Honkai Impact : The Rise Herrscher of Shadow

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The_Hanged_Man1

I wrote this novel because I love the game Honkai Impact 3, and imagined there would be a happy ending without yuri, or something like that.

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AshuraMikoto

all i can hope is that the author saves himeko from death i just dont want to see her die ill keep it at 5stars rn but if they let himeko die ill make it 1 star

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vic_adam

A pretty average story, apart from the horrible World Background it's a bit of fun to read. (In the middle of reading an editor who looks like a teenager calling for attention keeps adding notes making the book even worse... )

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Void_Queen

Super Honkai Impact fan-fic, I hope you don't give up and come to the end of this story or I will cry. And I can't wait to see the MC acquire the powers of the Shadow Monarch and become the 15th Herrscher: The Herrscher of Shadow.

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Kaniion

It's a very interesting story and so far it has good character development. I hope it stays that way and don't drop the story like most Honkai here please.

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Lazyboi

Giving 5 stars as a encouragement due to the fact that there are very few high word count Honkai fic with male mc and no yuri pairings. Also a harem lover so if this fic has that then it would truly make my day.

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N1ght_Shad0w

(I put a lot of 4, because I am very scrupulous and strict) So, please do not reverse my grammar, because it is bad. But this does not prevent me from fully understanding and translating English speech or text into another language. And as a translator(About which the author knows because I asked him for permission), I will note for the author that together with my team, I have already translated and even polished the text itself in the amount of 18 chapters. So let's start with the pros. First, the plot:The plot is good, very good, not too fast, not too slow. Tightens, sometimes even makes you exclaim: "Aaaah, so that's the catch," and we have to admit, sometimes he evokes a smile. Let's be honest, the author has good help and he, like everyone else, has something to strive for (But this does not mean that you need to do it like some (Or rather, delete chapters and say: "Ay, I'll rewrite." NO !!! In no case No! You need to change, improve the work after it is completely written, otherwise the work will lie like a dead weight at the bottom of your memory)). The second is the characters: They are good, they have elaboration and development, you see how they gradually change their attitude, you feel some kind of "life"! Third - text: I'll be honest, being somewhat of a "scientist", I didn't mention one very important thing at first... The text at the beginning looks like "dry" laying out of facts (I looked there. Lives there. Something happened.). In translation, everything looks exactly like this, and it was because of this that everything had to be pretty polished. Namely, to make a "softer" transition between paragraphs, slightly changing the direct speech, adding idioms and adverbs. But I admit, the situation in the following chapters got a little better. (Of course, maybe I'm nitpicking, and all because it's a translation? Or maybe I'm just nitpicking) Fourth - stability: BEAUTIFUL! My regards! Well, the fifth - the world: This is fanfiction, so there's not much to say here. The author did something that was not in the game, he created explanations for some misunderstandings (Especially why there are only WAIFU in the world). There are some inaccuracies, inconsistencies... I won’t specify, because you have to sit and look for it (If I didn’t remember the very fact of their findings, I would put 5) Drawing conclusions: The work is good and worth reading. It has its pros and cons, like other jobs. Perhaps a huge plus is that the author does not rush to rewrite the work, because somewhere he might not get something or he might have a desire to rewrite something. Yes, and the frequency of chapters and the absence of breaks give a HUGE credibility to the author. And a good plot and a slow increase in the quality of work, allows you to place BIG hopes. I thank the author for the good work and for the fact that he does not give up fanfiction. And I sincerely hope he doesn't. And I hope he doesn't start rewriting it before he's done. Good luck and all the best.

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Nova_979

Cerita nya bagus tapi ada terlalu banyak kata" yang di ulangi thor dan kata" yang tidak berguna masih banyak lah kekurangan nya tapi masih bagus cerita nya jadi tolong thor di perhatikan kata" nya thor oh ya ini cuma pendapat saya aja thor jangan di masuk kan di hati +-+-+-+

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Abhay_Hegde

This is one of the best if not the best honkai story i've ever read the plot development, characters growth, MC growth in strength is remarkable I've got more to say but not now some other time overall it's a really good story and recommend others to try it.

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Lao_Stev

Just some moral support. Don't give up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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TypeMoM

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Vitor_Lindo

Eu li até o cão 160 Hola o protagonista e quem nem o Issei denso lixo de mas meu deus vontade de bota 100 negão para comer o boga desse MC cara AFF não tenho paciência não tchau ator ............,.....,........................m.m.m.m.m..a.a.a..a....a.a.a.a.a..aa..a.a.a.a....a.a.a..a...a.a.....a.aa.aa..a.a.a..aa..a.aa...a.a..a

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SilverWlf

An overall amazing story. There are hiccups with update stability here and there but Author-sama will let us know if they're gonna take a break. I will say though, this is a Honkai fanfic, expect DEPRESSION to hit.

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Psan

lets give this a go.... its really to bad there are 0 lemons on this and that mc seems to be a dense beta

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Nekomiko_succubus

well, i will give this for now............. if you do that thing again,,,,,,,,,,, welp, there's a lot of readers will drop again...................

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Lao_Stev

Great chapter(144) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DaoistjcJwtW

Muy buena la historia pero quería hacer una pregunta en la historia sería bueno no se que elisya siga viva que este en el harén del prota que ella sinceramente no me gustó la muerte de elisya lo demás está todo bien pero elysia es una waifu era por preguntar si la salva si o no?

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Diky_Maulana

Maaf sebelumnya saya pakai bahasa Indonesia.. akan merepotkan kalau harus saya terjemahkan ke bahasa Inggris.. Saya hanya mengatakan bahwa ini adalah fanfic yang bagus dan sangat menarik... Saya suka jalan ceritanya dan saya harap ada perkembangan kisah cinta diantara MC dengan para heroin di kisah ini... Semangat author..saya dukung karya anda

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Hollow_Moon

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Atodan_Parijogo

Out of all the honkai impact fanfics I’ve read this might be one of my favourite because unlike other fanfics there are some OCs that’s way too OP from the start. I hope the author doesn’t drop this story.