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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnn ill wait and why is the last chapter is 6 months ago!?!! ill change this after the author make more chapter!!!!!
i won't say much about it but this one disappoints me even more then multiverse shope even tho it was bit interesting cuz of D. i just hope you drop or put on hold this and start writing what you already left I'll be grateful if you start with the original one it was great and chat group too
I am sorry [Not] but I have to give you a 1 star I have lost faith in you you drop it with out reaching 50 chapters............ ........... . . .
I really wish people calm down here and everywhere else. While I do wish for him to at least finish one story, having something to read is better then nothing. Also writing a story is hard. Try it if you will.
I changed my rating from 5 stars, it hasn't been updated in almost a month, sorry xd ..........................................................................................................................
I've been reading all your work for quite a while, subscribed too. But aim a little professionalism in your work. This is your responsibility if you have monetized a work To your readers, I know you have all the problems in RL. But that's no reason to make a problem of novels never having more than 50 chapters. You have to be strict with yourself, if you can't take responsibility then stop writing.
Never completes novel and reuses work. Also has a gal to have a patreon when he keeps dropping works. 💩 author lied about his last fic.
WARNING THIS A CHARLOTTES STORY EXPECT IT TO BE ABANDONED IN THE FORESEEABLE FUTURE.
Your fic is really... ....................................................................................................
author don't let these people get to you with the bad reviews. these people got Nothing better to do all day except for right bad reviews on every thing they don't like. keep up with the book I liked to read your books.
História muito bosta só macaco curte Espero que a história morra Ri bastante no capítulo 8, o meme é real feito para retardados...........
Mc acts like he reincarnates every week and knows everything about every universe. Ten year time skip of him accomplishing nothing. Posses another person's body and says he loves 'his' sister. Gets random system that let's him travel to other universes to deliver packages, while he's immune to literally an attack. His entire existence is being submissive that goes to other words to save women for worthless virtual currency. The characters are worthless, gendrbend Denji sob story. Procceds to go on a date with someone with smells worse than a dumbster. Doesn't have any freedom of his own, needs to get permission from his sister. The last 2 chapters make no sense, characters from different universes are in chainsaw man so you idea who they are. Plot entirety consists of his thoughts and info dumps, no direction random events slapped together.
I haven't read this, but the thing is always the same when it comes to this author. An MC that is totally filler while the author gives all the limelight to his favorite characters from the universe in question, an unconstructed plot full of random events that usually never end and build up in a loop, irrelevant secondary characters that only serve to aggrandize the author's favorites. Then repeat all of the above endlessly until the author gets bored with the story and does it again in another. In conclusion: Yes.
História muito boa Gostei da forma que ocorreu a mudança na primeira entrega Espero que a história continue Ri bastante no capítulo 8, o meme é real
I'm leaving a honest review. As of now only 9 chapters available. And also i hope ur doing fine author. Also this is a personal review if ur mad about it i dont care. Writing quality *2.8 in the first chapter 60% of its content are cliche, over used waking up, trap in a baby body yadayada also the way of writing is very boring and basic i suggest you a fic with good quality writing ''I realy dont want to be a trainer'' a pokemon fic. i dont know if its original or translation but its good. Stability Updates dunno about this one so *5 next Story development *2 well its basically 1+1=2 but instead you got -1 thats how the development is, suggest to change it. character design *1 uhh mc not that much background story, some are copypaste, also mc is a typical cliche . suggest to add some original with little or normal BG maybe 2 or 3 OG characters butit depends on you, World background.... Same with story development 1+1=-1 you could just change it instead of 1+1 maybe 1x1= 1 hhaha lol like change the devil like instead of fear of human change it to curse energy like in you know what anime and make the devil smarter for an increase in dificulty... yeah most fanfic uses on fixed dificulty and thats boring.. of yea *0.5 not that much effort..
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Good luck I guess?... Fan of your books from the day i joined web novel I guess? So,for making me smile all that time, Here a 5 star without reading the book.
Nnnnnnnnnnannaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiioooooooonnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaa...............................................................................................................................
Please please please I beg you to keep writing a story and not stop. I know you have your own life and I respect that, but you always write an amazing story but you stop updating. I mean, can't you focus on one story and give it all your effort, by the way, I haven't read the story yet, but I will. I give it 5 stars because I'm sure it's amazing
I'm your fan Charlottes, so I will always support you no matter what happens. Even though some say that you abandoned your novel halfway, For me it doesn't matter because every novel you write always entertains me. By the way, try making a fic about the group chat system.
мне нравилась 1 версия по этому жду продолжение с денджи и дьяволами а так же доставки в разные миры прикольная тема надеюсь её хорошо реализуют
Of course, give him 1 star if you are going to leave a review, he doesn't deserve support if he leaves the novel halfway. .............................................
I have completely lost faith in you, the average of your novels does not exceed 50 chapters, you always leave them all halfway, there are already some that have been abandoned for two years and are much better than they are, for example Tadano's second fic, you left it in the best part. And you still dare to sponsor and talk about your Patron, poor guys who pay the subscription waiting for something that will never come. 😒
i will wait till the chapters is 50 but welcome back au thor. hope you been well Gambare!!
the original was better. ......................................................................................................................................................
