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Jonathan_Zarco

I have completely lost faith in you, the average of your novels does not exceed 50 chapters, you always leave them all halfway, there are already some that have been abandoned for two years and are much better than they are, for example Tadano's second fic, you left it in the best part. And you still dare to sponsor and talk about your Patron, poor guys who pay the subscription waiting for something that will never come. 😒

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Jonathan_Zarco

Of course, give him 1 star if you are going to leave a review, he doesn't deserve support if he leaves the novel halfway. .............................................

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_Pochitalover_

I haven't read this, but the thing is always the same when it comes to this author. An MC that is totally filler while the author gives all the limelight to his favorite characters from the universe in question, an unconstructed plot full of random events that usually never end and build up in a loop, irrelevant secondary characters that only serve to aggrandize the author's favorites. Then repeat all of the above endlessly until the author gets bored with the story and does it again in another. In conclusion: Yes.

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TopG_withBigD

i will wait till the chapters is 50 but welcome back au thor. hope you been well Gambare!!

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EvilBlueCrystal

Mc acts like he reincarnates every week and knows everything about every universe. Ten year time skip of him accomplishing nothing. Posses another person's body and says he loves 'his' sister. Gets random system that let's him travel to other universes to deliver packages, while he's immune to literally an attack. His entire existence is being submissive that goes to other words to save women for worthless virtual currency. The characters are worthless, gendrbend Denji sob story. Procceds to go on a date with someone with smells worse than a dumbster. Doesn't have any freedom of his own, needs to get permission from his sister. The last 2 chapters make no sense, characters from different universes are in chainsaw man so you idea who they are. Plot entirety consists of his thoughts and info dumps, no direction random events slapped together.

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VirginYoungMaster

I'm leaving a honest review. As of now only 9 chapters available. And also i hope ur doing fine author. Also this is a personal review if ur mad about it i dont care. Writing quality *2.8 in the first chapter 60% of its content are cliche, over used waking up, trap in a baby body yadayada also the way of writing is very boring and basic i suggest you a fic with good quality writing ''I realy dont want to be a trainer'' a pokemon fic. i dont know if its original or translation but its good. Stability Updates dunno about this one so *5 next Story development *2 well its basically 1+1=2 but instead you got -1 thats how the development is, suggest to change it. character design *1 uhh mc not that much background story, some are copypaste, also mc is a typical cliche . suggest to add some original with little or normal BG maybe 2 or 3 OG characters butit depends on you, World background.... Same with story development 1+1=-1 you could just change it instead of 1+1 maybe 1x1= 1 hhaha lol like change the devil like instead of fear of human change it to curse energy like in you know what anime and make the devil smarter for an increase in dificulty... yeah most fanfic uses on fixed dificulty and thats boring.. of yea *0.5 not that much effort..

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Arthur1234

I am sorry [Not] but I have to give you a 1 star I have lost faith in you you drop it with out reaching 50 chapters............ ........... . . .

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Takkaza

welcome back Thor, hope you finish it this time.

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Kenji_Shimura

WARNING THIS A CHARLOTTES STORY EXPECT IT TO BE ABANDONED IN THE FORESEEABLE FUTURE.

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Gerkomma

just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts just helping against author alt accounts

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Roze_Lime

I'm your fan Charlottes, so I will always support you no matter what happens. Even though some say that you abandoned your novel halfway, For me it doesn't matter because every novel you write always entertains me. By the way, try making a fic about the group chat system.

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Gman2123

Never completes novel and reuses work. Also has a gal to have a patreon when he keeps dropping works. 💩 author lied about his last fic.

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DaoistyPUrU2

author don't let these people get to you with the bad reviews. these people got Nothing better to do all day except for right bad reviews on every thing they don't like. keep up with the book I liked to read your books.

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iffats

Nnnnnnnnnnannaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiioooooooonnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaa...............................................................................................................................

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kujiki

I've been reading all your work for quite a while, subscribed too. But aim a little professionalism in your work. This is your responsibility if you have monetized a work To your readers, I know you have all the problems in RL. But that's no reason to make a problem of novels never having more than 50 chapters. You have to be strict with yourself, if you can't take responsibility then stop writing.

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MacKenzie_50943

Like the story so far can't wait for more

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MacKenzie_50943

good story so far just hoping he could update more

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Bebells

Bem Vindo de volta, autor!!

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Thorok_Thorok

Here we go again. We Are waiting for More chapters

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Shadow_of_Zero

the original was better. ......................................................................................................................................................