Reviews of I’m a Immortal Tavernkeeper, But My S-Rank Daughter Doesn’t Know That! by NandoFalske - Webnovel

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4.51

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NandoFalske

Hello, I'm the author of this novel. I'm here to thank everyone who's reading it for your support and to say a few words! :D This story is something I've had in mind for a while. Of course, I'm always thinking about hundreds of ideas for new novels, but we know there isn't a chance we can work on all of them. So this is an amalgamation of some ideas with similar themes and also with strong inspirations from novels with the theme of the return from death, but with a totally original world and characters. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it, because it's complicated to think about the ramifications that each different action by the characters generates in time travel stories. If you have any questions before reading the novel, feel free to use this comment as a space to ask me! [img=recommend]

11mth
ดู 14 การตอบกลับ
DaemonDave

The story has refreshing concept with likeable characters and was a fascinating and exciting read up until a point towards the "end" where all of the tension simply vanished.. unfortunately the "end" can only be called an open end at best and seemingly a dropped novel in reality. there are too many questions left unanswered, the story didn't come to a conclusion, right when it started picking up some kind of tension again. While i can recommend reading it, i can only do so with the warning of having to expect an unfinished work being marked as "completed"

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Trigen
LV 14 Badge

Chapter 12 rn. I thought mc will have some kind of unique power to resurrect. But no. Atleast so far it's same power as from rezero subaru even with the thing about not able to tell anything(even first oponent is veeeery similar to Elsa) . But this time MC is skilled, though older hunter with ability to fight strong opponents. With connections and knowledge from his time as hunter he can do a lot. Writing so far in those few chapters is good, seems interesting. I only hope there will be original plot not just copy from rezero.

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Maarten_

Thought I found a completed story. Sadly the author dropped it otherwise, it would be a good story

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mcvamulv

I've only read the first 40 chapters, so this review is based on that. Found the premise and the world interesting, but the story really poorly written. The timeline in the story jumps all over the place, and many times making it hard to keep up at times. Felt like when he traveled that he left the town, something happened on travel, and then he arrived at destination within like 10 lines. Sometimes felt like parts of the story was missing, and when i switched chapters i had to go back and forth a couple of times, because i thought i missed a chapter. And after 40 chapters(hopefully changes later) i dont really understand why the daughter is even in the story, i feel like if you replaced the daughter with some random person, it would change nothing in the story at all.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Slemie

Am currently at chapter 20, and so far the fighting has been amazing and story has been super cool. The writing isn’t confusing at all either. With the dad being a really cool main character and not over-the-top powers either, the power balance has been dope too. Definantly a 8/10 for me so far!

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Time_Alter

I am really enjoying this book it like My Daughter Left the Nest and Returned an S-Rank Adventurer meets Re Zero. Tho I wish the chapter were longer but the story moving at really nice pace not to slow not to fast I really nice to see story with a good platonic bond. Definitely give this novel a try

10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SleepyGod

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10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Curtney_Ol

I'm really enjoying it! I'm absolutely eating it up! And you, stranger, who may come to hate it, you can disagree with me, no problem. I'm already familiar with the way the author writes and I really like it, and if you don't, that's fine. I'm reading this novel hard! And I look forward to more every day! Please go back to publishing two chapters a day, Nando!

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
IAMABOOB

To be honest, it's been a really good read. Good grammar, a good plot, intelligent dialog and engaging battles. I expected there to be a fight in this first chapter, as fantasy novels usually do, so I was surprised when there wasn't, but it was made up for with great narrations that conveyed real tension between the characters. I'll be back to do another review in the future!

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11mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
LadyBL

The best novel I've read in a while. Very good! Keep up the good work, author-san! Just leaving my review so that this story gets more exposure, of course it certainly deserves it

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11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
HyoukaH

Nice Book <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Slaveeeee

Really enjoying this read! I'm writing this review just to make sure it gets the attention it deserves! Very well written btw![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Torpezord

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
KR_Games

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ElWolfLaNoche

My favorite author just wrote another masterpiece! Yeah! I'll be supporting you a lot, my friend! I hope you have a great success and find lots of inspiration!

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11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Cuban_Pete_1999

5 stars just for the concept. Too many romantic/sexual love stories. A wholesome story of platonic love like this is really refreshing. Not to mention, it is beautifully written. Unfortunately, I won't be able to read it when it eventually goes premium.

