JJK: Red Priest Pathway

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amattsu

As mentioned in the description, this is a re-upload of my fanfic from the "Vandalizer". I would be very grateful if you could support the fanfic with power stones.

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WealthyRaccoon

really wanted to like this but the power scaling is just all over the place with characters seemingly becoming stronger and weaker entirely based on the author's whims.

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Starry_Sky_0213

this has got to be the single worst fic I've ever read. if you want a story we're nothing makes sense, diologe is all over the place, confusion on what's going on or who is who or what is what, power scaleing, observed and obscene neefing to the mc and buffing to litteraly every one else, wishy washy on who the mc is and the way he is viewed, called a criminal because he is dangerous goes to school is called special grade is not special grade is treated like special grade is still not special grade acts like special grade but stil yet again not special grade and everyone else calls hima monster and and thinks he super strong and special grade then litterally turn to the person next to them and says not strong is weak and not special or special grade at all. confusing story. over all just pure nonsense and trash

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0Klein_amon0

I really like this, there aren't a lot of lotm fanfics and most of them are dropped the only problem I have is the update stability but ehh there must be a reason

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Walvd_

Dialogue is all over the place, even ai can be more coherent and humane than this. Feels like those trashy tl of chinese novels (I've read reincarnation paradise, i still had problem reading this). MC is adamant on thinking sorcerers are heroes(shounen mc type) and good guys(sure let's totally ignore corruption of jjk) And the most important is definitely that this mc is the last one who should be on the path of 'red priest' (I've read paragraph comments and wiki about red priest)

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wisdomseeker

It was worth to read but you need solidify power scaling and world settings since some powers from Red priest pathways can effect the world itself. Thanks for the fanfic tho ☺️

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KDAfrost

Its pretty good, one of the issues I had was the MC doesn't really fit the Red Priest pathway IMO, would be better of as something like the Darkness pathway but that could just be me.

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Whoruman

Definitely worth reading, one of the few fanfictions on this app with a plot, capable of bringing out the life in the characters, introduce new stuff and still keep the flavour of JJK. Props to you author.

L take it or not I don't care..................

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Datperson

Ngl feels like someone fed an ai the jjk story, incorporated lotm and had it spit out a story. Dialogue is kinda everywhere, power level is iffy but I expect that in fics that use powers from other stories

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Sailova_Sailo

problems : power: Red priest of war does not have flame teleport its the magician ability totally different patway. they have a flame transformation whic they use to travel. they gain the ability to enhance only at sequence 4 . instigation is not the power of the hunter pathway, but understandable as he seems to be connected to the sefirah .

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LeviathanEnvy

This is frankly so amazing it one of the best stories I've read on this app 👏 ; I can't wait for more chapters.

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guarek03

I'll get on it. AS long as i get more chapters to read. I'll give this story powerstones..............................................................................

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Cinderella777

Just asking if anyone know or remember this jjk fanfic mc is reborn in zenin clan, his name is Naoto zenin. and his power is enel fruit from one piece. Thanks

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Hakiurei

good

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cosmos1

The writing quality is really good, the dialogue flows nicely, and I love lord of mysteries novel. I really can't think of any complains for this story. Its a easy 5 stars for me.

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Back2Future

I have one question for u... What type of girls do u like??? Otherwise, I liked it. Not without mistakes, of course, but who doesn't make them?

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Elemise

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IQuakeI_V

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