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บท 146: [145] Nami's Tyranny

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Vander Decken looked at the intruders with anger, but his expression quickly shifted to shock, then fear, upon seeing Ren's face—it seemed he recognized him.

"This… this is me… I wonder what you wants from me…" Unlike his usual arrogance, Vander Decken appeared humble, especially since the intruders had killed his crew, leaving his subordinate in the captain's room deeply shaken.

However, Vander Decken's thoughts differed from those of his foolish subordinate. He naturally recognized Ren's face. Despite his usual lack of interest in surface affairs, the recent news about the Summit War and the death of Whitebeard, which was tied to Fish-Man Island, caught his attention, prompting him to request a news report from his subordinates.

So, naturally, he knew who Ren was—the new Warlord and a fearsome fighter who had not hesitated to battle Whitebeard and even contributed to his death.

Vander Decken was arrogant, but he was no fool. He knew that the other side had already wiped out his crew, yet he kept his composure. His priority now was to escape with his ship; he could always recruit new subordinates from Fish-Man territory.

All these thoughts passed through his mind in mere seconds. As for Ren, he continued to gaze at Vander Decken, seeming to be contemplating something.

After a few more moments of tense silence, Ren spoke: "Vander Decken IX, how about becoming my follower?"

"!?"

Vander Decken was surprised by Ren's request, yet he showed no exaggerated reaction. Instead, he appeared slightly calm, thinking to himself, 'Damn you! Are you asking me to be your dog? But wait… if I refuse, will he kill me?'

Vander Decken didn't even consider fighting; he knew he wasn't on the same level as the man before him, and his Devil Fruit ability didn't offer any advantage. Even the advantage of being underwater, typical for a Fish-Man, was useless, as he had eaten a Devil Fruit.

Seeing no way out through force, Vander Decken decided to rely on his wits.

"Are there… any consequences if I refuse?" he asked with a voice that was both anxious and highly cautious. His subordinate, utterly bewildered by the unfolding events, thought, 'First, this frail-looking human shows up, kills the entire crew, and now asks Captain Vander Decken to be his follower? And the captain hasn't even screamed or attacked him from the start? What's going on?!'

Putting aside the Fish-Man's confusion, Ren smiled internally at Vander Decken's question, though his face remained calm as he replied, "Of course, there are no consequences. I don't force anyone to follow me."

"I see…" Vander Decken sighed in relief, though his subordinate looked at him strangely, thinking, 'Seriously? You believed him that easily?' But he didn't dare say it out loud for fear of Vander Decken's anger.

"Haha…" Kalifa suddenly chuckled upon hearing Ren's "promise" to Vander Decken, thinking to herself, "The captain is truly wicked~."

She knew Ren was giving Vander Decken false hope, but what puzzled her was how readily Vander Decken seemed to believe it. Was he insane?

What Kalifa didn't know was that he truly was insane. His mind was grasping at any chance of survival, so he didn't hesitate to believe Ren's words.

If Vander Decken hadn't been this terrified and anxious, he wouldn't have found himself in this pitiful state.

"W-well, then… I'll take my leave now… Feel free to do as you wish with that fool over there; I'll be… taking my vacation…" Vander Decken grinned foolishly, pointing to his subordinate.

"C-Captain! You can't do this to me!" the other Fish-Man cried, falling to his knees and begging Vander Decken not to abandon him.

"Shut up! Warlord, do whatever you want with him, but please don't harm the ship—"

"!!!"

Vander Decken was about to plead for the safety of the ship, intending to return to it later, but he couldn't finish his sentence due to what happened next.

"Alright, enough of your nonsense. You must either be a fool or insane, right?" Ren, who suddenly appeared right in front of Vander Decken, grinned and reached into the air bubble on the pirate captain's head, grabbing his throat firmly.

Kalifa was already laughing, adjusting her glasses on her beautiful face. She then glanced at the other Fish-Man, who was kneeling, and swiftly appeared before him using Shave.

"W-wha—what!" The Fish-Man screamed when he saw someone appear in front of him, but his expression froze when he saw it was just a weak-looking human woman.

He was already furious after Vander Decken had abandoned him, so seeing someone dare to attack him only fueled his rage. He would have been afraid if the attacker had been the one who made his former captain tremble like a scared kitten… but it was just a human woman?

