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I'm ashamed i didn't review earlier and even forgor honestly if you like the fanfiction you like If it's not your style it's not i personally enjoyed it the comedy feels real with some jokes landing and others Don't but they don't ruin the story in any way ._.)
It's an enjoyable fanfic give it a try.................................................................................................................................................
Second One Piece fanfic I've read so far, and honestly, it beats the first one I've read. The MC isn't OP, which is quite nice. It is quite silly due to the random crewmates that are pulled from other animes and shows but they surprisingly do fit their roles in the crew, I don't know how to explain it clearly but them being together just fits. I also enjoy how it's not set at the same time as when the Strawhats set sail but earlier than that, 10 years. Can't wait for more updates.
Well, its actualy good read. I don't know if translator adjusted story or directly translated but flow of story is surprisingly smooth, without common chinese ff cons like everyone is as dumb as Rock and only MC is smart, no forced loyalyty on summoned characters, although they didn't even ask about way to go back, but there is some lines saying about contract or smth... Also no sword eyebrows super handsome MC making every girl fall for him just from one look, and constant mention of how handsome MC is. Well overall its solid comedy ff.
I can't believe I wasted 30 minutes of my life reading the first 5 chapters of a sh*tty Chinese fanfic because you put that info in a self review instead of in the synopsis. I hope you drown in Chinese gutter oil.
if you dont want to look dumb by laughing stupidly on the floor this novel not for you seriously every chapter has me laughing put loud that my coworks asked me several times what was so funny got me in trouble too. this is a amazing read and highly recommend i left a comment that suggested giving aqua the ability to curse and bless ppl and objects. like anyone curse severs any connection or benefit given by water, and anyone blessed be it devil fruit user losses the weakness to water and is able to swim but anyone recieving this blessing must be in person personally touched by aqua leaving a mark and must be a devoted believer in her !!! just to make the story better by causing more problems for our mc imagine the headache hell have because everyone covets the ability to over come a huge weakness in this amazing world. i really hope the author sees this and considers my suggestion.
Recommended, a peculiar story. It may not attract much attention at first, but then as the story progresses it becomes quite entertaining. 🫡🫡
This is great. Perfect. No character assasination here. At this point, that is commendable. Aqua is perfect. So is King and Meowth. Give it a read. Probably wont regret it.
Worth it, i like the development of this story. Its not boring, it makes me want to read more😍😍
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add spong Bob as cook krabby patty as main dish plz spong bob looking for job when carby fired him
Amazing fanfic ... i really like the comedy ... interaction between the crew ... and its just gives me both konosuba and one piece vibes mixed together creating an amazing journey ... a must read ...
Sinceramente no puedo leer este fanfic es realmente molesto ... y me refiero al mc no a la historia estuvo esperando no se cuanto tiempo para ahorra 3millones para conseguir su primer tripulante pero en todo el tiempo que estuvo juntando no hice nada.... absolutamente nada para hacerse mas fuerte y dejar de ser un patético perdedor que ni a un bandido puede derrotar, estoy muy seguro que incluso luffy podría derrotarlo y el siendo un adulto no puede
MC wants to seem smart and far-sighted, but I read everything up to the 40th chapter, only makes me doubt this. Although this is a comedy, it’s hard for me to imagine a person who would actually find it funny what was happening. MC is a pathetic loser who was always waiting for the accumulation of 3kk bellies for the first call and he got a kind and good partner, a little stupid and naive, but the only thing he does is insult her, although in reality, he himself is even more garbage. The whole story is based on the fact that MC is always trying to position himself as a victim of the gacha system, but if you think about it, without the system he is much more trash than a minor character.
The fanfic is really good, the writing is enjoyable, and the characters' actions are consistent with their personalities, which is quite entertaining. I would like to know the name of the work, but keep up the good tradition
What is the name of the original work ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? The work is very fun.
hay muchos pequeños huecos , e inconsistencia en algunas partes, la comprension del autor con one piece es incompleto, solo les dire que le falta estudiar mas al autor.
Parece entretenido? Aunque es una lastima no ver "romance" en la descripción, pero la historia debe de ser genial para soltar risas. Además, aqua es indudablemente un absoluto monstruo, la capacidad de revivir a cualquiera en cualquier momento es ridícula, personas como ryouma, son honorables y horriblemente poderosos, revivirlo te daría una deuda de gratitud, y te daría a un samurai OP a tu tripulación, hay muchos que también seguirían un camino similar, y la capacidad de curar enfermedades y otras cosas, aqua no es tan inútil como la hacen parecer, aunque king, en un mundo donde incluso los débiles quieren retar a los fuertes, king engine puede dar miedo, pero solo terminara exitando aún más a sus rivales, aunque su suerte debe de seguir siendo útil XD
Well, author san, you should add Tom to the crew. he is very funny and quite op with his toon force. if you read I SUMMONED TOM AT START IN ONE PIECE
Shameless Review! Again!. I took this one as it's quite fun and it was a waste not translate it!. Hopefully you can enjoy it, and have some fun, and if you're interested join my p@treon to get access to more chapters in all my fanfics!
