5รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
doing this cause there's someone who is 1 staring because of the word count chapter. while I dislike word count chapters, i hate people do reveiw negatively without any type of input.
The only 3 chapters I read were nice and funny, recommended .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This is the first time I’ve seen MC being merchant that travel through the multiverse. This will be a very interesting story because MC seem just having fun and trolling people and making them think about what’s the meaning life when he speaks to them. Thank you for the opportunity to allow me to read this novel to experience this wonderful and unique story.
Good grammar and writing, maybe annoying mc for you? but worst of all the story basically starts halfway through with zero context and a well established op mc with everything already. danmachi fic tho!
doing this cause there's someone who is 1 staring because of the word count chapter. while I dislike word count chapters, i hate people do reveiw negatively without any type of input.
The only 3 chapters I read were nice and funny, recommended .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
words ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ountswords ounts words ounts
This is the first time I’ve seen MC being merchant that travel through the multiverse. This will be a very interesting story because MC seem just having fun and trolling people and making them think about what’s the meaning life when he speaks to them. Thank you for the opportunity to allow me to read this novel to experience this wonderful and unique story.
Good grammar and writing, maybe annoying mc for you? but worst of all the story basically starts halfway through with zero context and a well established op mc with everything already. danmachi fic tho!