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Never have been a huge Star Wars fan, but I am a diehard Marvel fan. Solid 5/5 in my eyes.
very good writing so far with a very cool story. The only reason its not 4 out of 5 is cause this isnt my kind of story while i love weak to strong stories. Ive just read too many over the years that ive kind gone off on them. Im into slice of life or more op mc. Cause they dont have the same battle manga type storyline where its all about fighting stronger people till eventually your powerful.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
I read up to chapter 32, but that's not enough, this is shit, a lot of writing by AI, the MC doesn't develop, lots of holes in the plot, for example he wears metal armor while fighting with Mao, and His staff isn't cut and his armor is lol, there's another one, his power doesn't grow, the amount of drama there is here is repetitive. Characters who have the strength can lift entire ships, pick up people and crush them, here he can't even do that because he is so weak, there are times when he uses the power and there are times when he doesn't use it. Well, that's my review of this weird fanfic. translation generated by google
well what can i say? It's overall a great book, but there are a few instances that confuse me. For example ch 48-52 left me quite stunned. I really don't know what is going on anymore, but as it's the current newest chapter (52) i have high hopes of it all making sense in the next few chapters. No romance or harem in sight, for those wondering. Though if the author stays true to what he stated in the synopsis, the book is only going to be better and better.
A excepción del desarrollo de la historia al que le di unas 3 estrellas el resto merece 4, el protagonista me agrada, pero el autor se apresuró en ciertos momentos, lo del orfanato era algo que potenciaría el crecimiento del protagonista pero las motivaciones de los villanos me parecieron poco probables y la ejecución dejo algunas cosas un poco confusas, como el porqué los soldados se concentraron en los niños cuando el protagonista estaba acabando con todos ellos, hubiera sido más realista que se centran en la mayor amenaza antes de distraerse con los indefensos, tal vez sea mis perjuicios porque en verdad estoy un poco arto de leer sobre protagonistas arrogantes, que a pesar de vivir en buenos entornos se mantienen fríos o que los autores fuercen situaciones trágicas para conseguir que sus protagonistas caigan en la oscuridad o algo similar, la vida de este protagonista iba a ser difícil por su punto de partida como huérfano pobre, por eso esperaba que consiguiera algunos aliados que lo ayudaran en su camino, incluso si algunos caerían lo hubiera aceptado, es incómodo ver qué la mayoría de los autores se esfuerzan en tomar las peores características de los personajes de Marvel y se las dan a sus personajes, la arrogancia de Tony, la desconfianza de Nick, la trágica vida de Spiderman, etc. Me preguntó si es tan difícil encontrar un fanfiction donde el protagonista no se vea envuelto en la mala suerte y que además no se recurra a volverlo invencible en el capítulo 2 o 3.
It's better written than before. I think I like the face so far and will see how the whole thing develops Mc is smart on Tony Stark Niwvu Mc has the power but has to transnate to get it so most won't op right away but I think over time he will be very strong So far no Mc has girlfriend but I hope it will be Wanda and I hope he can save her brothers
Bro you are awesome. When I saw your reply to my comment I didn't expect this, you revamped the hell out of it. It's far more better than the previous version. The character is much better than the older one, his development is a bit cliche but what in fanfiction is not. I really liked how he discovered what his power is, how he developed it. The story progression is much better and other characters are more fleshed out. I got irritated reading the previous version and put it in the maybe list. But now this, deserves a place in the 'Let Him Cook' list. Amazing work and can't wait to see how it moves forward. All the best Author.
This novel is trash all the plots are stupid. The good reviews are either bots or payed people to give out good reviews to this trash novel. Stop wasting your time in this novel.
Let's go. First of all, while it's totally ungrateful what the guy did, he was right when he said that One Above All should and IS above that bullshit. "I am the One Above All. I see through many eyes. I build with many hands. They are themselves, but they are also me. I am all-powerful. My only weapon is love. The mystery intrigues me."
Even though I haven't read it just because it involves star wars it an instant 5. Please don't make it into a harem.
So far so good. But i have a few nitpicks. First, author made it so he cant find xmen but most people who watch or read xmen know that he has a mansion in new york. His progress is interesting but the story progression makes the reader feel anxiety from the pressure and sadness for those he lost. I just wish author made him reach out to allies or something. If it were me, id find a way to talk to stark. If its before iron man, then as a genius inventor. If its after iron man, then as a hero. Though kamar taj is still better tbh. A good portal to escape is always the best skill for survival.
I like how the MC is taking his time to grow and has his onw problems apart from the usual Avenger stuff
Very well written a few issues with mc development but it is all around a great book intriguing story well developed plot I would recommend this for anyone to read and I honestly look forward to seeing what the author has planned for this in the future
I'm giving this story 5 stars, the story is entertaining, and I look forward to reading more soon, including seeing more Star Wars themes in this story.
