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Dude,Are you well ?, it's been a while since you released chapters of other stories and the ones you do release are taking a long time to wait
L’auteur ne finit jamais une seule histoire qu’il commence, il est évident qu’il ne planifie pas l’histoire jusqu’à la fin, il écrit alors qu’il pense que ça va être intéressant et il l’abandonne quand il ne le pense pas. Il écrit quelques douzaines de chapitres, puis les laisse tomber, comme toutes ses autres 14~ histoires
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх not bed
The author never finishes even a single story he starts, It's apparent that he doesn't plan the story until the end, he writes while he thinks it's going to be interesting and drops it when he doesn't think so. he writes a few dozen chapters and then drop it, just like all his other 14~ stories
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Esperaba más tecnología nano máquinas similares ala dela novela de artes marciales nanomachin y poderes similares del personaje de Qubit de Irredeemable comic La relación entre Artemisa y Wally es uno de los mejores no lo arruines wey
Cool i like this novels wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow
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Dude it is really good but could you please concentrate o two or three novels cause you have like 7. Please just dont continue making new ones
As of right now(chap11) I really like it There’ great build up going on , the characters are really
great book and I love that the character are fleshed out but also not overly, I hope to see how you can make this fic sore to ever greater heights now that you have adopted it and I hope you update it regularly with the same quality as before, thank you and good luck 👍
Dude,Are you well ?, it's been a while since you released chapters of other stories and the ones you do release are taking a long time to wait
L’auteur ne finit jamais une seule histoire qu’il commence, il est évident qu’il ne planifie pas l’histoire jusqu’à la fin, il écrit alors qu’il pense que ça va être intéressant et il l’abandonne quand il ne le pense pas. Il écrit quelques douzaines de chapitres, puis les laisse tomber, comme toutes ses autres 14~ histoires
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх хахахахахахаххх not bed
The author never finishes even a single story he starts, It's apparent that he doesn't plan the story until the end, he writes while he thinks it's going to be interesting and drops it when he doesn't think so. he writes a few dozen chapters and then drop it, just like all his other 14~ stories
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Esperaba más tecnología nano máquinas similares ala dela novela de artes marciales nanomachin y poderes similares del personaje de Qubit de Irredeemable comic La relación entre Artemisa y Wally es uno de los mejores no lo arruines wey
Cool i like this novels wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow wooooooooooooow
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Dude it is really good but could you please concentrate o two or three novels cause you have like 7. Please just dont continue making new ones
As of right now(chap11) I really like it There’ great build up going on , the characters are really
great book and I love that the character are fleshed out but also not overly, I hope to see how you can make this fic sore to ever greater heights now that you have adopted it and I hope you update it regularly with the same quality as before, thank you and good luck 👍
does anyone have arokey's discord? if there is, pls drop👍
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