11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
NandoFalske

Hello, I'm the author of this novel. I'm here to thank everyone who's reading it for your support and to say a few words! :D This story is something I've had in mind for a while. Of course, I'm always thinking about hundreds of ideas for new novels, but we know there isn't a chance we can work on all of them. So this is an amalgamation of some ideas with similar themes and also with strong inspirations from novels with the theme of the return from death, but with a totally original world and characters. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it, because it's complicated to think about the ramifications that each different action by the characters generates in time travel stories. If you have any questions before reading the novel, feel free to use this comment as a space to ask me! [img=recommend]

11mth
ดู 14 การตอบกลับ
DaemonDave

The story has refreshing concept with likeable characters and was a fascinating and exciting read up until a point towards the "end" where all of the tension simply vanished.. unfortunately the "end" can only be called an open end at best and seemingly a dropped novel in reality. there are too many questions left unanswered, the story didn't come to a conclusion, right when it started picking up some kind of tension again. While i can recommend reading it, i can only do so with the warning of having to expect an unfinished work being marked as "completed"

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Trigen
LV 14 Badge

Chapter 12 rn. I thought mc will have some kind of unique power to resurrect. But no. Atleast so far it's same power as from rezero subaru even with the thing about not able to tell anything(even first oponent is veeeery similar to Elsa) . But this time MC is skilled, though older hunter with ability to fight strong opponents. With connections and knowledge from his time as hunter he can do a lot. Writing so far in those few chapters is good, seems interesting. I only hope there will be original plot not just copy from rezero.

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Maarten_

Thought I found a completed story. Sadly the author dropped it otherwise, it would be a good story

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mcvamulv

I've only read the first 40 chapters, so this review is based on that. Found the premise and the world interesting, but the story really poorly written. The timeline in the story jumps all over the place, and many times making it hard to keep up at times. Felt like when he traveled that he left the town, something happened on travel, and then he arrived at destination within like 10 lines. Sometimes felt like parts of the story was missing, and when i switched chapters i had to go back and forth a couple of times, because i thought i missed a chapter. And after 40 chapters(hopefully changes later) i dont really understand why the daughter is even in the story, i feel like if you replaced the daughter with some random person, it would change nothing in the story at all.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Slemie

Am currently at chapter 20, and so far the fighting has been amazing and story has been super cool. The writing isn’t confusing at all either. With the dad being a really cool main character and not over-the-top powers either, the power balance has been dope too. Definantly a 8/10 for me so far!

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Time_Alter

I am really enjoying this book it like My Daughter Left the Nest and Returned an S-Rank Adventurer meets Re Zero. Tho I wish the chapter were longer but the story moving at really nice pace not to slow not to fast I really nice to see story with a good platonic bond. Definitely give this novel a try

10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SleepyGod

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10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Curtney_Ol

I'm really enjoying it! I'm absolutely eating it up! And you, stranger, who may come to hate it, you can disagree with me, no problem. I'm already familiar with the way the author writes and I really like it, and if you don't, that's fine. I'm reading this novel hard! And I look forward to more every day! Please go back to publishing two chapters a day, Nando!

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
IAMABOOB

To be honest, it's been a really good read. Good grammar, a good plot, intelligent dialog and engaging battles. I expected there to be a fight in this first chapter, as fantasy novels usually do, so I was surprised when there wasn't, but it was made up for with great narrations that conveyed real tension between the characters. I'll be back to do another review in the future!

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11mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
LadyBL

The best novel I've read in a while. Very good! Keep up the good work, author-san! Just leaving my review so that this story gets more exposure, of course it certainly deserves it

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11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
HyoukaH

Nice Book <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Slaveeeee

Really enjoying this read! I'm writing this review just to make sure it gets the attention it deserves! Very well written btw![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Torpezord

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
KR_Games

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ElWolfLaNoche

My favorite author just wrote another masterpiece! Yeah! I'll be supporting you a lot, my friend! I hope you have a great success and find lots of inspiration!

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11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Cuban_Pete_1999

5 stars just for the concept. Too many romantic/sexual love stories. A wholesome story of platonic love like this is really refreshing. Not to mention, it is beautifully written. Unfortunately, I won't be able to read it when it eventually goes premium.

11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