I'm ashamed i didn't review earlier and even forgor honestly if you like the fanfiction you like If it's not your style it's not i personally enjoyed it the comedy feels real with some jokes landing and others Don't but they don't ruin the story in any way ._.)
It's an enjoyable fanfic give it a try.................................................................................................................................................
Second One Piece fanfic I've read so far, and honestly, it beats the first one I've read. The MC isn't OP, which is quite nice. It is quite silly due to the random crewmates that are pulled from other animes and shows but they surprisingly do fit their roles in the crew, I don't know how to explain it clearly but them being together just fits. I also enjoy how it's not set at the same time as when the Strawhats set sail but earlier than that, 10 years. Can't wait for more updates.
Well, its actualy good read. I don't know if translator adjusted story or directly translated but flow of story is surprisingly smooth, without common chinese ff cons like everyone is as dumb as Rock and only MC is smart, no forced loyalyty on summoned characters, although they didn't even ask about way to go back, but there is some lines saying about contract or smth... Also no sword eyebrows super handsome MC making every girl fall for him just from one look, and constant mention of how handsome MC is. Well overall its solid comedy ff.
I can't believe I wasted 30 minutes of my life reading the first 5 chapters of a sh*tty Chinese fanfic because you put that info in a self review instead of in the synopsis. I hope you drown in Chinese gutter oil.
if you dont want to look dumb by laughing stupidly on the floor this novel not for you seriously every chapter has me laughing put loud that my coworks asked me several times what was so funny got me in trouble too. this is a amazing read and highly recommend i left a comment that suggested giving aqua the ability to curse and bless ppl and objects. like anyone curse severs any connection or benefit given by water, and anyone blessed be it devil fruit user losses the weakness to water and is able to swim but anyone recieving this blessing must be in person personally touched by aqua leaving a mark and must be a devoted believer in her !!! just to make the story better by causing more problems for our mc imagine the headache hell have because everyone covets the ability to over come a huge weakness in this amazing world. i really hope the author sees this and considers my suggestion.
Recommended, a peculiar story. It may not attract much attention at first, but then as the story progresses it becomes quite entertaining. 🫡🫡
This is great. Perfect. No character assasination here. At this point, that is commendable. Aqua is perfect. So is King and Meowth. Give it a read. Probably wont regret it.
Worth it, i like the development of this story. Its not boring, it makes me want to read more😍😍
[img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Mc is very idiot. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
add spong Bob as cook krabby patty as main dish plz spong bob looking for job when carby fired him
Amazing fanfic ... i really like the comedy ... interaction between the crew ... and its just gives me both konosuba and one piece vibes mixed together creating an amazing journey ... a must read ...
Sinceramente no puedo leer este fanfic es realmente molesto ... y me refiero al mc no a la historia estuvo esperando no se cuanto tiempo para ahorra 3millones para conseguir su primer tripulante pero en todo el tiempo que estuvo juntando no hice nada.... absolutamente nada para hacerse mas fuerte y dejar de ser un patético perdedor que ni a un bandido puede derrotar, estoy muy seguro que incluso luffy podría derrotarlo y el siendo un adulto no puede
MC wants to seem smart and far-sighted, but I read everything up to the 40th chapter, only makes me doubt this. Although this is a comedy, it’s hard for me to imagine a person who would actually find it funny what was happening. MC is a pathetic loser who was always waiting for the accumulation of 3kk bellies for the first call and he got a kind and good partner, a little stupid and naive, but the only thing he does is insult her, although in reality, he himself is even more garbage. The whole story is based on the fact that MC is always trying to position himself as a victim of the gacha system, but if you think about it, without the system he is much more trash than a minor character.
The fanfic is really good, the writing is enjoyable, and the characters' actions are consistent with their personalities, which is quite entertaining. I would like to know the name of the work, but keep up the good tradition
What is the name of the original work ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? The work is very fun.
hay muchos pequeños huecos , e inconsistencia en algunas partes, la comprension del autor con one piece es incompleto, solo les dire que le falta estudiar mas al autor.
Parece entretenido? Aunque es una lastima no ver "romance" en la descripción, pero la historia debe de ser genial para soltar risas. Además, aqua es indudablemente un absoluto monstruo, la capacidad de revivir a cualquiera en cualquier momento es ridícula, personas como ryouma, son honorables y horriblemente poderosos, revivirlo te daría una deuda de gratitud, y te daría a un samurai OP a tu tripulación, hay muchos que también seguirían un camino similar, y la capacidad de curar enfermedades y otras cosas, aqua no es tan inútil como la hacen parecer, aunque king, en un mundo donde incluso los débiles quieren retar a los fuertes, king engine puede dar miedo, pero solo terminara exitando aún más a sus rivales, aunque su suerte debe de seguir siendo útil XD
Well, author san, you should add Tom to the crew. he is very funny and quite op with his toon force. if you read I SUMMONED TOM AT START IN ONE PIECE
Shameless Review! Again!. I took this one as it's quite fun and it was a waste not translate it!. Hopefully you can enjoy it, and have some fun, and if you're interested join my p@treon to get access to more chapters in all my fanfics!