*Roar!*

The Fish-Man roared, quickly standing up and charging at Kalifa, throwing a punch in an attempt to rip her apart.

Kalifa, however, remained unfazed. Calmly, she extended her slim, white hand from within the bubble around her body, blocking the Fish-Man's punch.

"!!!"

The Fish-Man's eyes widened in shock and utter horror as he felt his hand's bone snap.

*Crack~!*

"Aaaargh!!"

Kalifa didn't care about his screams. With a swift movement, she released his broken arm and said coldly:

"Finger Gun."

*Pew~!*

Her haki-coated finger pierced the Fish-Man's skull, silencing his screams and his breathing altogether as he collapsed dead on the floor.

"Heh…" Kalifa paid no mind to the fallen body in front of her. She walked over to Ren, who was still gripping Vander Decken's throat, and calmly stood by his side.

Vander Decken was terrified at that moment, feeling as though the hand around his neck might crush it at any moment.

"Next time, try escaping more intelligently." As Ren's words reached Vander Decken's ears, a wave of fear surged through him, and he tried to break free, but his body was held down by the insane strength emanating from Ren's hand.

Without wasting any time, Ren activated his Devil Fruit ability.

*Crack~!*

Vander Decken's head snapped and separated from his body as Ren tore it off mercilessly. The seismic force continued to crush the bones and flesh of Vander Decken's head.

Within seconds, his head was reduced to a misshapen mess of blood and flesh.

Fortunately, Ren's clothes had a "cleaning" function, so his blood-stained gloves quickly returned to their pristine state, and Ren withdrew his hand back into the bubble.

"Let's go back." He smiled at the blonde girl and took her hand. Kalifa didn't resist; a subtle smile formed on her face as they left the Flying Pirates' ship—or rather, what used to be the Flying Pirates. Now that they were gone, there was no point in leaving the ship behind, right?

So, Ren stored the ship in The Infinity Space and returned to his own ship with Kalifa.

Kalifa had always wondered about her captain's storage ability and its limits, but she knew some things were better left unasked, so she never inquired, despite her curiosity.

"And with that, our little trip is over… Hmm, I wonder how Nami's doing over there?" Ren muttered as Elsama set sail toward Fish-Man Island once more.

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Fish-Man District was a place steeped in darkness and chaos—a notorious part of Fish-Man Island where the law of the jungle reigned supreme, and the rule of law retreated into the shadows.

Originally, it was a massive orphanage for children, but over time, it became unstable and turned into an outlaw zone where the rejects of Fish-Man Island gathered.

This area, hidden from the gaze of the rulers and the security of the gleaming residential cities, became a den for criminals, pirates, and rebels against all forms of order.

In the dark alleys and winding, snake-like passageways, lifeless bodies could be seen scattered on the ground—mostly the corpses of human pirates.

This area symbolized absolute rejection of any restriction. In this hostile place, tens of thousands of violent and racist Fish-Men gathered under the command of one man:

Hody Jones!

"Damn that human woman! Kill her, men!" shouted a strong-looking Fish-Man, trying to stir up the fighting spirit of his followers.

"T-This…"

"We'll die if we go forward… She's a monster!"

"I don't want to die!"

"What's happening here… Are humans really this terrifying?!"

"Help me!"

Numerous reactions came from the crowd of thousands of Fish-Men. There were so many of them, yet they hesitated to attack a single person—and she was just a weak human! This only made Hody Jones angrier.

"Let's finish this quickly." Nami smiled lightly. Her sword was drenched in blood, and hundreds of bodies lay not far from her, mutilated and dismembered, evidence of the massacre she had carried out alone.

Previously, Ren had instructed her to go to a place called Fish-Man District and subdue the criminals there. He had also requested that she capture one of them alive.

After being given all the information she needed about her opponent, Nami didn't hesitate to head there.

Upon arrival, she was met with hateful, racist glares, and it didn't take long for her to be attacked.

Now, here she was after causing a massacre, staring at the tens of thousands of hesitant Fish-Men and their enraged leader.

"Damn you, worthless fools!" Hody Jones cursed internally.

