The 100: AllFather

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sangster21

it was good at first, but he is adding to many fantasy creatures it's like at chapter 2 only 4 then at chapter 5 there are 10 more magical beings

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Death_to_all_2816

Good start for the story hope to see more

LV 1

Xavierzelaya2

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LV 1

Dao_of_laziness420

the story was okay though the harem ruined a good bit and the fantasy creatures became too numerous. I could look beyond that for some fics but the script type writing style broke the camels back on this one

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nicolas_gonzalez_5220

La historia es buena y me gusta el mc en su mayoria. El problema que tengo con el mc es que su personalidad no es estable, con esto quiero decir que no reacciona a las situaciones en base a su conosimiento, o como te lo presentan y termina reccionando en base a la trama original para encaminar la historia por lo que carece de originalidad y solo sigue la trama con un toque magico. Yo personalmente lo dejo si quiero ver the 100 lo voy a volver a ver y no leer un fic. Español.

LV 14

read3r_9030

really good. love how you balanced the wishes with curses. can't wait for you to produce more chapters.

LV 4

Saiyan_Of_God

The Author needs to arrange the chapters by separating the Announcements from the real Chapters, that way it looks clean and organized. Also Author NEEDS introduce characters/Races with Proper LORE and History so it looks and feels consistent to read and understand.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 7

reading1dao1god

Adorei a história tem muito potencial, porém as conversas são pouco desenvolvidas é demora uma aceitação unilateral, tipo quando ele contou sobre a magia, mas tem muito potencial e eu adorei, espero que o autor continue atualizando

LV 14

Andrew_Alsbrooks

it's a great start I love the direction he's going with it

LV 13

GingerGunMan

love the story one of the best The 100 start story i have read please keep it up

LV 3

Warlock12

Great story /////////////////////////////////////////////////more ////////////////////////////////////////////////more/////////////////////////////////////////////////more

LV 4

AC_F5

I love to see how this goes.. so don't think of dropping this novel..