I'm liking the story, It's a bit of a slow burn in some areas and fast in others, but it's done in a way that keeps the story interesting. The update stability is solid, really can't complain there and I haven't come across anything bad in the grammar department. The MC is pretty funny and seems to have a mind of his own and isn't simply a yes man plus he's smart so you won't feel like you're having a brain aneurysm from stupidity. As for world background. That's part of where it feels like a slow burn. But it's done in a way that I personally like. Note for the Author. "Keep up the good work, I'm sure someone out there is proud of you"
its a good story with a good writing style, nothing to complain, good job author 👍🏼
I'm enjoying it so far. I'm here to pass time, and this novel does a good job.
ok , so the writing quality i don’t know man i don’t have much experience with it but i’m comfortable reading it so it’s very good in my opinion , as for updating stability it’s like 3 to 4 chapters a week if not more so very good , for the story in my opinion it’s also good but it need more chapters to get to know the MC in my opinion he is funny and a little bit childish at first be he will grow up so keep reading and childish doesn’t mean dumb for anyone, he is smart and use his knowledge to make himself more powerful and use his powers very good , for harem or no , i think it’s a no harem type (i don’t remember sorry but it’s more towards no harem) i’ve just came from chap 32 so i didn’t check the previous chaps for this review, character design is very go till now i will not talk about it since if you read the story you know MC is likeble , as for world background it’s mixed there’s x-men (from movie?) and it’s marvel so yea, there’s wakanda for spoiler sake i will go no further, but overall i recommend any of you to give it a shot cuz i really like the novel.i’m no professional reviewer i just write what is on my mind.
till now 4.5 to me interesting concept let's see how it will continue👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Your way of writing doesn't convince me very much in updates we are buying well because they are every day so far in the development of the story we start with revenge but the mc is being quite soft although it could be because of the x men but it doesn't completely suit me stars 2/5/1/1/3
I don't know why this story is getting such a low rating because I've seen 4.8 stories that were full of grammar mistakes and the direction was all over the place (like a kid on a sugar high). I didn't see that with this story. While is has several cliched moments its at least a fun read.
pretty much a wattpad fanfic, ain't nothing special but interesting concept. I couldn't be bothered to endure more than 2 chapters so maybe you'll beat my record.
Never have been a huge Star Wars fan, but I am a diehard Marvel fan. Solid 5/5 in my eyes.
very good writing so far with a very cool story. The only reason its not 4 out of 5 is cause this isnt my kind of story while i love weak to strong stories. Ive just read too many over the years that ive kind gone off on them. Im into slice of life or more op mc. Cause they dont have the same battle manga type storyline where its all about fighting stronger people till eventually your powerful.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
I read up to chapter 32, but that's not enough, this is shit, a lot of writing by AI, the MC doesn't develop, lots of holes in the plot, for example he wears metal armor while fighting with Mao, and His staff isn't cut and his armor is lol, there's another one, his power doesn't grow, the amount of drama there is here is repetitive. Characters who have the strength can lift entire ships, pick up people and crush them, here he can't even do that because he is so weak, there are times when he uses the power and there are times when he doesn't use it. Well, that's my review of this weird fanfic. translation generated by google
well what can i say? It's overall a great book, but there are a few instances that confuse me. For example ch 48-52 left me quite stunned. I really don't know what is going on anymore, but as it's the current newest chapter (52) i have high hopes of it all making sense in the next few chapters. No romance or harem in sight, for those wondering. Though if the author stays true to what he stated in the synopsis, the book is only going to be better and better.
A excepción del desarrollo de la historia al que le di unas 3 estrellas el resto merece 4, el protagonista me agrada, pero el autor se apresuró en ciertos momentos, lo del orfanato era algo que potenciaría el crecimiento del protagonista pero las motivaciones de los villanos me parecieron poco probables y la ejecución dejo algunas cosas un poco confusas, como el porqué los soldados se concentraron en los niños cuando el protagonista estaba acabando con todos ellos, hubiera sido más realista que se centran en la mayor amenaza antes de distraerse con los indefensos, tal vez sea mis perjuicios porque en verdad estoy un poco arto de leer sobre protagonistas arrogantes, que a pesar de vivir en buenos entornos se mantienen fríos o que los autores fuercen situaciones trágicas para conseguir que sus protagonistas caigan en la oscuridad o algo similar, la vida de este protagonista iba a ser difícil por su punto de partida como huérfano pobre, por eso esperaba que consiguiera algunos aliados que lo ayudaran en su camino, incluso si algunos caerían lo hubiera aceptado, es incómodo ver qué la mayoría de los autores se esfuerzan en tomar las peores características de los personajes de Marvel y se las dan a sus personajes, la arrogancia de Tony, la desconfianza de Nick, la trágica vida de Spiderman, etc. Me preguntó si es tan difícil encontrar un fanfiction donde el protagonista no se vea envuelto en la mala suerte y que además no se recurra a volverlo invencible en el capítulo 2 o 3.