He had only recently begun forming his pirate crew to achieve his extreme ambitions.

Their numbers weren't as high as in the original tale—there were only about 30,000, if you included the 10,000 human pirate slaves they had captured.

'Even though this human woman is strong, I have a trump card…!' Hody Jones smirked as he thought of the energy steroids.

Beside him were his trusted followers: Zeo, Daruma, Hyozo, Icaros Mohi, and Dosun.

"Kill her, guys!" He signaled to Nami, who looked like she was preparing to attack again.

"Ooosh!"

One of the Fish-Men beside Hody Jones, a swordsman named Hyozo, let out a shout.

Nami stood confidently, her gaze fierce and intimidating as she faced her opponent. An electrifying aura surrounded her, with her long orange hair blowing in the wind, charged with sparks of lightning, and her sword gleaming with a powerful blue glow. It was clear she was merging her swordsmanship with the power of the Thunder Fruit, making her appear as a goddess of lightning to the terrified Fish-Men.

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But Hyouzou was not afraid. He drank from his flask, releasing a mocking laugh as he advanced toward her, wielding six poisoned swords with his tentacles, in addition to the two swords in his hands. Despite his drunken appearance, his gaze was deadly serious.

"Strong..." The assassin sensed the danger emanating from Nami. As the strongest swordsman on Fish-Man Island, he couldn't back down from another swordsman.

"This lightning... is this the power of a Devil Fruit?" he asked with a rough voice, then laughed, "Is that what makes you so confident?"

Nami only responded with a cold smile. With confidence, she aimed her sword at him and said calmly but with strength, "You talk too much."

"Tch!"

Hyouzou charged at full speed, turning his eight swords into waves of deadly, coordinated blades. His movements were fast, each blade dripping with a dark green poison.

*Whoosh!*

*Whoosh!*

*Whoosh!*

*Whoosh!*

Nami remained calm and steady. With a swift leap, she evaded the assault, then gracefully swung her sword, releasing bursts of concentrated lightning that circled her. When Hyouzou approached again, she raised her sword and activated her Devil Fruit powers once more.

"Die!" she murmured, lightning coiling around her sword and coating it in a blue that mingled with the black of Armament Haki. She delivered a powerful blow towards Hyouzou.

"!!!"

Sensing danger, Hyouzou attempted to retreat, trying to dodge the lightning-infused slash. But it was too fast—even his Observation Haki couldn't help him react in time.

"Arrgh!" he cried in agony as the lightning blade struck, leaving a bloody wound that sent the swordsman crashing to the ground, unconscious.

Suddenly, her Observation Haki detected an attack from behind, but Nami remained unfazed.

"Babara Hammer!"

Dosun appeared behind her, wielding a massive hammer, his face twisted with fury and hatred, as though he intended to tear apart the human before him.

He raised his giant hammer and spun with surprising speed, aiming to land a blow that could crush entire buildings.

"You're too slow."

Nami's mocking tone reached his ears, aggravating him even more.

*BOOM!*

Nami effortlessly retreated at the last moment, leaving a trail of lightning in her wake, while the hammer smashed into the ground, leaving a deep crater.

She raised her hand to the sky and looked coldly at Dosun, whose gaze was full of hatred. "Enough fooling around!"

*Crackle!*

*BOOM!*

The sky above her darkened with clouds, and a massive bolt of lightning struck down from above toward Dosun. He attempted to block it with his large arms, but he felt the electric surge course through his body, nearly knocking him off balance.

"Arrgh! Curse you, human!"

Dosun growled in anger, ignoring the pain, and grabbed his hammer again to attack. He quickly closed the gap, aiming a powerful horizontal swing with his massive strength.

"T-Shot!"

But with a swift motion, Nami sidestepped the strike, moving smoothly behind him.

*Whoosh!*

In the next moment, she drew her sword, which materialized as a radiant glow in her hand, and delivered a direct slash to Dosun's chest. A powerful flash followed, electrifying Dosun's body, freezing him in place for a few seconds, unable to move.

His body collapsed to the ground, leaving his fate uncertain.

Everyone stared at Nami in terror, even Hody Jones, who was previously filled with rage, now bore an expression laced with fear.

