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Arlow found himself unluckily in front of a terrifying entity after his death. The entity claimed that his soul had made its way outside of the afterlife and the entity wanted to do something nice for once. It claimed that it wanted to reincarnate him with 3 wishes, without any limits on the power behind them.

There's just one problem. Arlow has an incredibly rare gift, he can know lies when he hears them. He doesn't know how this gift worked, but it had always accompanied him since he was born.

And this entity... was lying.

...
Join Arlow as he accidentally creates the 40k universe and watches it all unfold. How will he interact with the various races that appear? Read to find out.

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Knights_Errant

You are quite talented at writing guardsman.Hmm? what's this? you are dropping the fic? That's understandabl... stand against that wall guardsman. *bang*

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1yr
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Daz_Art

all I gotta say is the main character is not the main character but a plot device. dont read if you want a story about the main character. this story is just the authors retelling of war hammer lore witha bit of the au sprinkled in. bad story basically but hats just my incredibly good oppinion.

11mth
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Yuna_sama

Such a lovely change of pace compared to other 40k fanfics, I love it… I hope it keeps going. Definitely not what I was expecting from 40k lol.

1yr
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PelerinliKeltos

I'm extremely curious to see the main character's relationship with the Emperor of mankind.

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Danny_Butts

why why must this be so God dang GOOD and so God dang SHORT !!! haha . . . sigh I suppose that's the trade off for both high quality chapters and daily updates huh 10 out of 10 do recommend

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1yr
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Holy_Sheep

a great start to the story hope you continue it and don't drop it .....................................................................................

1yr
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Dominic_Zibuda

This is probably the best book this month, and maybe these last few months. I hope it gets all the recognition it deserves.

1yr
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Linus279

For everyone who expected a Story about an Main Charakter will be dissapointed. Some Side Charakter have mote Screentime than him. And If you expect Action this is also not for you. And If you Like an Naive MC to the Point where He gets sealed away than this Story is for you.

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8mth
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ManasCiel

I don’t know much about the 40k universe but I found this enjoyable to read! Also the people complaining about the mc not being the mc are dumber than the korks, from what little I know about 40k, it is big with lots going on, so the author is setting up the world while also developing the characters of those he will use. Definitely worth a read! A try atleast!

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
moh999

this is an absolute gem, I loved reading every word of it, it's so rare to have a warhammer fiction on this app, let alone one so good, extra points for having zero romance, another point for sticking to the Lore as much as possible even if the war in heaven was never discussed as intensively as you have done, so in short.. Love It and Totally recommended

9mth
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Freelancerok

Study the history of warhammer 40k. And if you're writing fan fiction, then spend more time with your main character!

11mth
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Dr_Void

has a great start continue as you are going and it will become great man!

11mth
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Jean_Ricardo

Very good......................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
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Mr_Macaw

Best fanfic of Warhammer 40K for me, Don't drop please.........................................................................................................

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ImWatchingYou

Is this Warhammer???????¿...........................…...................... .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,

11mth
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Daoist_david

this is the best 40k fanfic (probably). Best fic

11mth
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_DEKIM_

I don't say this often but this work has no flaws. I'm not saying it's perfect. But it has no flaws✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

11mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
CLO2610

This is good i need more................

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1yr
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_VOIDLESS_

The progression of the story is mid not to fast not to slow just have the right pace to it. I can wait and see what you vision for the future is.

1yr
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Daoist632842

I like how the story is progressing thus far.I would like see how c'tan are created and evolution of the universe.keep up the good work 👏.

1yr
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  4. 4
    Meeting the Great Spirit 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Discussion and Influence 1 years ago
  6. 6
    Returning and Unwanted Beings 1 years ago
  7. 7
    The Great Counsel's Uproar 1 years ago
  8. 8
    The Completion of the Webway 1 years ago
  9. 9
    The Apemen and Necrontyr 1 years ago
  10. 10
    Fated Meeting 1 years ago
  11. 11
    Necrontyr Negotiations and Quantum Organics 1 years ago
  12. 12
    The Choran Gland 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Important Moment In Time 1 years ago
  14. 14
    The Necrontyr of Jericho Reach 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Mephet'ran, God of Truth 1 years ago
  16. 16
    Negotiations and Counsel Demands 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Moment of Timelines 12 months ago
  18. 18
    Desperate Transformation 12 months ago
  19. 19
    Aftermath 11 months ago
  20. 20
    The C'tan's Gratitude 11 months ago
  21. 21
    Tragedy of the Necrontyr 11 months ago
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    Dark Tidings 11 months ago
  23. 23
    War Races 11 months ago
  24. 24
    Eighty Years of War 11 months ago
  25. 25
    Pop's Boyz 11 months ago
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    Approaching 11 months ago
  27. 27
    Extermination 11 months ago
  28. 28
    Despair? What's that? 11 months ago
  29. 29
    Meteoric Fall 11 months ago
  30. 30
    Cornered 11 months ago
  31. 31
    Ruthless Stardeath 11 months ago
  32. 32
    Unity Among Monsters 11 months ago
  33. 33
    Aeldari Artificial Gods 11 months ago
  34. 34
    An Impossibly Long War 11 months ago
  35. 35
    Cathedral In The Abyss 11 months ago
  36. 36
    Lord of Incensia; The Highest Light 11 months ago
  37. 37
    Cheating the Game 10 months ago
  38. 38
    Small Ember of the Great Flame 10 months ago
  39. 39
    Plotting the Plotter 8 months ago
  40. 40
    Bug of the Void 8 months ago
  41. 41
    POPZ! 8 months ago
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    Reunion 8 months ago

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