Reborn in Hollywood

LV 1

Jakob_Timm

Deeply Racist and terrible grammar, it reads like a typical chinese Novel with racism everywhere. Deeply Racist and terrible grammar, it reads like a typical chinese Novel with racism everywhere.

LV 1

azzari

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LV 2

KingLettuce

First thing first the grammar while not horrible is off. Sometimes things are written backwards like instead of saying “he walked forward” it’s written like “forward. He walked”. So some things are a little confusing like there are time skips out of nowhere, and things happen very fast. However for the most part you can sort of understand what is going on, the idea of the story is great but the overall translation is just ok. You can try using something like grammerly to help make the sentences make sense but that is not foolproof so good luck 👍 Si