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เขียนรีวิวit's normal-well, not the best, but something I would read again...............................................................................................
no se por que tanto hate, el fic es muy bueno, solo que algunas personas son muy impacientes y no pueden esperar a otro capitulo que explique el por que de lo que paso
es muy bueno--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Gostei muito da história gostaria de saber como terminar e espero que o pequeno Izuku encontre sua felicidade. É agradeço ao o(a) autora por cirar essa história.
I think the story is interesting and pretty cool so far. I would really like to see how it goes and what happens in later chapters
It's very forced and nonsense. If you read chapters 18 and 19 without even reading the story, you will understand what I mean.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Alright author you’re getting alot of flak for chapter 18 and 19 but i want to withhold a complete judgement until you wrap up the arc if you even decide to come back. you write very well and so far while a little annoying the teist in 18 and 19 is a a new thing for me i never read a fic where deku gets put in general studies and its a great change of pace for me everyone just want a brainless story where mc get a harem with every girl with a first and last name in mha with a broken mc and i guess they expected this to be the same but keep ya head up and do make what you envision
currently the plot thickens chapter 19. it's slow paced but I feel it has potential. Overall good read more chapter soon.
3 stars for me it's was getting good but why did you actually ruin it? and if you Already made an choice for story development why didn't you write it out and updated the story because leaving an cliff end?
It's good, only until ch 17, before the author destroyed his story at ch 18 and the final line at ch 19 and decided to protect his little ego by saying don't like don't read. well don't cry when the rating of your story goes downhill.
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It started ok, not exactly good but a quality expected in fanfics, however the story was already showing signs for a while of being something like a bashing fic where characters are dumbed down or a Deku villain fic where the world works against him to force him to become a villain. It ended up being both cases. The villain part hasn't happened yet, but everything points to this path with a lot of dumbing down from the beginning (Deku not registering a physical or storage quirck when he won the fish) to prejudiced authors against quirckless and a completely stupid Aizawa who didn't bother to investigate the reports of a quirckless attacking someone who has a powerful quirck 45 times, not even after seeing Bakugou being aggressive and attacking Izuku.
i've got to admit, i can see where you're going with this, and i can't wait to see what happens next. i've read some of your reveiws and i can tell you this, Ignore the people who only comment how the story is being ruined because of the latest chapters. Aizawa is doing what he's doing because of his strong beliefs in what makes a hero, as well as working off info that was altered in bakugos favor. until a real in depth investigation is done, this will not be discovered. in short, you are doing this right! i'm looking forward to what kind of shenanigans will occur until this is resolved, how the students act around their teacher, and both who and how it gets resolved. i will continue to check daily for the next chapter, good work!
Great novel! I love fishing abilities, unfortunately I can’t continue with this after chapter 19 because it is a completely illogical twist. Well here’s hoping that there’ll be a clone of this novel soon!
I don't understand why there is so much hatred towards chapters 18 and 19. This is a fanfic, and the author has the right to write as they please. However, the world seems to demand the same thing that has been seen in a thousand other fanfics: Deku with a super broken system and a harem. Personally, I enjoy the story and I like the way the author writes. I would like to see how the plot continues.
Everything went well until chapter 18 and 19. I'd recommend the author to simply remake those two since they make no sense at all. However, it is your fanfic so feel free to do whatever. Otherwise, the characters seems fine (except ch.18-19), the writing is good and well the world background is MHA. Overall, great work (except ch.18-19) and good luck :)
It started really good but chapter 18 and 19 ruined everything, forcing the plot too much for my taste..............................................................................................
Here you go a one Star. If you don't like it just don't write a story ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
No se por que tanto hate para el fic, literalmente todos quieren lo mismo de siempre y no se atreven a leer cosas diferentes, ver un fic en el que el prota no se coje a todas las chicas los hace arrancarse la cara, En conclusión, el fic no merece el hate de unas imbéciles que lo único que buscan son historias de fan services, en el que el prota tiene sexo con todas las chicas en cada capitulo
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์[Google translate] I don't know why there's so much hate, just because of one chapter, but honestly it's worth reading, as it will show some kind of perspective on the MY HERO universe, after all this is a fanfic, it's not supposed to be the same, but rather in the image what the author wants to show us. However, there are people who don't understand, and I would like it to remain the same as the canon. I honestly don't understand people. And author-san keep up the good work.
1)The romance seems forced to me. 2)The development seems stupid to me, Nezu would realize that the things written about Izuku would be lies, just from his behavior. 3)The development of the world is a copy and paste of the previous one, although an attempt was made to give it depth by making things much more complicated for people without powers.
