I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)

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InfinityAndBeyond

So many high ratings when the story is not that good, i wonder if the low ratings are erased. Why the hate? at the start it's good but as the story goes it became boring and the plot is very forced. So forced that it force me to drop this tr*sh. There's no difference from original, why read this when you can read the original?

LV 3

Takumoto

i've readed in QQ, very good fic, hope you update faster [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 5

Selahuddin

I really didn't want to do a review for this ff. But I can't help myself. I'll write things that I don't like so no one like me burns out. For me, I didn't see anything that I can call good in this ff. 1- If you can get from the info-dumps to the dialogs, most of the dialogs are stiff. 2- I was able to endure 10 chapters of this torture and during these 10 chapters there was constant time-skip. 3- Chapters are in a continuous loop. Mc arrives somewhere at the end of the previous episode. At the beginning of the new episode there is a 3-5 month time-skip. We listen to mc's monologue about what he went through during this time-skip. A lot of info-dumps are thrown at us. One or two useless dialogues (the dialogues are useless because we came to read mc's diary.) some skill upgrades and then the episode ends. 4- Also, in the previous world of mc, all the anime were available, but it turns out that only Tensura was not available. Yeah, mc doesn't know the plot. How exciting..

LV 3

ImpishWolf

Utter garbage. Instead of a Fanfic might as well call it a Tensura side story or spin off with a disappointing protagonist with op ability that he can't properly use. Story follows the canon with miniscule change and instead of anything interesting new, you would only get what rimuru did on the canon in a summary. mc is basically a useless side character. so much potential but poor execution. you can barely feel any emotion from the writing. things feel dull like a history book. honestly, most chinese fics are better than this and if you have read chinese fics you will know how bad they are. anyway, I dropped it at chapter 18. idk if author improves

LV 14

Morgan_Sinn_2309

I’m glad to see that this has made its way onto WebNovel. I have read multiple chapters ahead on ff.net and will be stoked to read them from here. Onto the actual story. The premise is fantastic, the world building is great. You had me hooked and always wanting more as I finish a chapter. Looking forward to seeing just how you continue to develop the story.

LV 12

AusyLust

Yo, dude, lemme tell ya straight—you're just runnin' the same ol' script as the anime plotlines, no twists, no flair. What's the deal with this fanfic, huh? Where's the spice? You gotta throw in some curveballs, make it pop, or else you're just servin' up reheated ramen. Trust me, ain't nobody stickin' around for leftovers when they can get fresh, y'know? Shits lame… —why in the ever-loving hell is your MC goin' 'round flappin' his gums about being from another world? I mean, come on, even in Tensura that was dumb as all get out. I don't care if it's common knowledge or some sci-fi trope—rule numero uno of reincarnating or transmigrating: keep your damn mouth shut! Then he does it in another world. You're just beggin' for trouble, and the sad part is, the author's just as clueless as the MC, so it all slides by without a hitch. Real shame, too, 'cause this had the bones of somethin' great. Instead, we get a trainwreck with a half-baked plot, forced humor (seriously, having him stayin' a woman?), and an MC that’s about as sharp as a beach ball. Makes me wanna coin a new phrase: everyone's got a story in 'em, but that don't mean they should write it.

LV 4

Kil0

This story is great, by far the best reincarnated slime fanfic I’ve come across. The main character is cool and I like that there is a mix of him doing his own thing and getting involved in canon. I usually instantly hate any novel where the Mc reveals he is reincarnated, but since he doesn’t know the plot of slime world the author actually pulls it off and makes him seem like a actual character in the world rather than some op self insert mucking around. Not sure that I described that properly, basically it’s great and I’m pumped for more 👍

LV 4

Wil_Unterholzner_2400

LOVE IT! really good quality writing has one of my favorite animes as a fanfiction and a strong oc? WHO ALSO DOESNT FOLLOW RIMURU!!!! JUST PERFECTION! CHEFS KISS

LV 4

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LV 2

rbp

the way it was written was boring. mc was the one explaining everything that is happening in the story, like we are reading his diary. actions, conversation between characters, their characteristics etc. was portrayed or written plainly boring no excitement at all.

LV 14

unknown_daoist

Yes, the story closely follows canon at the start and has a lot of info dumps, but it gets really good after getting past those earlier chapters - its a hidden gem in my opinion. The Info dumps just mean author knows his tensura lore and he really does, which is all the more important for a fic in such a complex universe like tensura. I really enjoy the fic and encourage you to give it a try aswell, past the earlier chapters. PS: i hope we get some quicker chappies for thid review @author <3

LV 12

Vitor_Lindo

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LV 12

Kakukami

Ahem, First off, I would like to say, peak fiction. Double reincarnation is not something you see everyday and it was a nice touch leading up to the beginning of the main story. If you like: An MC that grows strong rather quickly yet having good development and relationships around him, then this is the fic for you.

LV 2

Daniel_Marchan_3773

Me encanta este fanfic hasta ahora no he podido notar nada dañino ni malo , solo hermosura de fanfic 🤓🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄🤓🤓😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

Great story. It’s long but a worthwhile read, I love how consistent you are with the LN’s lore. I wish you picked up the speed of the story a little but that’s just me.

LV 3

Joseph_Canter

Very good story and very interesting

LV 11

Silver_Chaos77

I'll talk about what I found bad then about what I found good. Bad: First of all, the info dumps in the first 3 chapters are INSANE, 100 paragraphs plus of just listening skills and their uses, now after reading all that you expect to see them being used in a fight right? No. which brings me to my next point. Fights. They were boring, the MC didn't utilise even a tenth of the abilities he has, some contradictions happen that don't make sense which only serves to make the fight seem forced, for example fights he would easily win are blown out of proportion for no reason, I personally got very frustrated at that. He gets many OP abilities, then during fights it's as if he forgot they existed. Also, when a change of POV occurs, first person isn't used which makes things confusing at best. Good: The OG the writer added in aren't half bad, minimal to no spelling and grammatical mistakes, story development is great though forced at times, the chapters are long, the established world build is utilised well and you can tell some creative juices were spent on this. Changes: As the story progressed, the fights are still frustrating but the info dumps did get lighter. I would love if the author adopted the 'show not tell' policy, and train in writing fights scenes more to get better. At least use AI those fights really aren't readable. Do I recommend this? Well, make your own opinion of that and I hope this review/rant helped. ♡

LV 1

Asel213

Previously, when you wrote the voice of the sage, it was in parentheses. Give it back. This greatly simplifies the concept of who is speaking. Considering that the sage is a frequent guest in your home, the author.

LV 2

R0B

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say

LV 13

Lord_Aizen_Lvl9999

one of the best tensura fanfic I've read, thought why mc is not wooing the girls ;>....btw keep at the good work nice fanfic author