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnn ill wait and why is the last chapter is 6 months ago!?!! ill change this after the author make more chapter!!!!!
i won't say much about it but this one disappoints me even more then multiverse shope even tho it was bit interesting cuz of D. i just hope you drop or put on hold this and start writing what you already left I'll be grateful if you start with the original one it was great and chat group too
I am sorry [Not] but I have to give you a 1 star I have lost faith in you you drop it with out reaching 50 chapters............ ........... . . .
I really wish people calm down here and everywhere else. While I do wish for him to at least finish one story, having something to read is better then nothing. Also writing a story is hard. Try it if you will.
I changed my rating from 5 stars, it hasn't been updated in almost a month, sorry xd ..........................................................................................................................
I've been reading all your work for quite a while, subscribed too. But aim a little professionalism in your work. This is your responsibility if you have monetized a work To your readers, I know you have all the problems in RL. But that's no reason to make a problem of novels never having more than 50 chapters. You have to be strict with yourself, if you can't take responsibility then stop writing.
Never completes novel and reuses work. Also has a gal to have a patreon when he keeps dropping works. 💩 author lied about his last fic.
WARNING THIS A CHARLOTTES STORY EXPECT IT TO BE ABANDONED IN THE FORESEEABLE FUTURE.
Your fic is really... ....................................................................................................
author don't let these people get to you with the bad reviews. these people got Nothing better to do all day except for right bad reviews on every thing they don't like. keep up with the book I liked to read your books.
História muito bosta só macaco curte Espero que a história morra Ri bastante no capítulo 8, o meme é real feito para retardados...........
Mc acts like he reincarnates every week and knows everything about every universe. Ten year time skip of him accomplishing nothing. Posses another person's body and says he loves 'his' sister. Gets random system that let's him travel to other universes to deliver packages, while he's immune to literally an attack. His entire existence is being submissive that goes to other words to save women for worthless virtual currency. The characters are worthless, gendrbend Denji sob story. Procceds to go on a date with someone with smells worse than a dumbster. Doesn't have any freedom of his own, needs to get permission from his sister. The last 2 chapters make no sense, characters from different universes are in chainsaw man so you idea who they are. Plot entirety consists of his thoughts and info dumps, no direction random events slapped together.
I haven't read this, but the thing is always the same when it comes to this author. An MC that is totally filler while the author gives all the limelight to his favorite characters from the universe in question, an unconstructed plot full of random events that usually never end and build up in a loop, irrelevant secondary characters that only serve to aggrandize the author's favorites. Then repeat all of the above endlessly until the author gets bored with the story and does it again in another. In conclusion: Yes.
História muito boa Gostei da forma que ocorreu a mudança na primeira entrega Espero que a história continue Ri bastante no capítulo 8, o meme é real
I'm leaving a honest review. As of now only 9 chapters available. And also i hope ur doing fine author. Also this is a personal review if ur mad about it i dont care. Writing quality *2.8 in the first chapter 60% of its content are cliche, over used waking up, trap in a baby body yadayada also the way of writing is very boring and basic i suggest you a fic with good quality writing ''I realy dont want to be a trainer'' a pokemon fic. i dont know if its original or translation but its good. Stability Updates dunno about this one so *5 next Story development *2 well its basically 1+1=2 but instead you got -1 thats how the development is, suggest to change it. character design *1 uhh mc not that much background story, some are copypaste, also mc is a typical cliche . suggest to add some original with little or normal BG maybe 2 or 3 OG characters butit depends on you, World background.... Same with story development 1+1=-1 you could just change it instead of 1+1 maybe 1x1= 1 hhaha lol like change the devil like instead of fear of human change it to curse energy like in you know what anime and make the devil smarter for an increase in dificulty... yeah most fanfic uses on fixed dificulty and thats boring.. of yea *0.5 not that much effort..
just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts
Good luck I guess?... Fan of your books from the day i joined web novel I guess? So,for making me smile all that time, Here a 5 star without reading the book.
Nnnnnnnnnnannaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiioooooooonnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaa...............................................................................................................................
Please please please I beg you to keep writing a story and not stop. I know you have your own life and I respect that, but you always write an amazing story but you stop updating. I mean, can't you focus on one story and give it all your effort, by the way, I haven't read the story yet, but I will. I give it 5 stars because I'm sure it's amazing
I'm your fan Charlottes, so I will always support you no matter what happens. Even though some say that you abandoned your novel halfway, For me it doesn't matter because every novel you write always entertains me. By the way, try making a fic about the group chat system.
мне нравилась 1 версия по этому жду продолжение с денджи и дьяволами а так же доставки в разные миры прикольная тема надеюсь её хорошо реализуют
Of course, give him 1 star if you are going to leave a review, he doesn't deserve support if he leaves the novel halfway. .............................................
I have completely lost faith in you, the average of your novels does not exceed 50 chapters, you always leave them all halfway, there are already some that have been abandoned for two years and are much better than they are, for example Tadano's second fic, you left it in the best part. And you still dare to sponsor and talk about your Patron, poor guys who pay the subscription waiting for something that will never come. 😒
i will wait till the chapters is 50 but welcome back au thor. hope you been well Gambare!!
the original was better. ......................................................................................................................................................