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very good fic, I like izuku's ability, I haven't seen it anywhere else, I don't know if it existed before, but I discovered it through this fic.
it's normal-well, not the best, but something I would read again...............................................................................................
no se por que tanto hate, el fic es muy bueno, solo que algunas personas son muy impacientes y no pueden esperar a otro capitulo que explique el por que de lo que paso
es muy bueno--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Gostei muito da história gostaria de saber como terminar e espero que o pequeno Izuku encontre sua felicidade. É agradeço ao o(a) autora por cirar essa história.
I think the story is interesting and pretty cool so far. I would really like to see how it goes and what happens in later chapters
It's very forced and nonsense. If you read chapters 18 and 19 without even reading the story, you will understand what I mean.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Alright author you’re getting alot of flak for chapter 18 and 19 but i want to withhold a complete judgement until you wrap up the arc if you even decide to come back. you write very well and so far while a little annoying the teist in 18 and 19 is a a new thing for me i never read a fic where deku gets put in general studies and its a great change of pace for me everyone just want a brainless story where mc get a harem with every girl with a first and last name in mha with a broken mc and i guess they expected this to be the same but keep ya head up and do make what you envision
currently the plot thickens chapter 19. it's slow paced but I feel it has potential. Overall good read more chapter soon.
3 stars for me it's was getting good but why did you actually ruin it? and if you Already made an choice for story development why didn't you write it out and updated the story because leaving an cliff end?
It's good, only until ch 17, before the author destroyed his story at ch 18 and the final line at ch 19 and decided to protect his little ego by saying don't like don't read. well don't cry when the rating of your story goes downhill.
do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/do more plZ/
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It started ok, not exactly good but a quality expected in fanfics, however the story was already showing signs for a while of being something like a bashing fic where characters are dumbed down or a Deku villain fic where the world works against him to force him to become a villain. It ended up being both cases. The villain part hasn't happened yet, but everything points to this path with a lot of dumbing down from the beginning (Deku not registering a physical or storage quirck when he won the fish) to prejudiced authors against quirckless and a completely stupid Aizawa who didn't bother to investigate the reports of a quirckless attacking someone who has a powerful quirck 45 times, not even after seeing Bakugou being aggressive and attacking Izuku.
i've got to admit, i can see where you're going with this, and i can't wait to see what happens next. i've read some of your reveiws and i can tell you this, Ignore the people who only comment how the story is being ruined because of the latest chapters. Aizawa is doing what he's doing because of his strong beliefs in what makes a hero, as well as working off info that was altered in bakugos favor. until a real in depth investigation is done, this will not be discovered. in short, you are doing this right! i'm looking forward to what kind of shenanigans will occur until this is resolved, how the students act around their teacher, and both who and how it gets resolved. i will continue to check daily for the next chapter, good work!
Great novel! I love fishing abilities, unfortunately I can’t continue with this after chapter 19 because it is a completely illogical twist. Well here’s hoping that there’ll be a clone of this novel soon!
I don't understand why there is so much hatred towards chapters 18 and 19. This is a fanfic, and the author has the right to write as they please. However, the world seems to demand the same thing that has been seen in a thousand other fanfics: Deku with a super broken system and a harem. Personally, I enjoy the story and I like the way the author writes. I would like to see how the plot continues.
Everything went well until chapter 18 and 19. I'd recommend the author to simply remake those two since they make no sense at all. However, it is your fanfic so feel free to do whatever. Otherwise, the characters seems fine (except ch.18-19), the writing is good and well the world background is MHA. Overall, great work (except ch.18-19) and good luck :)
It started really good but chapter 18 and 19 ruined everything, forcing the plot too much for my taste..............................................................................................
Here you go a one Star. If you don't like it just don't write a story ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
No se por que tanto hate para el fic, literalmente todos quieren lo mismo de siempre y no se atreven a leer cosas diferentes, ver un fic en el que el prota no se coje a todas las chicas los hace arrancarse la cara, En conclusión, el fic no merece el hate de unas imbéciles que lo único que buscan son historias de fan services, en el que el prota tiene sexo con todas las chicas en cada capitulo
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์[Google translate] I don't know why there's so much hate, just because of one chapter, but honestly it's worth reading, as it will show some kind of perspective on the MY HERO universe, after all this is a fanfic, it's not supposed to be the same, but rather in the image what the author wants to show us. However, there are people who don't understand, and I would like it to remain the same as the canon. I honestly don't understand people. And author-san keep up the good work.
1)The romance seems forced to me. 2)The development seems stupid to me, Nezu would realize that the things written about Izuku would be lies, just from his behavior. 3)The development of the world is a copy and paste of the previous one, although an attempt was made to give it depth by making things much more complicated for people without powers.
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very good fic, I like izuku's ability, I haven't seen it anywhere else, I don't know if it existed before, but I discovered it through this fic.