It's better written than before. I think I like the face so far and will see how the whole thing develops Mc is smart on Tony Stark Niwvu Mc has the power but has to transnate to get it so most won't op right away but I think over time he will be very strong So far no Mc has girlfriend but I hope it will be Wanda and I hope he can save her brothers
Bro you are awesome. When I saw your reply to my comment I didn't expect this, you revamped the hell out of it. It's far more better than the previous version. The character is much better than the older one, his development is a bit cliche but what in fanfiction is not. I really liked how he discovered what his power is, how he developed it. The story progression is much better and other characters are more fleshed out. I got irritated reading the previous version and put it in the maybe list. But now this, deserves a place in the 'Let Him Cook' list. Amazing work and can't wait to see how it moves forward. All the best Author.
This novel is trash all the plots are stupid. The good reviews are either bots or payed people to give out good reviews to this trash novel. Stop wasting your time in this novel.
Let's go. First of all, while it's totally ungrateful what the guy did, he was right when he said that One Above All should and IS above that bullshit. "I am the One Above All. I see through many eyes. I build with many hands. They are themselves, but they are also me. I am all-powerful. My only weapon is love. The mystery intrigues me."
Even though I haven't read it just because it involves star wars it an instant 5. Please don't make it into a harem.
So far so good. But i have a few nitpicks. First, author made it so he cant find xmen but most people who watch or read xmen know that he has a mansion in new york. His progress is interesting but the story progression makes the reader feel anxiety from the pressure and sadness for those he lost. I just wish author made him reach out to allies or something. If it were me, id find a way to talk to stark. If its before iron man, then as a genius inventor. If its after iron man, then as a hero. Though kamar taj is still better tbh. A good portal to escape is always the best skill for survival.
I like how the MC is taking his time to grow and has his onw problems apart from the usual Avenger stuff
Very well written a few issues with mc development but it is all around a great book intriguing story well developed plot I would recommend this for anyone to read and I honestly look forward to seeing what the author has planned for this in the future
I'm giving this story 5 stars, the story is entertaining, and I look forward to reading more soon, including seeing more Star Wars themes in this story.
I'm liking the story, It's a bit of a slow burn in some areas and fast in others, but it's done in a way that keeps the story interesting. The update stability is solid, really can't complain there and I haven't come across anything bad in the grammar department. The MC is pretty funny and seems to have a mind of his own and isn't simply a yes man plus he's smart so you won't feel like you're having a brain aneurysm from stupidity. As for world background. That's part of where it feels like a slow burn. But it's done in a way that I personally like. Note for the Author. "Keep up the good work, I'm sure someone out there is proud of you"
its a good story with a good writing style, nothing to complain, good job author 👍🏼
I'm enjoying it so far. I'm here to pass time, and this novel does a good job.
ok , so the writing quality i don’t know man i don’t have much experience with it but i’m comfortable reading it so it’s very good in my opinion , as for updating stability it’s like 3 to 4 chapters a week if not more so very good , for the story in my opinion it’s also good but it need more chapters to get to know the MC in my opinion he is funny and a little bit childish at first be he will grow up so keep reading and childish doesn’t mean dumb for anyone, he is smart and use his knowledge to make himself more powerful and use his powers very good , for harem or no , i think it’s a no harem type (i don’t remember sorry but it’s more towards no harem) i’ve just came from chap 32 so i didn’t check the previous chaps for this review, character design is very go till now i will not talk about it since if you read the story you know MC is likeble , as for world background it’s mixed there’s x-men (from movie?) and it’s marvel so yea, there’s wakanda for spoiler sake i will go no further, but overall i recommend any of you to give it a shot cuz i really like the novel.i’m no professional reviewer i just write what is on my mind.
till now 4.5 to me interesting concept let's see how it will continue👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Your way of writing doesn't convince me very much in updates we are buying well because they are every day so far in the development of the story we start with revenge but the mc is being quite soft although it could be because of the x men but it doesn't completely suit me stars 2/5/1/1/3
I don't know why this story is getting such a low rating because I've seen 4.8 stories that were full of grammar mistakes and the direction was all over the place (like a kid on a sugar high). I didn't see that with this story. While is has several cliched moments its at least a fun read.
pretty much a wattpad fanfic, ain't nothing special but interesting concept. I couldn't be bothered to endure more than 2 chapters so maybe you'll beat my record.
I love it so much keep it up and merry Christmas or happy holiday