Modern Family: I want Freedom

LV 12

Worldofimagination

Brother, I can't defend this fic. It's fine to make the MC a troublemaker and a rebel—it can even be fun—but 11 years old is too much. Not to mention that it's only the 5th episode and the MC is already literally a god, with all abilities maxed out. I prefer more serious fics, where the author makes an effort to create something fun and exciting for the audience. This is just senseless wish fulfillment. I wouldn't be surprised if the MC starts chasing women like Pokémon.

LV 5

JamesMVP23

Only reason this is popular is because the modern family genre. This essentially a teenager’s imagination going wild with AI

LV 4

Diffuser

The main character kind of just becomes and adult at 11 so there’s no real development so far

LV 3

Lumos22

bit edgy for me, but could work for some people. Just ain't my cup of tea, but it's well written

LV 4

Kaizou_Koi

The writing is quite good. But I don't like the story and mc at all. He became op so fast that makes it totally turn off for me and the story became irrelevant. There's no fun in reading it. Besides I can't stand mc's attitude and conduct at all

LV 13

SinOfSloth17

The story is more like a summary of what happens to the characters than a actual story. For example (Chap 39) We see Alex celebrate that she can do the speech. Mc lends one of his cars to Phil and Claire. Everybody gets to the school and then Alex's graduation ceremony and speech is summed up in a paragraph. Then it just says they go to dinner after and that's it and it moves on to Jay's birthday which isn't much better in terms of content. The actual chapter is basically the same as this summary with at max 3 conversations worth of dialog for the Alex part of the chapter, and I'd say about the same amount of dialog for the Jay part.

LV 15

Piggy

just a wish fufillment fanfict nothing special. dude is a repressed middle aged man filled with regret acting out his fantasies as a kid; parting n driving at 11, getting templates from a system, rich parents. doesnt help that the grammar hurts

LV 14

PinnacleExistence

It's like reading a shopping list, and maybe that has more appeal than this..

LV 4

DefinitelyNotACat

this is so stupid, its basically op guy does whatever he wants... whats eveen there to read, whats fun, whats gripping.

LV 3

PokemonJoker

It’s a gross story. Starts off with a 11 year old getting drunk and a 13 year old having intercourse. Just no common sense at all. Another poorly written fic

LV 2

Gratiz_

Writing and update quality is good (4/5), but for everything else there's not much to say. The story and character design is butchered because mc is op in his world standards and he doesn't use any of his skills. MC flaunts his money, does whatever he wants etc. I read up to the latest chapter and I won't continue to read this because there's no point in doing so. World background sucks - different tv characters are mentioned from time to time and then they are forgotten.

LV 4

Aayush_storms

I like the premise too much to not give 5 stars soo here I am.

LV 4

Humbuub

I have no trust on any MF FF anymore. They all end up the same.

LV 1

Daoist4nO38i

Me gusta mucho, sigue así autor. D. D. D. D.

LV 14

LibofAl

This is an enjoyable read that I don't understand why people hate so much. The writing at the begining was a little rough but the way the story has progressed since then has been fantastic. The only warning I can give is that if you prefer the mc to have to work for his knowledge or skills this isn't the novel for you, otherwise I look forward to reading each new chapter.

LV 14

shadowstriker102

drinking, driving, breaking laws and partying at 11 need I say more

LV 1

jesus_5209

La verdad cuando leí los primeros 2 capítulos me parecieron muy buenos e interesantes, pero después lo leí hasta el capítulo 6 porque la verdad me aburrí y no lo quise leer más es muy aburrido y estúpido porque carajos lavaría dinero y dejaría a una familia que lo ama tanto solo por querer rebelarse pero contra que es estúpido y lo haces parecer que beber alcohol,drogarse y tener sexo sea lo único divertido y lo peor es escribes que a los 11 años

LV 4

octoberwind

I’m giving it five stars but I wish the system was better like we can actually see him improve each time he gets a new template and I’m waiting for one to increase his intelligence cause right now he’s kinda dumb but I love this 🙏

LV 3

Ghalib_Ali_5133

Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