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Going off precedent from this author and 13 chapters, I can already tell this will be a great realistic Naruto fic that goes its on way and treads new ground. MC is intelligent, rational and pretty likeable because of it.
This plot is portrayed as something grim and dark survival, but the tone and writing is casual at best, more like slice-of-life in a modern world with ordinary humans than anything related to a complex shinobi world. The mc lacks sense of crisis, desperation, and caution, he's a weak scarred boy who seems more interested in making friends rather than to be an antagonist.
Interesting work, please keep updating. So far it feels like you are breathing new air in this Naruto world. Now I have to write to get the 100 characters full.
Yo Author, does this have any yuri in it? I avoid harems that make the women all bi just to make the harem part work. Also, will there be clone stuff?
Let's go baby. It's InGlorious' fanfic why do you even have to read review. Go read the novel. Everything he writes is gem. I read Epic of Leviathan, then Whatever it takes(Whoever feels whatever it's a friggin great fanfic although would like more consistent update). Now let's dive into this.
I have been readig this authors work for years. Starting with Epic of a Leviathan, and I can say with little doubt that few fan-fic authors are as good with long form stories as this one. I can not wait to see where this goes.
The writing quality, grammar, world building and background etc. are excellent as expected from the author if you have read his other works. However, the character design of the MC seems pretty bad, it is unclear if he has any cheats, he continuously wastes time, he knows from when he is 4 days old that he’s in the Naruto world but for 4 whole years he doesn’t do any training or preparation, he is continuously whining and cribbing like a 🐈, he has no drive at all and is frankly annoying! Still hopeful that the character will improve based on reading the other works of the author!
Going off precedent from this author and 13 chapters, I can already tell this will be a great realistic Naruto fic that goes its on way and treads new ground. MC is intelligent, rational and pretty likeable because of it.
This plot is portrayed as something grim and dark survival, but the tone and writing is casual at best, more like slice-of-life in a modern world with ordinary humans than anything related to a complex shinobi world. The mc lacks sense of crisis, desperation, and caution, he's a weak scarred boy who seems more interested in making friends rather than to be an antagonist.
Interesting work, please keep updating. So far it feels like you are breathing new air in this Naruto world. Now I have to write to get the 100 characters full.
Yo Author, does this have any yuri in it? I avoid harems that make the women all bi just to make the harem part work. Also, will there be clone stuff?
Let's go baby. It's InGlorious' fanfic why do you even have to read review. Go read the novel. Everything he writes is gem. I read Epic of Leviathan, then Whatever it takes(Whoever feels whatever it's a friggin great fanfic although would like more consistent update). Now let's dive into this.
I have been readig this authors work for years. Starting with Epic of a Leviathan, and I can say with little doubt that few fan-fic authors are as good with long form stories as this one. I can not wait to see where this goes.
The writing quality, grammar, world building and background etc. are excellent as expected from the author if you have read his other works. However, the character design of the MC seems pretty bad, it is unclear if he has any cheats, he continuously wastes time, he knows from when he is 4 days old that he’s in the Naruto world but for 4 whole years he doesn’t do any training or preparation, he is continuously whining and cribbing like a 🐈, he has no drive at all and is frankly annoying! Still hopeful that the character will improve based on reading the other works of the author!