Anakin_Lost

Anakin_Lost

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2021-08-15 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
22 hours ago
Commented

so I'm only in danger if killing me is free?

"No, we won't. We have no right to control where you go or what you do." Leo replied calmly, "But, we will warn you about the danger of betrayal. That's the only thing I can't forgive about. If you betray and attack your own friends on a mission, my organization will spend nothing to destroy you. Of course, it also applied to the client."

Mercenary Harem in Murim Novel

Mercenary Harem in Murim Novel

Fantasy · ShuviLily

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
22 hours ago
Commented

take jobs*

"If you're wondering who I am, then let me introduce myself." He took a deep breath and continued, "I am Leo, the founder and leader of the Hallowed Insect. We are a new mercenary group, a gathering of people with nowhere to go. If you want to ask about our position, then I will say that we're perfectly neutral. We took job from everyone as long as there is a decent pay."

Mercenary Harem in Murim Novel

Mercenary Harem in Murim Novel

Fantasy · ShuviLily

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
3 days ago
Commented

cause them what?

Richard initially didn't pay attention to these pre-canon events much since he knew interfering with them would cause this world severely.

Struggling as a Villain

Struggling as a Villain

Fantasy · RashCore

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
3 days ago
Commented

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A big boulder that weighs over three hundred kilograms was to be carried on Richard's back while he climbed the mountain. The challenge is that the path he would take would be steep and fragile, which means, if he let go of his telekinesis even for a moment and allowed the weight of the boulder to drop on himself, then along with crushing pain, he would fall down the mountain as well.

Struggling as a Villain

Struggling as a Villain

Fantasy · RashCore

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
5 days ago
Posted

the premise and characters are nice but the grammar and spelling mistakes are so frequent it is crazy how this ended up as the freebie today. author, this one just isn't for me because even by WN standards this is just too broken but I don't want you to think I'm just trashing it. The romance scenes were well done and i liked how you structured his awakening while still leaving some mystery. With a good editor or grammarly, I could see this book on Amazon tomorrow.

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
5 days ago
Commented

on

Lily sat up, her fingers tracing lightly over my chest as she stared at me with admiration. "Your awakening. Ahh- Fuck me and use me as much as you want from now." 

Welcome to the Innocent World

Welcome to the Innocent World

Fantasy · Rin_Hearts

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
7 days ago
Replied to Luciferjl

sure, you have a system tag but as of ch 48 there's no hint of a system. it's just "oh the goddess let me see levels/tiers now..." halfway through the free chapters and there isnt really any character the reader is set up to like/hate/feel indifferent to.

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
8 days ago
Posted

a story with a good idea that never materialized. the betrayal leading to transmigration is tired so if you do it, do it right. as some other reviews mentioned, the MC will showcase powers and then the author goes 'oh yeah the goddess helped him with that.' To me, it was a half done attempt complete with mostly ok grammar. it's a fun read but don't expect to add it to your library unless you are truly out of options.

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
8 days ago
Commented

didn't he just fight 12 of them?

"The Nyphorites?" Jolthar's brow furrowed. "I thought they were just legends—creatures of darkness and chaos."

The Sinful Young Master

The Sinful Young Master

Fantasy · Luciferjl

Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost
8 days ago
Commented

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Another male voice said, "Thank the gods, he didn't die, if not grandmother will bite me off."

The Sinful Young Master

The Sinful Young Master

Fantasy · Luciferjl