Taking It All From The Protagonist

LV 14

Hardy1j

I don't know how to describe what I feel, it just felt a waste of time to read this. The story is that bad. Originally, I wouldn't have read this after the author said the romance will be where fl might die before getting replaced since I hate that. But there was next to no romance till now, making me read. Here starts my real review: Writing Quality: It isn't amazing or bad. Just average with many typos. Readable, nonetheless(better than 50% on this app...) Story: Guess how much time passed? 2 days. Yep, you read that right. That's how you know this has next to no story, let alone development. At least, that's how it appeared to me. Characters: The side characters are well-written and their description make them feel somewhat real. The problem is the MC, the one we are supposed to read. He has positives, like he is an adult. Unfortunately, his smartness, cunning, and planning nature is forgotten as the book continues. All that's left is an adult in a child's body with impulsive anger disorder. You can prolly guess what happens, right? He wants everyone under him and in control, he doesn't trust anyone. Just making them sign sla. ve contracts... Now, that is understandable, given the world, but if you read, you will understand what I mean. World background: Non-existent. Conclusion: Not my cup of tea. If you like an edgy, immature, Protagonist, then go for it. Despite the story having a good premise, it just failed to meet any expectations one can have... I hope you don't delete my review and improve yourself as an author...

LV 13

gale200588

a good read, great command of English and conversations aren't rigid but rather flow into one another. the chapter length might need some improvement but hey I know how hard it is to write, keep up the good work

LV 13

Innovation_Inu

I guess I can finally read one where I don't have to feel like I will punch my screen. Haha... I should have a good time hating on the dumb hero and loving this villain~~

LV 15

DaoistjgSy04

Hope to see you continue the story. I’d like to see how it ends

LV 12

Khutsocool_0

love thia novel and tbe characters, keep it up👍

LV 3

Silent_Boy_4303

I read only 3 chp , i liked i will donate 2 powerstone

LV 1

wizkiard

5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing

LV 3

SiiiFuuu

An actually good story on this app. Currently at chapter 14 and I can't stop reading it.

LV 1

Brian_Hanes_117

The grammar and whatnot is excellent. The updates are consistent. The story develops nicely. The characters seem interesting, but I'd like more vivid breakdowns of different ones at the start (instead of that dynamic with the MC). The style is distinct and really stands out from most. Being a visual person, I'd like to know more about what the characters look like and the view of the environment around them. The worldbuilding is great. This is an interesting read for people who appreciate magical adventures. To the writer, I welcome you to check out my original fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger" it is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". It can be found here on Webnovel with a quick search. You may want to read the first chapter or two of AMJ to get a feeling of what the first story was like but that isn't necessary.

LV 12

Mi_Mika

One of the Authors who like to stretch the unnecessary and make the smallest possible chapters.On chapter 46 or 49 and I can't believe I wasted so many fast passes.There are many annoying grammatical, punctuation and missing words and I don't know if this is just translated but it somehow it works.

LV 2

Averagewrites

Shameless review from Averagewrites... You found a different world, where desires are what pushes you. I found desires and put in my world, its just the beginning...After the dust settles is when you see the plans, add to your library and get ready for the long, slow journey through a world of only desires. P.S : When Gates leaves the City.

LV 4

DaoistDpzkzD

finally a good villain novel👍.............

LV 1

Bidenator

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LV 13

unseenpickle

Really enjoying it so far⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

LV 15

primordial_idli

To be honest, this was a surprise. A good find. Keep up the good work author. --------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------

LV 2

Averagewrites

Gates is a character that is not afraid to do whatever he wants, as long as he is sure his life is not in danger, and even at the risk of his life, he would not back down. A lot is coming, and this is my honest review.