting no matter how "well" its done. No sane woman would ever accept something like that unless the guy is a king and can put their line in the throne, but even then there is no love and everyone knows no love can be involved in an harem. Just whyyy!!! posting this review as 5 starts to not hurt the ratings
h sing read through chapter 28, I've read enough. the system was inventive and the missions creative if not completely out of left field on what they rewarded. having the "is his master really a dude or a girl through magic reassignment? is he really a dude or a girl through reassignment" came out of nowhere. not saying it's a bad plot device but with my goldfish brain, i clearly missed the setup.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ one word to describe this novel trash ,i recommend not to read this novel and it better to read some cultivation chinese novel than it because the story is utter nonsense without any meaning ,the mc is like brain dead idiot ,the novel filled with plot holes and grammar nonsense
other than MC have IQ of bucket full of stones and a disgusting human being the story development is not good cause the event's happens too fast without you even comprehending what happened and all character have zero awareness of themselves or around them make it feel like it's forced to show that MC is intelligent or smt. overall this story need to go slower and it's character should have a more personality than "big bazonga mom" or "the tsundere girl that only know two sentences" but I know you would delete this one too cause you can't criticism
the story is good but I suggest please don't make the mc so good and soft hearted who just go around to help anyone please change his personality
I have no problem with the story it is so good but try to upload multiple chapters a day it would a good time to update multiple chaoters
as far I have read I really liked the novel and it's seems to progress at a good pace and also [I will personally kill yuto if he didn't add Natalia to his collection]
just started reading i just read few chapters and it's soo good just wish it to be a harem
this story have potential and the characters are all set up in a well manner. MC has a sense of humour and MC talks to FL in a manner which want to read more. I Hope author keeps up like this
Bro can you think the character age?5 years old have b*obs?up the age? Sorry for my opinion. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I like this story, the MC is kinda annoying but I suppose that was on purpose and you plan for him to develop slightly and he already did a little.
I hope your book becomes famous, my friend. It is amazing It is also simple and because of its simplicity, it is beautiful I just hope you improve your writing in some dialogues. I don't know who is talking.
Greatest novel I have read in 2 months, hope the author can continue to write such an amazing novel, he can have all my power stones everyday.
i can't, for the life of me, understand why in the name of whoever rules the universe you decided to make this a harem. You have a butler, reincarnated, you also added a system which already degrades the quality with its mere presence AND THEN you added harem. Why woud someone sabotage their own story like this, harem makes no sense, and it degrades the wtiting no matter how "well" its done. No sane woman would ever accept something like that unless the guy is a king and can put their line in the throne, but even then there is no love and everyone knows no love can be involved in an harem. Just whyyy!!! posting this review as 5 starts to not hurt the ratings