She had taken down two of his strongest officers within minutes! And it seemed she wasn't even being serious!

"Camouflage Carpet!"

His thoughts were interrupted by a mysterious voice that echoed across the battlefield.

"Hmph!" Nami scoffed, dodging the chain that was about to bind her, then glared at her opponent, who was now starting to reveal himself.

"If you're planning a sneak attack, don't announce your move, you fool!"

She swung her sword at him, unleashing an aggressive lightning blade that sent the assailant, named Zeo, crashing to the ground beside the other officers.

Immediately afterward, she felt the ground beneath her begin to crumble, but she remained calm, showing no sign of surprise.

"I've seen you planning something from the beginning… but this is disappointing, truly." Nami sighed, intentionally provoking her opponent.

Her Observation Haki had noticed someone digging underground from the moment she defeated the swordsman and started dispatching the rest of the officers, but she had let him proceed with his plan.

"How dare you insult me, you filthy human!"

The ground collapsed, and a small-sized Fish-Man emerged, glaring at Nami, who was hovering in the air using Moonwalk. He attacked furiously.

"Hi-Daruma Cutter!"

Daruma's body ignited as he charged at Nami with his powerful jaw, attempting to bite her. But she didn't even bother to draw her sword.

*Boom!*

Nami's fist, imbued with Armament Haki, collided with Daruma's burning body, sending him flying tens of meters before he crashed into the ground, forming a large crater.

But Nami didn't stop there. She was still in the air and used Moonwalk to move toward where he'd fallen, then launched a downward kick at him!

*Boom!*

"Aaaah!!" Daruma screamed in pain before multiple bones in his body shattered, and he lost consciousness.

"...."

There was complete silence in Fish-Man District.

The ordinary soldiers were terrified; even the powerful officers had been defeated—what could they possibly do now?

Hody Jones, the leader responsible for all these troops, glared at Nami with intense hatred and rage.

He reached into his pockets, pulling out several red pills, and looked at them.

"Zeo hasn't produced many of them yet, but this should be enough to kill this human..." he said decisively, preparing to swallow the steroids.

"I wouldn't advise doing that."

"!!!!"

Hody Jones' eyes widened when he heard a voice behind him!

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To be continued....

500PS= Bonus chapter.

-How much does Bonney know about the World Government? I mean, she should know about the existence of the Holy Knights, right?


บท 147: [146] Another Commander

[2000 Words]

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When did this person appear behind him?! And how did he not sense him? Was he standing there the whole time?!

Hody Jones was struck with terror as these thoughts raced through his mind.

The hand holding the sinister red pills was frozen due to the sudden interruption, but Hody Jones was determined and decisive in his actions.

*Gulp!*

Under the gaze of Ren, who had previously arrived in Fishman Island with Kalifa, Hody Jones swallowed several stimulant pills.

"You really did it… Well, you're useless anyway," sighed Ren as he transformed his weapon, Versa, into a red spear radiating an ominous glow.

"Kohahahaha! I can feel the power coursing through my veins! You weak human scum, taste the strength of the great Fishmen!"

Hody Jones laughed savagely, his body expanding several times over and his muscles bursting with tremendous power. His now-lengthened white hair gave him an ominous appearance, heightening the terror among the Fishmen present.

"Hehe~ So the captain is finally taking action." Nami, who had previously defeated the New Fishman Pirates' officers, had spotted Ren not too long ago.

If it weren't for her not wanting to ruin her captain's entrance, she would have jumped on him and kissed him as soon as she saw him.

"Let's end this quickly."

Versa, in spear form, floated in the air facing Hody Jones in his final form. Hody, now fully consumed by his newfound strength, felt invincible.

"Kohahaha! Let me show you---"

"!!!"

He tried to continue, but what happened next left him speechless.

The blue-haired man with the red spear he'd seen standing in front of him just a second ago had vanished in the blink of an eye!

Hody knew that such speed was beyond his reach, even with his enhanced power!

"Aaaaghh!!"

Unfortunately for him, it was too late, as he felt a sharp pain in his chest. Looking at the spear that had pierced through him, he was consumed by shock and utter disbelief.

"H-How… you damned human…" His breaths were ragged, filled with pain, shock, hatred, and many other emotions he never thought he'd experience.

