A True Dragon in GOT

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AinzO0alGown

Ooooooooooo who lives in a pineapple under the sea? SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS

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QuiteSarcastic

Great so far, i just hope that you won't make him become a human semi-permanently. Which 90% of the stories on this platform does to every non-human main character.

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mow

One thing I will say is that this book is great, very good grammar alongside story telling, the way it all comes together just flows very nicely. Unfortunately It's not exactly my cup of tea when I don't see any of the traits that I expect from a dragon with the MC being somewhat tame and just goes along the flow of others. BUT from what I've read from others he is a lore accurate golden dragon from D&D in which they are protectors/guardians with no thoughts about being domineering something that I knew nothing at all of until I read an explanations and cheers to the author for staying true to character but at the end of the day Its just not what I'm looking for.

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accidentaljihad

its a fun enough read, very passive and submissive mc tho, doesnt do much on his own.. also not really like a true dragon from dnd at all, all he has from dnd is some spells, the color and name

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The_Olympians_Rule

It’s alright. Premises is cool, but not really fleshed out. Everything is pretty much skipped over. He’s like 5000 years old and has personally done nothing. Writings fine, sometimes words are missing, other times they just seem jumbled up. Character interaction is pretty boring. It feels like he’s only interacted with his supposed bestfriend twice.

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Irgendwe

The idea is good, but it's execution is not. I can't complain about updating stability but about everything else. The Grammar needs some work, it is readable but there are many mistakes. The World makes barely any sense, it feels like the Author just likes to exaggerate. He describes Valyria as a city that could hold 'hundrets of millions of people' and his colony of kobolds grows to have several million even though they only live on a small part of Valyria. The Author also loves to do timeskips, whether that is with impossibly long flight times (several days to cross Valyria on a dragon / over a week to fly to the Westerlands from Valyria, when a boat needed 1-2 months) and him just skipping most of the MCs aging. In one chapter he's under 10 y/o the next he is 1000+ y/o and hasn't grown mentally. He always talks about being superior to humans in regards to intelligence and other stuff, but doesn't show it. And these are just Points I don't like, there are more points: - MC can turn into human - MC lives with humans - MC pretty much ignores the kobolds that are under him in favour of humans for no apparent reason and more that I either forgot or haven't gotten to yet as I am still on Chapter 22 I'll maybe write a comment to Update this

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JohnnyReever

The idea is okay. But it is just another Dragon that can turn human to ‘mingle’ with humans fic. There are just too many of those and very few where the MC just remains dragon. If you are into that go for it.

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Carbon_6597

its just another person who is technically a dragon but just turns into a human and is mostly a human. nothing interesting. no DnD dragon going absolutely crazy. its just a human who can use magic in got and can turn into a dragon to fly from point a to point b

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FuDaNsHi069

I have traveled far and searched through the archives of this never ending library without an ounce of hope to find a book that I find worthy, only to stumble upon one of your works once more through sheer coincidence, I have enjoyed the book so far I wish that you never stop creating such novels, may good tidings be with you and may your imagination never cease to create such wonders, I believe this sentence best portray my adventure until i found one your work. " I came looking for bronze only to find gold. " Now let us rejoice.

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CONNER_Jackson

Love the story so far but could you go into more about what abilities from d n d ?

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Sagvey_Ay

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Omnoseji

I like it a lot and enjoyed reading it

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Odil

Just finished it and here's my honest review: Slight grammar mistakes here and there but nothing jarring. The romance was a bit rushed from the side of MC, although it was well explored from the side of the FL. And the ending is good, not the greatest, but a solid 4 out of 5. Now onto the good points: The story flows very well, MC is likeable and rarely if ever makes questionable decisions (he's very faithful to the DnD dragon lore). All the side characters are well fleshed out, and rarely feel 'flat'. I much prefer the focus on a smaller cast but with well fleshed out interactions and thoughts rather than a large cast of two dimensional characters. On that front Author did good. Fanfic is finished, enough said about updating stability. World Background is oftentimes the hardest to rate, however here the seemless blend of GoT and DnD makes it an easy 5.

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Zay_Hayden

Very good webNovel fan fic. Tbh at this point its his own story but with some Got names and events. All around very good. Only wish there was more. The storY takes its time for sure, and youll wish the ch were longer.

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I_am_Your_mommy

Author are you really gonna torture us, we have to wait a whole day for your amazing chapters can you pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee make a påtreon??????

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Abeeba

Great story the only minor(minor because i think it's gonna change) bad thing i can say about the story so far is that i feel like we haven't seen a lot of the MC interacting with people/intelligent beings but as we are getting closer to the begining to GOT tv series i think/hope that the MC is gonna interact more with people/intelligent beings

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ElCarpincho

it's very good so far, plz don't drop it.

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Yyyyyyyygggg

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Liv_Borealle

It is too early to know what direction it will go in the future but it is interesting enough. Im really curious how the canon will be handled.

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Trafford

Splendid combination of ASOIAF and DnD... I like it very much and hopefully it would be continued for a long time, has enormous potenrial... especially if we see more of DnD world