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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Writing this and im not even through chapter 62 but so far very interesting plot line and build up. Random encounters happen early with short build up. Story and conversations play out like a script rather then a novel but its understandable/legible. The world itself and side characters could use a bit more intro build up but its still the early stages. As long as the main character and plot isnt rushed too much it is looking like a great potential. Writing mistakes and grammar could use some review edit before posting but not as bad as many othrr novels out there.
I’m going to do a little self review as I’d like to at least have one review here. I hope I’m being fair to myself. Hope I’m being a little harsh. I think the grammar and writing structure could use some work even though I haven’t seen any major flaws. I believe the premise is good and the story is unique. However, I should be careful about the story pacing. There’s potential but only if done correctly. Hope you do well and continue to update. It would be great if you could update more often but I understand if you can’t. [img=Speechless] Overall I would say it’s enjoyable and readable as a novel.
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If you're looking for an interesting story, This is one of the good ones, [img=update]
Writing this and im not even through chapter 62 but so far very interesting plot line and build up. Random encounters happen early with short build up. Story and conversations play out like a script rather then a novel but its understandable/legible. The world itself and side characters could use a bit more intro build up but its still the early stages. As long as the main character and plot isnt rushed too much it is looking like a great potential. Writing mistakes and grammar could use some review edit before posting but not as bad as many othrr novels out there.
I’m going to do a little self review as I’d like to at least have one review here. I hope I’m being fair to myself. Hope I’m being a little harsh. I think the grammar and writing structure could use some work even though I haven’t seen any major flaws. I believe the premise is good and the story is unique. However, I should be careful about the story pacing. There’s potential but only if done correctly. Hope you do well and continue to update. It would be great if you could update more often but I understand if you can’t. [img=Speechless] Overall I would say it’s enjoyable and readable as a novel.
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