What drove Hody even crazier was that the man who had dealt him a fatal blow in an instant wasn't even looking at him; he was gazing at the orange-haired swordswoman who had earlier struck down his crew!

This infuriated and maddened him beyond belief. He wanted to curse him but felt an overwhelming pain in his chest as his body started to weaken and grow frail.

"That's why I warned you you'd regret taking those pills…" Ren, who was now holding Nami by her waist, looked at him, then removed his spear from Hody Jones' body and left him to die on the ground.

Hody Jones didn't understand what was happening at that moment.

Everything was going smoothly a few hours ago; how did it all turn into such chaos?

He felt fatigue wash over his body and soul, but he didn't realize that the spear strike had not targeted his vital organs. The fatigue was actually from the stimulants he had consumed earlier.

There was a rule with those pills: once the consumer is defeated, side effects begin to show in their body, causing aging and brittle bones. In a few hours, Hody Jones wouldn't even be able to walk.

Back to Ren, he looked at the large, confused crowd of Fishmen, then turned his gaze to the thousands of human pirates looking at him with hope in their eyes.

"Do you all want your freedom?"

He spoke in a deep voice, not shouting, but the absolute silence in the area made his words audible to all.

The Fishmen knew he was addressing the thousands of enslaved humans who had been captured and forced to fight on their side. They wanted to do something, to resist, but the earlier events with their leader terrified them of the man before them.

"Y-Yes, sir!"

"Please free us, sir!"

"I'm willing to follow you for life! Just free me and my crew, please!"

"Please help us, Dark Death Warlord!"

As soon as Ren spoke, many of the captured pirates responded with pleas. Some even recognized Ren; those who didn't were likely imprisoned here before he started his journey.

Ren wasn't bothered; his goal in recruiting these people was that they might make for good cannon fodder.

He had also noticed a few individuals with potential among them.

"We've arrived Ren-Dono, jamon!"

Suddenly, hundreds of people burst into Fishman Island.

It was none other than King Neptune and his entourage, along with hundreds of the Royal Guard!

Shirahoshi was also there. The girl who hadn't left the palace in ten years was incredibly happy, even if her exploration was limited to the boundaries of Fishman Island.

As for why they were here? Previously, after Ren had dealt with Vander Decken and returned to Ryugu Palace, he informed the king that Shirahoshi's curse had been lifted and that he had taken care of Vander Decken.

Neptune was so happy he wanted to host a feast for Ren immediately.

But Ren had to stop the eager king and inform him of the darkness and conspiracy unfolding in Fish-Man Island.

He also hinted that there was something significant he would discover after all this.

King Neptune was shocked and deeply concerned upon hearing about Hody Jones's plans and the tens of thousands of fish-men rallying in Fish-Man District.

They had truly neglected the Fish-Man District! Neptune felt regret, but knowing there was no time to waste, he quickly rallied his forces and came here.

"Greetings, King Neptune. I'll need your help capturing these rebels," Ren gestured towards the tens of thousands of fish-men.

"Damn it! I don't want to be captured!"

"They're going to execute us!"

"Stay strong, men! We outnumber them!"

"Right! There's no need to be afraid!"

"But… that guy over there..."

The fish-men, hearing that they'd be captured, were in disarray once again, each holding different thoughts—some wanted to resist, while others had already surrendered.

"Silence!"

With one word, tens of thousands of chaotic voices instantly fell silent.

They didn't quiet down willingly; rather, they fainted as a result of Ren's overwhelming Conqueror's Haki.

"T-This is..." King Neptune's eyes widened at the sight, immediately recognizing the power of the Conqueror's Haki.

"R-Ren-sama is incredible..." Shirahoshi was awestruck by what had happened. She didn't understand how thousands who were just ready to fight had suddenly passed out, which initially scared her but also made her grateful that Ren was protecting her.

"Amazing!" On the other side, the thousands of captured pirates were mesmerized by Ren's Conqueror's Haki. Luckily for them, Ren wasn't targeting them.

"R-Ren-dono, what should we do with these pirates?"

King Neptune had ordered his soldiers to begin a large-scale capture of the unconscious fish-men and then approached Ren with respect.

"I plan to recruit them into my fleet," Ren answered honestly. This wasn't something worth hiding, so he told Neptune directly.

"A fleet… I see." Neptune nodded, understanding and unsurprised. He had guessed that a powerful pirate like Ren would likely build a fleet of his own.

After a few minutes of conversation, Ren left and approached the standing, confused pirates. Their hands and feet were shackled, as the fish-men had prepared well before this attack, so the captives hadn't even had time to partially break free from their restraints to be useful in battle.

With Nami and Kalifa standing beside him, Ren looked at the crowd of human pirates and spoke, "Who wants to join me?"

They all raised their shackled hands. Ren nodded and then looked at a particular individual within the crowd and ordered, "You, come here." He pointed at a specific man.

The man's face was scarred from hard-fought battles, with dark eyes that seemed to see beyond the horizon, and dark-blue-tinged hair scattered across his forehead. His appearance reflected a life hardened by trials but not broken. His open shirt revealed a strong chest, with a metallic pendant swinging quietly across his skin, as if a silent companion on his journey.

He wore a loose, open white shirt with slightly tattered edges, as if it had seen many long journeys and hard days. The sleeves were rolled up to his elbows, with interwoven leather straps, perhaps to hold light weapons or gear. A sturdy leather strap crossed his shoulder, with faded metal buckles ready to fasten a heavy weapon or other equipment.

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In short, he looked like a seasoned pirate.

"What's your name?" Black Death looked at the man with a curious gaze.

Hearing the question, the man lifted his head and looked at Ren with a hint of respect, replying in a tired voice, "Silver Drak... the name's Silver Drak."

"A fine name. Well, Silver Drak, I have a proposal for you. Are you interested in becoming the Second Division Commander of the Sin Pirates Fleet and serving under me?"

Everyone waited in silence for Silver Drak's response. The pirates who had already joined Ren's fleet didn't seem to object; it was as if they recognized the identity of the person being offered the Second Division Commander role.

"I accept. From now on, I'm at your command, Captain!"

It seemed as if Silver Drak's face regained some life before he responded to Ren with newfound enthusiasm.

"Very good. Now, I have some instructions for you..."

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*Purururu...*

*Purururu...*

*Purururu...*

*Ka-tcha~!*

"Hello, Captain, is everything alright?"

Far from Fish-Man Island, a tall man was speaking through a Den Den Mushi.

It was none other than Mr. 1 from the former Baroque Works organization, now serving as the First Division Commander of the Sin Pirates Fleet, Daz Bones.

He had come under Ren's flag a few weeks ago and was tasked with recruiting fighters for the Sin Pirates Fleet, so he was currently sailing through the first half of the Grand Line.

He had even found some truly capable individuals.

Setting that aside, he was amazed by the recent events his captain played a central role in.

Especially when he read in the newspaper that Ren, along with Miss Nami and Miss Mikita, had taken down Whitebeard, he felt adrenaline rushing through his body at that moment.

As for the way he called Nami and Mikita, it was because he knew they were his captain's women, so he dared not show them disrespect!

Moreover, he knew of their formidable strength after their participation in the Paramount War, which deepened his fear and respect for his captain's women!

"I just wanted to check in on your situation over there. Have you recruited some people?"

Ren asked from the other end of the Den Den Mushi.

"Yes, Captain. There are a few promising recruits."

Ren paused briefly before adding, "And the cannon fodder?"

"I've gathered a few thousand as well," Daz Bones replied without delay, and the Den Den Mushi, mimicking Ren's features, nodded.

"Very good. Return to the main base in Alabasta; I have some rewards for you." Ren, satisfied with Daz Bones's performance, decided to reward him.

"On my way, Captain!" Daz Bones suppressed his excitement and responded promptly.

"Alright then, Get back to it ." Ren bid him farewell before ending the call.

*Ka-tcha~!*

Daz Bones set the Den Den Mushi aside and looked out over the sea, especially at the many pirate ships bearing the flag of the Sin Pirates.

On each of these ships were hundreds of recruits that Daz Bones had gathered. He didn't know exactly what his captain was planning, but he could feel the brewing storm on the horizon.

A fierce storm that would soon shake the world.

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To be continued....

500PS= Bonus chapter.


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